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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by phrex » Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:03 pm

i think i have no or little chance, that my tracks will ever be feedbacked, although i feedback quite often (guess so)

this thread is for no use with this behaviour.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by louissmusic » Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:17 pm

vulvavibration wrote:

here i go with a sample of beats/bass&stuff of my next tune...

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Nice one with the beat, find the bass really quiet in the mix and there seems to be a lack of percussion in the track? Isnt it just kick and snare then a slight variation in the middle. With a bit more of a varied beat it would probs be more interesting and possibly more sub.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by jsaxton » Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:17 pm

vulvavibration wrote:just try to feedback first at least one other track.

is society really so fuckin' egoistic?
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yout track doesn't seem to have a concept. no relation between the horrible synth, the snare and the missing kick. wlel it's a work in progress.. but really, you should first at least have something that may sound like work in progress i.e: a 10 sec. drumloop, or something. doesen't have to be long, it has to have some musical substance before posting in here IMHO.

or am I the only one with that oppinion? :x

maybe you should first listen to some dubstep (and other music) and you should train your feeling for rythm mate! :o
i will not ask, why you have the snare on the left and the horrible synth on the right.
agreed!

unfortunatly there seems to be very little on here i can give but...
deadly wrote:4-track sampler in sig...

Any comments on the tracks much appreciated!
its alright but the opening synth seems abit annoying...dont know why
now my track

it isnt dubstep but it contains wobble
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if theres something specific leave the feedback with a timed comment
otherwise here will do:D
safe
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Lam-C » Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:12 pm

or am I the only one with that oppinion?
no you don't...
Is this dubstep?

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Post by phrex » Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:22 pm

louissmusic wrote:
vulvavibration wrote:

here i go with a sample of beats/bass&stuff of my next tune...

Soundcloud
Nice one with the beat, find the bass really quiet in the mix and there seems to be a lack of percussion in the track? Isnt it just kick and snare then a slight variation in the middle. With a bit more of a varied beat it would probs be more interesting and possibly more sub.

safe

Louis.

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feel free to feedback my track
haha... really, it is funky! :D but i'll come back to you track later...

wel everything is quite in the mix, and i don't wonder that you don't hear a sub. i fucked it up actually. i think i didn't record the subbass somehow. i'll redo it tonight or tomorrow. higher volume and the subbass inclusive :D

lack of percussion.. humm.. well.. dunno actually, don't want too much, like it a bit minimalistic but with a drive and a groove. does it have that drive/groove?

maybe you should wait untill i upload the betta version! and i just recog that i can't upload anymore this month! :( so i'll be here again on teh 1st :D

now to your chune... well i told you before: i tend to more minimalistig dubstep. yours is quote not minimalistic :lol: but it really has a drive. maybe you could make more out of the first drop. and the intro sounds a bit... hmm cheap? don't want to sound harsh, but the synth is, just not individual enough... maybe it just needs some cutoff terror :D

but like the cracy synth from the drop on. although not my kinda dubstep something special ;)

big up
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by jsaxton » Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:57 am

i already posted a fair bit of feedback recently
so...

it isnt dubstep but it contains wobble
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if theres something specific leave the feedback with a timed comment
otherwise here will do:D
safe[/quote]
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Post by soulshynchyld » Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:19 am

chea check this out
im noob az a noob doez
but ay, just want some feedbak!! chea

by tha way i just made this randumb vid so i could upload!!




http://www.youtube.com/user/jahsinchu#p ... IoNODdxPZw
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Post by jsaxton » Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:55 am

soulshynchyld wrote:chea check this out
im noob az a noob doez
but ay, just want some feedbak!! chea

by tha way i just made this randumb vid so i could upload!!




http://www.youtube.com/user/jahsinchu#p ... IoNODdxPZw
i really like the tune, i can see why you call it dream dub, its 4 in the morning and i feel asif im about to pass out:P
the wobble could do with been just a really heavy sub tbh rather than rough
like skreams in for the kill remix but heavyer :D

send a 320 when its finished:)
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PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by monst3rrr » Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:30 am

hi there everybody !!

advices and comments are welcome
sure, it will help us to progress
thx !

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Post by jsaxton » Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:54 am

jesus people are not giving feedback at all recently, although thats the entire point of this topic :u:
kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by rook » Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:15 pm

Nearing completion on a remix of Cage The Elephant's 'No Rest For the Wicked'
I'd love any feedback people have to offer.

http://soundcloud.com/rook/cage-the-ele ... emix-ver-1

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Post by phrex » Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:16 pm

jsaxton wrote:jesus people are not giving feedback at all recently, although thats the entire point of this topic :u:
that's what i said page before...

this is for no use.
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by stappard » Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:38 pm

rook wrote:Nearing completion on a remix of Cage The Elephant's 'No Rest For the Wicked'
I'd love any feedback people have to offer.

http://soundcloud.com/rook/cage-the-ele ... emix-ver-1

Cool track. One thing I do feel though is that each bar needs to be a little bit more 'defined', ie a more definate 1-beat at the beginning of each bar. A heavy kick or crash or something. At the moment, especially in the section before the vocals come in proper, the bars sort of flow together and lack a danceable beat.

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Post by jsaxton » Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:10 pm

vulvavibration wrote:
jsaxton wrote:jesus people are not giving feedback at all recently, although thats the entire point of this topic :u:
that's what i said page before...

this is for no use.
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now cmon yall
give feedback
share tha lurrvvee
:w:
kotku wrote:if something sounds like shit and is not pop then it's techno, or is this definition flawed aswell?

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Post by madmax » Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:12 pm

Track called 'Never Never', its a dubtechno vibe. Keep in mind its a work in progress. Its done on Ableton. I am very, very new to this production thing (about 3 days) so feedback, advice, criticism all very welcome. Let me know what you think.

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by jsaxton » Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:15 pm

madmax wrote:Track called 'Never Never', its a dubtechno vibe. Keep in mind its a work in progress. Its done on Ableton. I am very, very new to this production thing (about 3 days) so feedback, advice, criticism all very welcome. Let me know what you think.

Peaz.

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you should probably give feedback first mate
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Post by phrex » Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:39 pm

jsaxton wrote:
vulvavibration wrote:
jsaxton wrote:jesus people are not giving feedback at all recently, although thats the entire point of this topic :u:
that's what i said page before...

this is for no use.
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i'm the wrong guy to smack the head for, buddy! just check out the last 15 pages :wink:
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by madmax » Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:11 pm

jsaxton wrote:
madmax wrote:Track called 'Never Never', its a dubtechno vibe. Keep in mind its a work in progress. Its done on Ableton. I am very, very new to this production thing (about 3 days) so feedback, advice, criticism all very welcome. Let me know what you think.

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you should probably give feedback first mate
What you mean? If I haven't given feedback before I wont get any?

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Post by phrex » Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:58 pm

it's like socialism!

annd you are the capitalist!
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by rook » Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:31 pm

stappard wrote:
rook wrote:Nearing completion on a remix of Cage The Elephant's 'No Rest For the Wicked'
I'd love any feedback people have to offer.

http://soundcloud.com/rook/cage-the-ele ... emix-ver-1

Cool track. One thing I do feel though is that each bar needs to be a little bit more 'defined', ie a more definate 1-beat at the beginning of each bar. A heavy kick or crash or something. At the moment, especially in the section before the vocals come in proper, the bars sort of flow together and lack a danceable beat.
That's a good call, appreciate it.
I'll keep that in mind as I get back to it.

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