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Post by decklyn » Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:43 pm

Updated wip in the player... Soundin' tight.!
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Post by decklyn » Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:46 pm

Sinisterbeats wrote:this is a clip of what im working on at the moment, cant decide if its messy and just shit, or dark and nasty (in a good way :wink: )
what u reckon?
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The sound is good. Does seem a little unorganized. I wouldn't say it's dance music but it sounds nice. Does that make sense?
All the elements should sort of talk together. The Kicks and snares can rhythmically be related to the bass textures. Hats in between not on the grid to add swing. Then you've got people dancing!
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Post by decklyn » Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:50 pm

toki wrote:@reignz: Liking the bass. Simple yet it works. Deffo potential in that track with work :)
@Sinisterbeats: Not usually my cup of tea but it's pretty good. It needs to drop hard though IMO.


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This is a lil' something that fused together while I was faffing about trying to make a bass. I threw in some drums and then sent it on its way, but it doesn't really have a direction. It is just bones at the minute so tips/feedback etc. would be good :e:
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Sounds alright. The percussion is way sleepy and in the mix though.
To hype it up, add some layers. In particualy put another snare over top of your current one. Maybe 2. For your two samples maybe try a clap and a sample of some white noise. Then it'll hit hard. Toughen up the Kick and make it stand out in the mix a bit more I think. I would really try to go for a little bit tougher sound on the percussion here to give it some energy. Just my humble opinion. The bass sounds are great. If you saturate the higher frequency layers just a bit more they'll get more aggressive too. I see it having the sort of sleepy pads but then being bigger and louder. But really it's your tune so best of luck building it up!
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Post by lhd » Thu Oct 08, 2009 5:08 pm

decklyn wrote:Updated wip in the player... Soundin' tight.!
Tune sounds killer man. I will take a 320 of this when you're done for my radio show.

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Post by louissmusic » Thu Oct 08, 2009 6:36 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mroNXtZx9Eo

too many man remix i started yesterday. In preperation for when i see skepta and wiley and tempz on the 28th :) just done the intro so far. what d'ya think?

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Post by brainpain » Thu Oct 08, 2009 9:01 pm

away from home for 5 months... i came bak with shitloads of tunes:)
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Post by stinjee » Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:25 am

@ brainpain,

really like this its proper funky man, like the little vocal edits in there,
no real critism man


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Post by jsilver » Fri Oct 09, 2009 12:52 am

_v_ wrote:jsilver nice vibe, had me tapping my foot, real hip hop feel to it...good work
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Post by brainpain » Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:16 am

stinjee wrote:@ brainpain,

really like this its proper funky man, like the little vocal edits in there,
no real critism man


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Post by big d 90 » Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:37 pm

ez

the tunes in my sig , brutal feedback please

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Post by cope and paste » Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:33 pm

http://www.upload-mp3.com/files/106118_j8h0g/UNION.mp3

first proper go, messed around a bit before
song thread here: http://www.dubstepforum.com/union-first ... 09726.html

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Post by graftek » Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:24 pm

My wip shot at a bit of dreamy vibe.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/667283788c1ce48c/

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Post by aaronpeipert » Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:41 pm

Started a new track today called "We Be Bang'n"

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Post by Arshaw » Fri Oct 09, 2009 11:03 pm

http://virb.com/kidkuduro/audio/447913

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Post by Arshaw » Fri Oct 09, 2009 11:05 pm

aaronpeipert wrote:Started a new track today called "We Be Bang'n"

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sounding like a mash up between Pendulum and Sumthing that Timbo would produce.

not to my personal liking, nice vibe tho... arrangement wise.

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Post by Malicious » Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:55 am

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Work in progress... me messing with new bass. Haven't been producing long... this is one of my first tracks. Was going for a darker, heavier, excisiony - datsik feel. Be nice. :t:

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Post by critical sound system » Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:49 am

hi everyone!
im working on a new project and need some feedback/advices on this work in progress
this sounds different when i listen it in different settings.im getting lost
its a bit random loops in fact no stucture
thanks for comments

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Post by dansu » Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:59 am

Malicious wrote: Work in progress... me messing with new bass. Haven't been producing long... this is one of my first tracks. Was going for a darker, heavier, excisiony - datsik feel. Be nice. :t:

damn it, you didnt even put drums in there, did you ? if im wrong, you need to make this guitarlike bass a little less terror, maybe with eq or sidechaining on the kickdrum. gotta pull the drums out of the bassmud, you know ?

heres one i made yesterday
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Post by critical sound system » Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:04 pm

by the way how can i post the soundcloud track directly like you guys?

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Post by critical sound system » Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:14 pm

brainpain wrote:away from home for 5 months... i came bak with shitloads of tunes:)
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this is huge!
any chance of 320s?

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