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borrowed · Post by **borrowed** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 8:59 pm

Lwrabbit420 wrote:
borrowed wrote:
Lwrabbit420 wrote:
borrowed wrote:This is what I got so far. Basic/shitty, I know, but I have no idea where to go from here. Some producers said make the drums and hats listenable on their own, and i tried to do that.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6653319233f5be0c/
In my opinion I think the drums are going along nicely, . The laser pistol sound was kinda cool, but I wouldn't recommend it through the whole tune however. I'd go for your synth bass next, but thats just me.
I have zero idea where to go from here, I suck at programming melodies.
Do you have a piano/keyboard?

I got a regular keyboard which FL studio uses as a midi keyboard, but thats about it.

borrowed · Post by **borrowed** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:21 pm

Alright got a little further, not sure if I like it.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/665824695a95c33e/

Added some wobble, bass, synths and voices.

Sinisterbeats · Post by **Sinisterbeats** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 9:47 pm

this is a clip of what im working on at the moment, cant decide if its messy and just shit, or dark and nasty (in a good way

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what u reckon?
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decklyn · Post by **decklyn** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:51 pm

Will peep some of the new ones posted here after work.
Just mixing this down and then off to the office.
Anyone feelin? back of the epic tip.

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toki · Post by **toki** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 11:20 pm

@reignz: Liking the bass. Simple yet it works. Deffo potential in that track with work

@Sinisterbeats: Not usually my cup of tea but it's pretty good. It needs to drop hard though IMO.

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This is a lil' something that fused together while I was faffing about trying to make a bass. I threw in some drums and then sent it on its way, but it doesn't really have a direction. It is just bones at the minute so tips/feedback etc. would be good

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:23 am

hey guys i would really like some feed back on the agent track in my myspace player been workin on it a bit and some people like it some dont. ill offer feedback for anyone who responds

Insurt · Post by **Insurt** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:17 am

@decklyn - love the atmosphere. definitely something i would listen to on a drab day. could be epic, love the melodies. Anyways, I just cooked up this song and wondering what yall think. I dont even have a name for it yet...so I said girl.
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decklyn · Post by **decklyn** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:18 am

Insurt wrote:@decklyn - love the atmosphere. definitely something i would listen to on a drab day. could be epic, love the melodies. Anyways, I just cooked up this song and wondering what yall think. I dont even have a name for it yet...so I said girl.
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Thanks mate! Will check it really soon!

thierry_le_dj · Post by **thierry_le_dj** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 12:11 pm

FEED BACK plzzzzzz:
http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj (Mon-Dazed)
please let me know what you think...
bass is big.

_v_ · Post by **_v_** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:53 pm

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my first tune post....192 kpbs

needs bit of fine tuning.... was going for a real mellow but eerie, minimal, subtle but deep feel, was trying to create something to calm my mind one day when was stressed

feedback appreciated thanks!

reignstep · Post by **reignstep** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:44 pm

toki wrote:@reignz: Liking the bass. Simple yet it works. Deffo potential in that track with work
@Sinisterbeats: Not usually my cup of tea but it's pretty good. It needs to drop hard though IMO.

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This is a lil' something that fused together while I was faffing about trying to make a bass. I threw in some drums and then sent it on its way, but it doesn't really have a direction. It is just bones at the minute so tips/feedback etc. would be good

You're right about it not having alot of direction, I'm getting kinda confused myself , listening to the song. All the sounds you got are nice though, I think you should try to organise some.
I think I heard a very very low range subbass, not sure if it was just some noise or that it was an actual bass. If it's a bass, tune it up, cause I can hardly hear it and I got quite good subspeakers

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:25 pm

_v_ wrote:Soundcloud

my first tune post....192 kpbs

needs bit of fine tuning.... was going for a real mellow but eerie, minimal, subtle but deep feel, was trying to create something to calm my mind one day when was stressed

feedback appreciated thanks!

love the overall vibe of this track, it's just my taste. it could do with a bit of variation on the synths however. your drums are sounding nice a fat too, good work man!

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:27 pm

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could I get some feedback on this tune please? it's got a lot of plays but no comments...

big up

Insurt · Post by **Insurt** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:54 pm

@dignan you use reason? I'd be willing to do a rmx if you want. I like the groove

dignan · Post by **dignan** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:30 pm

Insurt wrote:@dignan you use reason? I'd be willing to do a rmx if you want. I like the groove

nah sorry man - I use Logic

Insurt · Post by **Insurt** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:36 pm

thats too bad - i already had in my mind some alterations i'd like to do for that song...wah wah wah...

_v_ · Post by **_v_** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 10:23 pm

dignan wrote:
_v_ wrote:Soundcloud

my first tune post....192 kpbs

needs bit of fine tuning.... was going for a real mellow but eerie, minimal, subtle but deep feel, was trying to create something to calm my mind one day when was stressed

feedback appreciated thanks!

love the overall vibe of this track, it's just my taste. it could do with a bit of variation on the synths however. your drums are sounding nice a fat too, good work man!

thanks dignan man,

glad your feeling the vibe....

puy this up in the dubs section and was told the drums needed to be louder, U think there ok? was going for a lighter feel but maybe they need bit more???

ive mixed this so far only on headphones also...

thanks for the feedback, appreciated man...

jsilver · Post by **jsilver** » Thu Oct 08, 2009 10:00 am

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boh boh boh

new shit

_v_ · Post by **_v_** » Thu Oct 08, 2009 11:22 am

dignan,

great tune, very melodic, nice changes, no suggestions just a great tune......

_v_ · Post by **_v_** » Thu Oct 08, 2009 11:47 am

jsilver nice vibe, had me tapping my foot, real hip hop feel to it...good work

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