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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by aspect-dubz » Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:13 pm

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Post by my_fickle_eye » Thu Oct 08, 2009 3:39 pm

lowpass wrote:Gonna do this different.

Instead of giving out feedback after feedback and gettin pissed off with nothing in return, I'm just gonna say whoever gives me any shall get some back.

Tune in sig, let me know :)
Lowpass - Like has been said those has are crisp as you like
the reverb on the piano makes it sound more real as well. Nice snare sample
not sure about the string section though and maybe the piano part could shift up a gear before it fades out
Also are you going to do another mix? everyone ive played it to loves it. :e:
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Post by my_fickle_eye » Thu Oct 08, 2009 3:43 pm

Right heres my track, all feedback would be appreciated. Like mr lowpass has said if you give me some feedback i will give you some. Also its not mastered
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Post by lowpass » Thu Oct 08, 2009 6:25 pm

my_fickle_eye wrote:Right heres my track, all feedback would be appreciated. Like mr lowpass has said if you give me some feedback i will give you some. Also its not mastered
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Cheers guys for the feedback, I may come back and redo this when I've cleared my head a little, there is definately a lot of room for improvement but still in that state of over saturation.

Wouldn't mind some snare in here man, whack that fader up, the rest of the drums are sounding cool though.

Nice bouncy hats, some cool synth noises too,

peace

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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Oct 08, 2009 9:42 pm

Hey everyone, im kind of new here, been using the drum & bass arena forum for a few months but they dont really take too kindly to dubstep. anyways i been producing for about a half a year now, self taught, and i thought itd be a good idea to get others peoples opinions on it, since no one else knows about it.
so here it is, im not sure wether its finished or not, i guess ill let you lot decide :)
its called "Knowledge" and my producer alias is "Collision"
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Post by stinjee » Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:17 am

@ collision

some good ideas there, imo i think the percussive synth gets a bit repetative, need to drop that out some, and the bass sounds a little thin, how did u make the bass?
also not sure if the snare really fits in,
feel free to pm me for some advice

dont wanna sound like a big headed tnuc or owt, :? but i wish someone would have helped me when i started out


peace out, n keep at it

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Post by stinjee » Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:22 am

@ my fickle eye

like the tension in the build up and also when it drops got some real energy man, mite be cos as u say its not mastered but i had a hard time really hearin the drums, the zappy percusion part stood out a little too much imho

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Post by Insurt » Fri Oct 09, 2009 4:32 am

collision what do u use to produce
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Post by lowpass » Fri Oct 09, 2009 7:30 am

stinjee wrote:@ collision

some good ideas there, imo i think the percussive synth gets a bit repetative, need to drop that out some, and the bass sounds a little thin, how did u make the bass?
also not sure if the snare really fits in,
feel free to pm me for some advice

dont wanna sound like a big headed tnuc or owt, :? but i wish someone would have helped me when i started out

peace out, n keep at it
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Post by bifta » Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:17 am

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Couple of things up there
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Post by 1step2crack » Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:10 pm

Hey Guys!

I'm a Hungarian producer, main genres are various techno, liek frenchtek, hardtechno, minimal, all kind of experimental things, hardcore etc etc.

and also i make some dubstep as well, this is the 2nd DS track I made, I'd be really curious about your opinion.

here's the link:

http://www26.zippyshare.com/v/50520156/file.html

and also if interested you can check on my other aliases (none of them is a genre for this forum, but maybe You gonna like .... ;))

http://www.myspace.com/whanvisions
http://www.myspace.com/hadronn

thx for feedbacks


cheers!

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Post by my_fickle_eye » Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:37 pm

lowpass wrote:
stinjee wrote:@ collision

some good ideas there, imo i think the percussive synth gets a bit repetative, need to drop that out some, and the bass sounds a little thin, how did u make the bass?
also not sure if the snare really fits in,
feel free to pm me for some advice

dont wanna sound like a big headed tnuc or owt, :? but i wish someone would have helped me when i started out

peace out, n keep at it
People put tracks here for feedback not for an ass kissin' Let them know exactly what's wrong with the track before someone else does :wink:
Yes criticise, thanks for the tips gonna make the snare louder
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Post by CollisionCourse » Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:41 pm

my_fickle_eye wrote:
lowpass wrote:
stinjee wrote:@ collision

some good ideas there, imo i think the percussive synth gets a bit repetative, need to drop that out some, and the bass sounds a little thin, how did u make the bass?
also not sure if the snare really fits in,
feel free to pm me for some advice

dont wanna sound like a big headed tnuc or owt, :? but i wish someone would have helped me when i started out

peace out, n keep at it
People put tracks here for feedback not for an ass kissin' Let them know exactly what's wrong with the track before someone else does :wink:
Yes criticise, thanks for the tips gonna make the snare louder
exactly thanks for the advice
ill get on it :D
and i use fl studio 8 btw
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Post by green plan » Sat Oct 10, 2009 2:06 am

At Collision, same as the others. Snare needs some crack! Liking the general vibe though bruv

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Post by somatix » Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:56 am

http://soundcloud.com/somatics/mutation-sick-evolution



quite a few new tracks, feedback welcome, more of a sci fi dubstep style i guess.

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Post by phrex » Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:12 am

all right.. finished up the tune... would be very glad for feedbaxk.. on my monitors it sounds very (!) heavy. lot of pressure, lot of bass. hope you hear & feel the same.

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Post by melodik » Sun Oct 11, 2009 5:40 am

new one up...."becoming". used quite a bit of the vocal from we become one by faithless...
free 20 in player...any crit/feedback will be bless!!!

will give feedback in return :W:

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Post by reignstep » Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:01 am

melodik wrote:new one up...."becoming". used quite a bit of the vocal from we become one by faithless...
free 20 in player...any crit/feedback will be bless!!!

will give feedback in return :W:

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Your intro gave me a 'WOW' effect, seriously nice shit, then when your lead bass kicks in at 0.54 and I thought it was abit too empty for such a brilliant buildup, though you fixed it at 1.07 so I'm kinda wondering why make those 13 seconds abit more 'boring'.
I've got no critics apart from that, you kicked ass :)

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Post by mookiemookz » Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:45 am

Hey everybody, new to these forums, but can't get enough of dub. I'm usually making hip hop beats but in the past month or so I've gotten myself some dub vst's for my fruity loops. Using nothing more then FL Studio 8 =/. I download as many drum kits, synths, sounds, etc. to get away from the limited fruity loops sound. Working on getting some equipment right now. I've recently got into making dubstep beats, everything I know right now i've learned on my own, no tutorials or nothing. Not to sure if my sounds is coming out right, so i thought these forums would help me out getting some tips and pointers from other peeps. I know so far that I need to work on my build up's making them more "breathe taking" not sure what else, i'll leave that to you guys.
I got 2 of my tracks up on myspace. I would appreciate if you would listen, lemme know how it sounds, tell me if im going down the right path. I work off constructive criticism so hit me with what you got!!!

http://www.myspace.com/moosmoneycrew <---- peep the tracks there.


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Post by knobgoblin » Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:33 am

heres a remix i just finished for the glitchhop group JuncOps:
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/518773/%7BKn ... er-320.mp3

original at http://www.myspace.com/juncops

any praise/crit welcome. reciprocal feedback

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