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reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:11 pm

jsilver wrote:gettin close to done on this nonsense

http://soundcloud.com/jsilver/group-hom ... lver-remix

page 62

I think there's still some mastering to be done, there's some sounds, like your bassline, that should stand out abit more.
Also I'm missing some drops, they don't have to be like 'STOP -> GO' but you could mix in some subtle drops

Overall has a nice sound, I don't know the original song but the remix sounds good.

Some song I started on with the DSF package, after hearing most of the entries I thought I'd try to make something cool aswell

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/270092

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:09 pm

jsilver wrote:gettin close to done on this nonsense

http://soundcloud.com/jsilver/group-hom ... lver-remix

page 62

\/ thanks for listening and crit!

think the loop you're remixing is very remixable! idea is good! you need to EQ your kick more with the original kick of the song, I don't think thta hat you have mixes with the song so try to find something more subtle, the bassline works, boost it! it's needs to be there, and indeed, look for a subtle drop... maybe reverse the loop for 1/4 at the end and do some stuff with that..

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:23 pm

Reignz wrote:
jsilver wrote:gettin close to done on this nonsense

http://soundcloud.com/jsilver/group-hom ... lver-remix

page 62

I think there's still some mastering to be done, there's some sounds, like your bassline, that should stand out abit more.
Also I'm missing some drops, they don't have to be like 'STOP -> GO' but you could mix in some subtle drops
Overall has a nice sound, I don't know the original song but the remix sounds good.

Some song I started on with the DSF package, after hearing most of the entries I thought I'd try to make something cool aswell

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/270092

ah yeah feeling the vibe man! finish it!

oh, maybe some reggae stabs or something reggae-ish.

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:26 pm

Was wondering if anyone else would like to crit my song, any and all would be great! thanks...its on the soundcloud.

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:34 pm

Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/evoluti ... n-progress

will give feedback to anyone who gives feedback to me, as standard, feedback on soundcloud more appreciated, since this thread moves fast, just tell me what track you need feedback on

I listened to your tune and I definitly like it! It's very warm and subtle, actually a dark deep feel good track... not much to comment on, the EQing is very nicely done,.. exciting track!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:39 pm

drenster wrote:Was wondering if anyone else would like to crit my song, any and all would be great! thanks...its on the soundcloud.

when your wobbly wobble bass drops I get the impression that the harmonics are off... it's also very *There*, maybe turn down the volume... I love the break, fuck dubstep traditions, do your own thing, creative! it's getting there... do some reading on harmonics and EQing in the bible... also i'm missing some structure in the song, maybe a simple lead will fix that!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:43 pm

pah jé wrote:bacon wrapped dub in the works...

http://soundcloud.com/pahje/pah-je-baco ... ub-9-3-lim

catchy track man! I love how the basslead sounds like a singer, or how the fuck am I supposed to explain that, like it's telling a story, singing a story. fuck im too stoned to explain... good track, I like it!

Sinus Sawtooth · Post by **Sinus Sawtooth** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:45 pm

Nearly finished a new one, still some mixing to do, maybe tweak the bass a bit... very excited for comments and critisism!!

http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:54 pm

@roodbwoy

thanks for the input! working on it right now....specially after 'the bible' and what mac had to say

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:29 pm

roodbwoy wrote:Nearly finished a new one, still some mixing to do, maybe tweak the bass a bit... very excited for comments and critisism!!

http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

Great work of vocals and bass sound, aswell as the spooky/moody lead synth. Mastering is very good aswell.
Only thing that might be better is maybe get a heavier kick, this one sounds dry while I think you should try a heavy fucking banging kick ^^

Thanks for the tip about the reggae notes I should add to my song, it was just the thing it needed, so newer version incoming soon.

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:14 pm

roodbwoy wrote:
Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/evoluti ... n-progress

will give feedback to anyone who gives feedback to me, as standard, feedback on soundcloud more appreciated, since this thread moves fast, just tell me what track you need feedback on
I listened to your tune and I definitly like it! It's very warm and subtle, actually a dark deep feel good track... not much to comment on, the EQing is very nicely done,.. exciting track!

