Really need some feedback on a track.

[izaac c]

hey guys, basicaly I've learnt production through drums and bass, dubstep has raped my mind lately really loving whats goin on!
I live in the sticks wheres theres basicaly no one anywhere so really want some feedback on this tune, i dont know if this is in the right direction but really loving that filthy 16 bit sound.

http://www.myspace.com/bassmentsuburb 'Fist Eater' please someone have a listen an tell me where im at as i seem to post on so many forums and no one replies. safe

[izaac c]

gaaah

[kraftpeanutbutterbear]

I'm not a producer so sorry for my uncapability of advise on production and mastering but...
Here is my feeling :

It's a little bit sloppy, lacking of rythme here, but the sounds you've use in the rythme section are really nice.
Don't really like the decrencendo bass notes. I think the melody is a little wick as easy.
Your second track on your myspace is far better than this one for my ears.

[_boring]

tune-wise, its semi-predictable, but the vibe makes up for it. i think it's pretty cool tho i'd love to check out an mp3 in the mix instead of the myspace.

i just dont know how i feel about the farting puke drop that comes in after the LFO groove i'm trying to stay away from things that sound like the are farting or puking (at least when there are girls on the dancefloor) i think that if you started that 2nd sound at the 2nd drop instead of starting it during the first section it works a lot better with that big dub bassline that it does with the outwright pukin lol

mixdown isnt that bad it seems but still could use some work,

altho if u switched it to just have that sound at the second drop bassline i'd try it out for sure!

i'd say the biggest advice i ever got on producing is take your time and let the tune really develop itself sometimes; this sounds like a good skeleton tho.

maybe check out GAMMA AUDIO recordings for some influence?

[mars]

yo!

this isn't bad. i like the 2nd drop. big!
keep at it.
i'd get rid of that fart-like sound that comes at random times haha
and the snares seem to duck a bit behind the other sounds after the 2nd drop.
but iunno mayn, other than that, sounds pretty damn good!

cheers!

[thehILL]

its big, nicely broken up.. huge grimey bass .. i like it

[izaac c]

ah wicked vibes guys nice one for the constructive critasizm ++

yer as always with me its an unfinished product ha, basicaly i've been using a 512mb ram pc for 3 yrs makin ideas only and finaly got a 3.07ghz quad core with 8.5gb ddr3. Big let down though as I've goten the hand of cubase at a friends but the cracked version wont work on vista 64bit(fair enough i suppose), but gona buy it when i save um some dosh (pretty impossible but gota happen) infact the reason i bought it was for cubase, gah never mind just have to carry on with reason 4, which is a cool program but has to many limits =[ really got my head around it though, everything needs alot more work to get phatness than my experiences on other programs.

will let u guys know when a finished tune is up.

nice one

[_boring]

yea man safe keep pluggin!

[izaac c]

safe! :L