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albo
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TECHNO GASH - Brand New Stomping Choon FREE DOWNLOAD

Post by albo » Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:31 am

New tune I'm making,
Would find it extremely useful to have some feedback.... PLEASE!

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Post by kraftpeanutbutterbear » Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:11 am

downloading thanks 8)
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nice

Post by alfordtq1 » Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:49 pm

nice intro man the bassline is good but if was a little more grimy would be a sick tune if u finish and are happy wud love a 320 :)
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nice

Post by alfordtq1 » Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:49 pm

nice intro man the bassline is good but if was a little more grimy would be a sick tune if u finish and are happy wud love a 320 :)
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Post by albo » Tue Sep 08, 2009 5:24 pm

Cheers for the feedback! :D

Grimey in what way? An oozing, dirty bassline?
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Post by oli90 » Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:31 am

"Try layering the bass with a sub if you think it sounds thin" :cheesy:
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Post by albo » Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:46 am

hmm, ok cheers oli90 i'll see how it go's 8)
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Post by fuzz_2k » Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:12 pm

turn the sample up a bit cant really here what he's sayin :(

the rest of it sounds algood...

is that a youngone's sample btw??
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Post by actraiser » Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:58 pm

saw it was new and wanted to add some constructive criticism but the track is horrible.. really harsh on the ears. no soul here at all.. sorry
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Post by oli90 » Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:22 am

That's a bit harsh man :( Everyone starts somewhere, you could at least give a few pointers.
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albo
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Post by albo » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:48 am

Haha, Sorry Actraiser, I'm very new, and maybe not your sort of thing?

Probably is too harsh on the old lug holes, I was going for a raw noise and maybe went too far?

Thanks for the feedback everyone! Extremely useful! :)
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Post by ReturnTrip » Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:08 am

ReturnTrip - Brutalism vol.04
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Post by cyberdyne » Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:13 am

kicks too pissant

the noise synths are up too loud and too frequent...need to fade them back and polish them a bit...just cant have them that raw...too harsh
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