There is hardly any EQing in there mate if I am honest, just a little bit on the pad what zooms in it and out and a tiny bit of filtering on the lead, 'bout it! But thanks for the feedback!

roodbwoy wrote:Nearly finished a new one, still some mixing to do, maybe tweak the bass a bit... very excited for comments and critisism!!

http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

Wow this tune is quite, unexpected haha, the drum work is great, the bass is dirty and in your face (but it works) and sick left 4 dead sample, the mix sounds fresh too

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:27 pm

Legendary wrote:
roodbwoy wrote:
Legendary wrote:http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/evoluti ... n-progress

will give feedback to anyone who gives feedback to me, as standard, feedback on soundcloud more appreciated, since this thread moves fast, just tell me what track you need feedback on
I listened to your tune and I definitly like it! It's very warm and subtle, actually a dark deep feel good track... not much to comment on, the EQing is very nicely done,.. exciting track!
There is hardly any EQing in there mate if I am honest, just a little bit on the pad what zooms in it and out and a tiny bit of filtering on the lead, 'bout it! But thanks for the feedback!

roodbwoy wrote:Nearly finished a new one, still some mixing to do, maybe tweak the bass a bit... very excited for comments and critisism!!

http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress
Wow this tune is quite, unexpected haha, the drum work is great, the bass is dirty and in your face (but it works) and sick left 4 dead sample, the mix sounds fresh too

If you just pay attention while producing your track, EQing afterwards isn't always neccesary, but still very nicely done, I like the flow, the track never gets boring and I gotta love your drum track man.

So thanks to roodboy, nearly finished version of my latest track:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/270177

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:57 pm

^

I like it once it drops, both times but I don't like the intro with the skippy drums, it kinda makes it hard to get into the drum work is big though and the melody is nice and all the random sounds - good work! I'd work on the breakdown/intro though

bradicle · Post by **bradicle** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 12:42 am

roodbwoy wrote:Nearly finished a new one, still some mixing to do, maybe tweak the bass a bit... very excited for comments and critisism!!

http://soundcloud.com/sinus-sawtooth/si ... n-progress

Holy. I fkn love it

. Great work man. I think that's perfect.

Some more feedback on mine please. I just got some great feedback and took it on board and changed it up a little bit. It's more chilled out than going filthy

.

http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-ambient

jsilver · Post by **jsilver** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:48 am

thanks for checkin rudebwoy, appreciate that

owlbeat · Post by **owlbeat** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 3:12 am

this is a track ive been working on. its only received a rough mix inside Live.

i think my weak points are many at this point, in particular my arrangement. so if anyone has any good criticisms/advice, thatd be awesome!

http://soundcloud.com/grimmlord/ghoul-w ... -rough-mix

bradicle · Post by **bradicle** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:23 am

owlbeat wrote:this is a track ive been working on. its only received a rough mix inside Live.

i think my weak points are many at this point, in particular my arrangement. so if anyone has any good criticisms/advice, thatd be awesome!

http://soundcloud.com/grimmlord/ghoul-w ... -rough-mix

Hrmm the track for me kinda sounds monotoned. Needs some little builds in there and a bit of hype IMO. Others may say different. Depends what you're really trying to accomplish I guess. Maybe add a synth or something in there, spice it up? Better kicks/snares/claps?

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:53 am

Bradicle wrote:
Holy. I fkn love it . Great work man. I think that's perfect.

Some more feedback on mine please. I just got some great feedback and took it on board and changed it up a little bit. It's more chilled out than going filthy .

http://soundcloud.com/bradicle/bradicle-ambient

I really like the sound once the bass kicks in, I think you should try to put some breaks in the subbass , so it doesn't sound so plain, and you get a more dubstep sound if that's what you're looking for.
Masteringwise, there's some work on boosting some sounds, like your bass can be abit louder, and your kick abit heavier , less dry (try a small boost at 100-150Hz and cut at 300+ Hz)

owlbeat wrote:this is a track ive been working on. its only received a rough mix inside Live.

i think my weak points are many at this point, in particular my arrangement. so if anyone has any good criticisms/advice, thatd be awesome!

http://soundcloud.com/grimmlord/ghoul-w ... -rough-mix

This sounds way too plain man, drums need more work, you need a solid subline aswell m8.
Gets better at 2.20 but it'd still be alot better with better drums and a bassline.

steshine · Post by **steshine** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:03 am

http://soundcloud.com/ste-shine

Please openly criticize... i know it's no where near perfect but tell me what you reckon....

cheers

dj dirty pimp · Post by **dj dirty pimp** » Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:51 am

hi all. im new to these forums. just posting up audio of my 2nd ever dubstep track. Ive been producing drum and bass for about 3 years so im not new to production! love dubstep and thought id give it a try and im really enjoying making it, so creative,

hope you like my track, and i hope its not too cheesey (jump up ish)

construcitve critisism very welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/dirty-pimp

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