I like it a lot man!dignan wrote:really liking this man - great atmosphere, love that main synth. I'd turn down the snare though, it's really loud in the mix. that's about it though, good work man, I wouldn't mind a 320 of it when it's done
here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated!
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"Thanks man! I'll surely keep your advice in mind! true the beat (snare especially) needs to roll a bit more, it's slightly boem....tsjak over and over again, but did I metnion this is my first tune, and the eq may not be awesome caus I don't have any monitors yet.vries wrote:Really likin' it man, givin' it a second go 'round right now.
-Maybe have the delays of the vocal hit on the other side of the stereo spectrum to create some more swing, and variate the delay on your vocal a bit more obvious to keep the track progressing a bit more.
-Create some variations on the snare to keep it moving a bit more, automate your reverbs, throw in a different snare, pitch it up or down, pan it to the other side once in a while or something like that.
-Really like the way the synth comes in at the breakdown and the way it breaks loose as the beat drops again, but ends up being quite contained, really fits with the vibe of the tune.
thanks for listening man, one question though - what do you mean when you say you like the props heavier and later?clinic wrote:I like it a lot man!dignan wrote:really liking this man - great atmosphere, love that main synth. I'd turn down the snare though, it's really loud in the mix. that's about it though, good work man, I wouldn't mind a 320 of it when it's done
here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated!
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Though pure question of taste I prefer the props a bit heavier and a few counts later, it feels a bit like "yeah it's coming, oh crap I missed it!!!
And I'm not a big fan of too natural sounding crashes either, but that's just a question of taste.
The synths are very nice, good mix between padlike sounds, the slight wobble and the rest of them
Keep up the good work!
I'll let you know when it's done man, are you on soundcloud?vries wrote:Damn, I'm loving the drums and the way you're using panning in building shit up.dignan wrote: here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated!
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Feel like the synth could be pulled up a bit, seems like you've got plenty of space left for it. And maybe create a variation on that with a slightly modulated sound to keep it a bit more suprising.
Would love to play that tune out, let me know if you'd have a wav or 320 available when it's finished!
its alright the bass feels bit weak though
very nice that bass is messy as fuck (in a good way)Kris-One wrote:My first ever dub jam... sorta goes off the map but lemme know whatchu think
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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
Yeah man, just checked and we've got an account there that I've got acces to, so just hit me up @ Phonophanatic!dignan wrote:I'll let you know when it's done man, are you on soundcloud?vries wrote:Damn, I'm loving the drums and the way you're using panning in building shit up.dignan wrote: here's a tune that I'm almost done with (I think) - some feedback would be appreciated!
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Feel like the synth could be pulled up a bit, seems like you've got plenty of space left for it. And maybe create a variation on that with a slightly modulated sound to keep it a bit more suprising.
Would love to play that tune out, let me know if you'd have a wav or 320 available when it's finished!
i know the track randomly cuts off, it is no where near finished lol. thanks kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
just had a listen and the hats feel a lil bit too loud, gives me a bit of a headachej0be wrote:Hey dudes, think I posted this in the wrong part of the forum initially, it's not finished, really need some tips on what needs improving (mostly everything I'm guessing)....
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kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?
I like the beats a lot, really rolling, though i think a little loud on the hats. The dreamy synth is nice but I'd ad something more to spice it up. The bassline i'd filter the lowends and replace it by a pure sine sub, caus now I think it's taking up all the headroom. The vocal sample is a bit repetitive, also for the drops the could kick in a bit harder, they slide in imo, that's a quesiton of taste.jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud
guys this forum doesnt work if you dont feedback others tracks before posting your own!!!
i posted feedback so im once again requesting feedback
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