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karmacazee · Post by **karmacazee** » Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:53 am

http://soundcloud.com/y-chrome/shock-resistant

This one definitely needs some fresh ears.

There's just something about it that's not quite right, and I'm not sure what. MLeh

phrex · Post by **phrex** » Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:39 am

Dignan wrote:
VulvaVibration wrote:allright...

here is the updated version i have done after a few hours in the basement studio... any critics? what is good what not?
it's mastered with t-racks and eqs/compressors in ableton itself.

anyway: tell me abou tthat tune, what can i improve, is there anything which is specially good?

thank you guys! whoever comments something constructiv will get a comment back on his tune of course

http://soundcloud.com/vulvavibration/in ... tards-rec1
checked out your tune man - not my type of dubstep but some suggestions I have is to make your drums sound cleaner. the claps could use some EQing, or hi pass filtering to make them cut thru a bit more. and that kick you have with the sub bass on it is conflicting with the bass because they're in the same frequency area, I'd suggest cutting the lows of the kick, because you want that to come thru - you already got low with the sub.

thanks mate.
what is funny, is that this is not even my taste of dubstep. i was experimenting with some synth, this is what came out. though i found it quite interesting and kept working on it.

thank you for the suggestion... it's actually already cutted with the EQ, but not really enough, i think i cut it at about 100hz, which maybe isn't enough... i'll follow your suggestion! thank you mate!

redraven · Post by **redraven** » Sun Sep 13, 2009 7:32 am

Hey could you guys tell me what you think of my new track? Its not mixed at all except for the bass and the kick is sidechained to the bass, but you can hear everything clearly at the moment. Just wanting to see if anyone likes the idea.

http://www.box.net/shared/ur35kgikdv

roistermusic · Post by **roistermusic** » Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:16 pm

Easy,

aint bin on the beats for a while, aint had speakrs but ive had an itch.. what you lot think? - just been laying down ideas

www.myspace.com/roistermusic

got four clips up - 2 remix's, a mellow on and a dancefloor beat..

andyw362 · Post by **andyw362** » Sun Sep 13, 2009 10:03 pm

Work in progress.

http://soundcloud.com/andyw362

If anyone knows anything about basslines please feel free to guve me some advie.

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:09 am

Hey new track im working on let me know if you like it and/or anything else, Morning Wood. ONe

http://www.soundcloud.com/drenone88

jonny b · Post by **jonny b** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 8:40 am

does anyone actualy give feedback???

anyway ill chuck one up in hope someone does.

This is a remix of AC slaters hello.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/655428512b615db8/

only spent about 1 hour on it so far.

would id like to do with it is incorporate my own bass into it(havnt made one that fits it yet) just so its not so much like the original.

thierry_le_dj · Post by **thierry_le_dj** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:11 am

started this 1 a few hours ago
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj/dazed-1 (dazed)
still in progress..BIG BASS
i think the snare came out to soft..

feed back would be great thanks

plz let me know what you think?

zenix · Post by **zenix** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 8:53 pm

http://www.speedyshare.com/932717178.html

just something i made tonight, comments are appreciated

zenix · Post by **zenix** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 8:55 pm

Karmacazee wrote:http://soundcloud.com/y-chrome/shock-resistant

This one definitely needs some fresh ears.

There's just something about it that's not quite right, and I'm not sure what. MLeh

i think the rhytm of the drums should be adjusted, it sounds a bit offbeat in my opinion

phrex · Post by **phrex** » Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:58 pm

VulvaVibration wrote:
Dignan wrote:
VulvaVibration wrote:allright...

here is the updated version i have done after a few hours in the basement studio... any critics? what is good what not?
it's mastered with t-racks and eqs/compressors in ableton itself.

anyway: tell me abou tthat tune, what can i improve, is there anything which is specially good?

thank you guys! whoever comments something constructiv will get a comment back on his tune of course

http://soundcloud.com/vulvavibration/in ... tards-rec1
checked out your tune man - not my type of dubstep but some suggestions I have is to make your drums sound cleaner. the claps could use some EQing, or hi pass filtering to make them cut thru a bit more. and that kick you have with the sub bass on it is conflicting with the bass because they're in the same frequency area, I'd suggest cutting the lows of the kick, because you want that to come thru - you already got low with the sub.
thanks mate.
what is funny, is that this is not even my taste of dubstep. i was experimenting with some synth, this is what came out. though i found it quite interesting and kept working on it.

thank you for the suggestion... it's actually already cutted with the EQ, but not really enough, i think i cut it at about 100hz, which maybe isn't enough... i'll follow your suggestion! thank you mate!

allright.. done some changes, as you advised.... what do you guys think now?

http://soundcloud.com/vulvavibration/in ... tards-rec1

Arshaw · Post by **Arshaw** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:51 am

Just uploaded 2 new ones to soundcloud:

Joy Dub & Cympal Dub

any feedback (will return the favour

)

http://soundcloud.com/kid_kuduro/joy-dub
http://soundcloud.com/kid_kuduro/cympal-dub

Arshaw · Post by **Arshaw** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:56 am

drenster wrote:Hey new track im working on let me know if you like it and/or anything else, Morning Wood. ONe

http://www.soundcloud.com/drenone88

left u a comment on soundcloud m8.

nice tune btw

edit: also checked your other tunes, they all seem well mixed, what software you using?

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:57 am

this Kid named Lamont wrote:Just uploaded 2 new ones to soundcloud:

Joy Dub & Cympal Dub

any feedback (will return the favour )

http://soundcloud.com/kid_kuduro/joy-dub
http://soundcloud.com/kid_kuduro/cympal-dub

In Joy Dub the bassline actually never hits, so there's a bit of build up and the drums are alright, but it just kinda builds and goes no where. Needs a drop, or at least something to happen in it.

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:12 am

@this Kid named Lamont

left u a comment on soundcloud m8.

nice tune btw

edit: also checked your other tunes, they all seem well mixed, what software you using?

whats up, thanks for the feedback! im using live for everything. just picked up tips on Producer DAW Q&A from MACC for my equeing, and the bible helps as well. big up![/quote]

jsilver · Post by **jsilver** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 6:21 am

http://soundcloud.com/jsilver/jsilver-v ... tep-ninjam

me and a friend ninjamming DAWs

ianfm · Post by **ianfm** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:18 am

Anyone think this has potential?
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/videotapermx

& this one's more of a detroit thing:
http://soundcloud.com/stranger-song/sketch_37_closer

drenster · Post by **drenster** » Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:26 pm

Hello, i would greatly appreciate feedback for any of my tracks, but this one im workin on for all you jungle/dnb heads. let me know what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/drenone88/terminatorvip

cabre · Post by **cabre** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:53 am

So I was really, really bored tonight and just finished up listening to some Aphex. I was really digging the drop in Windowlicker and I thought I'd try and make a dubstep tune out of it. I havent finished it, its still VERY rough, but any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!

It should be the first tune in the player---WINDOLICCA
http://www.myspace.com/cabremusic

legend4ry · Post by **legend4ry** » Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:23 pm

http://soundcloud.com/legend4ry/unity-b ... rst-export

Will give feedback to everyone who gives feedback to me.

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