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[marsonebeatz]

hey everyone, i got this new track id really like some feedback on. sort of chilled out dubby track

http://soundcloud.com/gooms/requiem-dub

[swifteemusic]

SOME TRACKS I WOULD LIKE SOME FEEDBACK ON HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/SWIFTEE06

PREFERABLY THE FIRST TWO, THEY ARE QUITE DARK AND PROGRESSIVE

THANKS..

SWIFTEE

[TRNSPLNT]

first track on the player, ''get down''

first track ive finished in a long time


www.myspace.com/afriiqaa

[lowpass]

Gonna do this different.

Instead of giving out feedback after feedback and gettin pissed off with nothing in return, I'm just gonna say whoever gives me any shall get some back.

Tune in sig, let me know

[quit]

Gonna do this different.

Instead of giving out feedback after feedback and gettin pissed off with nothing in return, I'm just gonna say whoever gives me any shall get some back.

Tune in sig, let me know

What did you use to make this mate?

[86.]

Gonna do this different.

Instead of giving out feedback after feedback and gettin pissed off with nothing in return, I'm just gonna say whoever gives me any shall get some back.

Tune in sig, let me know

yo.

first off this is really sick. I like the chilled vibes, definitely my thing. I think it could use more in addition to the piano lead in the last section there. that would make it a definite plus.

just so you know, I got your Lowpass EP... I havent checked much of your stuff other than that. I enjoyed that, but I like this sort of direction you got here shitloads!

props!

[lowpass]

Gonna do this different.

Instead of giving out feedback after feedback and gettin pissed off with nothing in return, I'm just gonna say whoever gives me any shall get some back.

Tune in sig, let me know

What did you use to make this mate?

Most of the synths "piano, strings" were done with the exs24 (the sampler in logic 9)
The Piano took a shit load of equing to sound where it is now though,

sub = massive
drums = battery
pads = Logic's modeller synth

[lowpass]

Gonna do this different.

Instead of giving out feedback after feedback and gettin pissed off with nothing in return, I'm just gonna say whoever gives me any shall get some back.

Tune in sig, let me know

yo.

first off this is really sick. I like the chilled vibes, definitely my thing. I think it could use more in addition to the piano lead in the last section there. that would make it a definite plus.

just so you know, I got your Lowpass EP... I havent checked much of your stuff other than that. I enjoyed that, but I like this sort of direction you got here shitloads!

props!

Thanks for that mate, yeah in the end I did just want to end it. Atm I'm trying to get through tracks quick that are different, put them out and then gauge a reaction. So they have really just been ideas made in a day, I am thinking of heading more towards this way though maybe heavier but more sub/low bass with melody on top compared to midrangeeeee.

Btw my offer of feedback still stands if anybody is interested just re-up a link to your track, I don't really want to be going through pages of 'em

peace

[_v_]

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my first tune post....192 kpbs



needs bit of fine tuning.... was going for a real mellow but eerie, minimal, subtle but deep feel, was trying to create something to calm my mind one day when was stressed




feedback appreciated thanks!

[lowpass]

Soundcloud

my first tune post....192 kpbs

needs bit of fine tuning.... was going for a real mellow but eerie, minimal, subtle but deep feel, was trying to create something to calm my mind one day when was stressed


feedback appreciated thanks!

Sounds great, eq those pads to let the drums cut through + turn the fuckers up, those are nice drums but too damn quiet

give feedback if you want any in future

peace

[marsonebeatz]

yo lowpass, i left you feedback, so wheres mine in return?

[lowpass]

yo lowpass, i left you feedback, so wheres mine in return?

Soz bro, I checked it out, it's really well mixed, the drums cut through nicely, the vocal melody in there is really haunting, I'd boost the sub freqs on that bass, not much low end in there tbh

peace

[marsonebeatz]

safe! thats funny cuz i thought i sucked at mixing, i still think the hi hats are too high, and i see what you mean about that bass. check out freesound.org thats where i got those vocal samples

[lowpass]

safe! thats funny cuz i thought i sucked at mixing, i still think the hi hats are too high, and i see what you mean about that bass. check out freesound.org thats where i got those vocal samples

well I just found that I been putting my hats too high in the mix recently so you may want to ignore me lol,

yeah I just got a few cheeky samples off there, top site

[marsonebeatz]

just listened to that "789" track, dirrrty! so you use massive and battery? ive been workin with stictly reason 4, i might wanna expand my horizons

[Insurt]

@instrumentalist - luv the O-D song. - i like how the intro is not drawn out. I hate songs that are way to long til the drop. love the ill wobbles

@marsonebeatz - pretty chill song. Unfortunately it does get a bit repetitive in the middle - the vocals change it up a bit but add something...I dont know maybe a drum fill or a change in the wobble rate.

@lowpass i know how you feel - i just joined 2 days ago and gave out 3 responses to songs and my current count? zilch. zero. nada. Typically, I will view no response as a compliment considering people tend to respond to something negative like a bad production. But it would be NICE if i could get some responses.

Soundcloud

[lowpass]

Yeah man, batterys a nice little sampler, very powerful

Massive has got some neat sounds to it too

[_v_]

Soundcloud

my first tune post....192 kpbs

needs bit of fine tuning.... was going for a real mellow but eerie, minimal, subtle but deep feel, was trying to create something to calm my mind one day when was stressed


feedback appreciated thanks!

Sounds great, eq those pads to let the drums cut through + turn the fuckers up, those are nice drums but too damn quiet

give feedback if you want any in future

peace

thanks man, glad u like.....

did leave drums quiet on purpose but was thinking they need to come through more myself....

cheers again..


will leave feedback in future also!

[marsonebeatz]

@instrumentalist - luv the O-D song. - i like how the intro is not drawn out. I hate songs that are way to long til the drop. love the ill wobbles

@marsonebeatz - pretty chill song. Unfortunately it does get a bit repetitive in the middle - the vocals change it up a bit but add something...I dont know maybe a drum fill or a change in the wobble rate.

@lowpass i know how you feel - i just joined 2 days ago and gave out 3 responses to songs and my current count? zilch. zero. nada. Typically, I will view no response as a compliment considering people tend to respond to something negative like a bad production. But it would be NICE if i could get some responses.

yeah im thinkin about adding another dub sample of somethin to mix it up more, and some more changes in the drums, i dont think many changes on the wobble will sound good for this song tho, i agree it needs more, thanks

[_v_]

lowpass that tune is great, nice organic hats, beats are sharp wit some good rythms, piano loop sounds great, tho a small part of me thinks the piano may be slightly repetitive maybe switch it up, or add something over it to complement it....like a pad that changes on the high and low notes, or let the subtle sounds have a few bars to themselves.......only suggestions tho mate, sounds wicked overall......