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pah jÃ© · Post by **pah jÃ©** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:14 pm

roodbwoy wrote:
pah jé wrote:bacon wrapped dub in the works...

http://soundcloud.com/pahje/pah-je-baco ... ub-9-3-lim
catchy track man! I love how the basslead sounds like a singer, or how the fuck am I supposed to explain that, like it's telling a story, singing a story. fuck im too stoned to explain... good track, I like it!

heh thanks. yeah needs moar bacon i think. slow cookin' this wan.

mk.ii · Post by **mk.ii** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:38 pm

anyone want to check my latest and greatest ?
be harsh...
peace

http://www.myspace.com/mk.ii

im heading back up the thread to check some dubs...

mk.ii · Post by **mk.ii** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:41 pm

dj dirty pimp wrote:hi all. im new to these forums. just posting up audio of my 2nd ever dubstep track. Ive been producing drum and bass for about 3 years so im not new to production! love dubstep and thought id give it a try and im really enjoying making it, so creative,

hope you like my track, and i hope its not too cheesey (jump up ish)

construcitve critisism very welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/dirty-pimp

to me the drums and reverb are a bit cheap and nasty... the bass line a what not are great tho...... i'll be interested to see where you take it...

mk.ii · Post by **mk.ii** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:42 pm

dj dirty pimp wrote:hi all. im new to these forums. just posting up audio of my 2nd ever dubstep track. Ive been producing drum and bass for about 3 years so im not new to production! love dubstep and thought id give it a try and im really enjoying making it, so creative,

hope you like my track, and i hope its not too cheesey (jump up ish)

construcitve critisism very welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/dirty-pimp

to me the drums and reverb are a bit cheap and nasty... the bass line a what not are great tho...... i'll be interested to see where you take it...

mk.ii · Post by **mk.ii** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 9:49 pm

dj dirty pimp wrote:hi all. im new to these forums. just posting up audio of my 2nd ever dubstep track. Ive been producing drum and bass for about 3 years so im not new to production! love dubstep and thought id give it a try and im really enjoying making it, so creative,

hope you like my track, and i hope its not too cheesey (jump up ish)

construcitve critisism very welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/dirty-pimp

to me the drums and reverb are a bit cheap and nasty... the bass line a what not are great tho...... i'll be interested to see where you take it...

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:21 pm

xterior wrote:@Reignz
I agree with Magma. Try a lil bit of pure white noise layered over the snare hits, might bring it out a little more. Also, just an opinion but personally I'd go for a hint more low end on the bass.

my current WIP: http://soundcloud.com/xterior/xterior-seeker-wip

not too much to show yet but early critique would be a massive help as this is my first dubstep track

I figured the snare needed to be louder, I tried a boost around 1-3kHz instead of the white noise, I'm not a big fan of white noise on snares

Checked out your track, seems to me your bass volume is way too high, you almost blew up my speakers. Drums are good, they flow nice with the bass, though I couldn't really hear that much with such an overwhelming bass.

@mk.ii: Idk man, your drum sound seems to be abit fucked up (giving cracks, which prolly means you EQ'd something wrong) , and the track sounds like a random mixup from different samples, giving no structure of flow to your song. After 2.30 you seem to be pulling yourself together and make something new out of it, which sounds way better than the intro, but still needs alot of work (again I get the feeling that it's a mixup of samples)

resao · Post by **resao** » Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:18 pm

pah jé wrote:bacon wrapped dub in the works...

http://soundcloud.com/pahje/pah-je-baco ... ub-9-3-lim

Really like this track and the way the bass mutates throughout the piece. Sorry I can't give more of a critique, don't know enough myself to give sound advice.

Here's a section from my first attempt at a dubstep tune

http://soundcloud.com/resao/dub2-1

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:30 am

New w.i.p. up on my soundcloud, it's called "Dreamer", any would feedback would be appreciated!

ogunslinger · Post by **ogunslinger** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:49 am

hey guys, anyone wana take a listen to a track i'm working on right now?
I Just want other peoples opinions to see if it's a "polished turd or not" lol
heres the link to take a listen, theres no eq's or compressors on it at all right now and the drums aren't really sequenced how i want them, but is the bassline bad? and I'm having some trouble with the intro, seriously I've changed it like at least 20 times :/ if anyone has some advice that would be awesome! but seriously, if it sucks in your eyes and you think it's a polished turd, tell me lol

http://soundcloud.com/airesgonewild/polished-turd

idk to me i think the intro is too slow, and I wana distort the bassline while still trying to keep that heroic-ish feel to it if you know what i mean.

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:45 am

Can anyone tell me if they'd dance to this? Samples a Chopin Interlude for the intro. Needs arrangement fixups over-all, but I like it.

This is more of a techno (?) 2-step thing.

dedman · Post by **dedman** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:25 pm

new work in progress... any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/653016529ead7dc7/

not 100% sure of the overall bass tone and some of the levels

a.paul · Post by **a.paul** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:38 pm

really old song that i've recently gone back to finish/fix up

http://soundcloud.com/boy-d

i know its pretty blah but whatever.

resao · Post by **resao** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:23 pm

dedman wrote:new work in progress... any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/653016529ead7dc7/

not 100% sure of the overall bass tone and some of the levels

Love your snare sound, proper crack to it.

rob_del_terror · Post by **rob_del_terror** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:57 pm

feedback on one track, i've posted it before, got no feedback, is it that bad its not even worthy???

2nd attempt at a dubstep track, would like some input so i can push it further.

tunes on myspaz n soundclart in my sig.....

parachutes · Post by **parachutes** » Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:30 pm

Not sure what I'm doing really

http://soundcloud.com/sepiaghost/dunno3

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:45 am

Safe guys,

Made a new tune called 'Gumball Drop' with another producer. Bit of a work in progress atm i guess.

Up on the soundcloud and would really appreciate some feedback. Its the first time ive ever worked with anyone on a track and the whole concept and feel of the track is very different to what i normally produce.

I would be really interested to hear what people think as im still undecided on this track at the moment and i realise the mix down isnt great so far.

All feedback is really appreciated! Ill feedback as many as i can.

http://soundcloud.com/psy-am

psy:am · Post by **psy:am** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 1:33 am

Parachutes wrote:Not sure what I'm doing really

http://soundcloud.com/sepiaghost/dunno3

I dont think thats true at all mate.

The track has a nice mellow vibe. Where are those vocals from? The drums are really nice. Im not sure how much of a fan of of the arp synth i am in the intro. And the kicks maybe shouldnt feature in the intro, seem a bit out of place. I think the introduction of a little sub bass could make it sound a bit fuller. No need to drown it in bass though. Like what youve done with the track.

Would appreciate some feedback on 'Gumball Drop'

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

dj dm · Post by **dj dm** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:02 am

Psy:am wrote: Would appreciate some feedback on 'Gumball Drop'

www.soundcloud.com/psy-am

Pretty nice track, im not really a fan of the 'metal' kinda noises but i love that little high synth gives it a creepy kind of edge & sounds good the way u evolve that bass. Ide bring the drums out abit more make em louder & clearer

miklos · Post by **miklos** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:23 am

http://soundcloud.com/miklos

Any thoughts?

ianks · Post by **ianks** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:08 am

please let me know what you think! free 320!

thanks so much!

much love to you all!

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