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Post by projekt » Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:47 pm

Cheers mate, taken on board ;)


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Post by triode » Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:56 pm

Ez!! guys, Got to say this one wicked forum i found this site the other day, seeing how im getting more in to making my own dubstep instead of breaks and oldskool hardcore- jungle and alittle dance cheese. i started the move to making dubstep a year ago or so...Anyhows so i thought id better go find some of my own kind. And found you lot so now ya stuck with me lol.!!.. i got a few of my tracks on youtube but more on sony acidplanet but only reg users can play the tracks from the site:(. if you guys have time please have a listen and give me some real honest feed back!! thanks hope to hear what you think !! ? :)

Heres the links :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rNiDjaOmNTc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7Vp0JguWf0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvFN2aRjtvk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0bq2TMFdLU

Acidplanet link >>
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?so ... 552&T=5004

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Post by stappard » Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:23 am

triode wrote:Ez!! guys, Got to say this one wicked forum i found this site the other day, seeing how im getting more in to making my own dubstep instead of breaks and oldskool hardcore- jungle and alittle dance cheese. i started the move to making dubstep a year ago or so...Anyhows so i thought id better go find some of my own kind. And found you lot so now ya stuck with me lol.!!.. i got a few of my tracks on youtube but more on sony acidplanet but only reg users can play the tracks from the site:(. if you guys have time please have a listen and give me some real honest feed back!! thanks hope to hear what you think !! ? :)

Heres the links :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rNiDjaOmNTc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7Vp0JguWf0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvFN2aRjtvk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0bq2TMFdLU

Acidplanet link >>
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?so ... 552&T=5004
Listened to feeling dub, love the unconventional mass sounds and the percussion is awesome......but the kicks not there for so much of the track? Or at least its lost!

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Post by triode » Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:32 am

Thanks :) !! yeah the kick has gotton lost in the track so much going on no room left. im not working with the best of setups ..and not really mastered anything propley ive ever made :( need help lol or money to pay someone or money for some new monitors and a studio course... thx :)

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Post by stappard » Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:34 am

triode wrote:Thanks :) !! yeah the kick has gotton lost in the track so much going on no room left. im not working with the best of setups ..and not really mastered anything propley ive ever made :( need help lol or money to pay someone or money for some new monitors and a studio course... thx :)

haha I know your pain, no monitors here either. good work getting such good sounds out a setup like that then.

if you get time to listen to a few of my tracks and hopefully feedback, soundcloud links in my sig :wink:

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Post by triode » Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:51 am

im useing Pa speakers 2 sets of 15's and a pair of eltax tall hifi speakers for my tops ..n yeah man listening now :) :) will just played scanner and horror show ..that scanner track got me hooked in the 1st 8- 16 bars thats a wicked track .. and horror shows is well arranged proper !!it does what it says on the tin ..:))) wicked stuff !! :) put me to shame lol ill go away now lol

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:17 am

Just a song I'm working on, pretty much the second song I've made.

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Post by the-devo » Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:22 am

vulvavibration wrote: heavy one. like it. agree with the bass... could be deepah.
could i have a 320 when finished? :t:
Hi,
I've replaced the FightClub sample with 6th sense movie quotes, which made it shorter, aand I did a minor change to the growling/dirty/phat/roar that keeps repeating.
I almost lost this song (thank you, Microsoft) but with enough luck, I could restore it and though I lost some important changes, I am happy to have the project file again. :z:
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Send me a PM with your MSN address, and I'll add you, and then I can send you the 320.
It'd be an honor to know someone else has my track on his computer. :mrgreen:
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.

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Post by tripwire22 » Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:57 am

workin on new things soundcloud link in my sig ill offer feedback to anyone who says something

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Post by stappard » Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:37 am

tripwire22 wrote:workin on new things soundcloud link in my sig ill offer feedback to anyone who says something

Dude this isn't myspace, try a bit of generosity....

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Post by ninteh » Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:46 am

Ez fellas, new to the game.. feedback on this work in progress please :]

http://soundcloud.com/ninteh/tooonn-9
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Post by joonipah » Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:35 pm

vulvavibration:
i like that tune, i don't really get the intro, it's different tho haha. but yeah it's a nice sound, got nice reverb and sounds really dark. beefy sub too.

triode:
i only listened to that feeling dub tune but i really like it! the beat's really nice and has a lot going on, it really works. i would maybe see what adding some reverb on the snare sounds like, not too much tho but a noticeable amount, ya nar.

i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
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Post by triode » Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:48 pm

Oh MATE !! MATE ! lol ..Now that is a Tune blinding wicked bassline proper !! lol can you come to my studio and live there for a year lmao i got a backlog of years of unfinished tracks that need tending to ..oh go on ..ill only lock you in for a year and post your dinner every evening in the latter box.... anyways ..WICKED!!!!!! Track :)


Thanks for having a listen to mine, will take your tip about the snare thx :) see how it goes

how about bridging it passed mid way in to 4-4 beat and useing that bass with a not so diffrent but simular patten :) other then that idea .but i think the tracks is fine !! :)

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Post by joonipah » Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:03 pm

triode wrote:Oh MATE !! MATE ! lol ..Now that is a Tune blinding wicked bassline proper !! lol can you come to my studio and live there for a year lmao i got a backlog of years of unfinished tracks that need tending to ..oh go on ..ill only lock you in for a year and post your dinner every evening in the latter box.... anyways ..WICKED!!!!!! Track :)


Thanks for having a listen to mine, will take your tip about the snare thx :) see how it goes

how about bridging it passed mid way in to 4-4 beat and useing that bass with a not so diffrent but simular patten :) other then that idea .but i think the tracks is fine !! :)
haha nice one, glad you like it! aye i was thinkin of doing that in one part, i'll give it a go sometime and repost if it sounds good like, cheers

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Post by stappard » Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:36 pm

100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud

Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.

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Post by joonipah » Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:58 pm

stappard wrote:
100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud

Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.
cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq. but aye cheers, the bass sounds are bits of gameboy sounds and samples from mario that i just fucked about with, and whacked a fat sub on, how's the sub sounding to you? i've not got proper monitors or anything

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Post by stappard » Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:44 pm

100man wrote:
stappard wrote:
100man wrote:
i've been making a heavy dubsteppy/2-step tune with nintendo sounds, i've basically finished it, i just think there may be some changes that could be made and a bit of cleaning up. what do people think?
my favourite bit is the drop haha
Soundcloud

Loving the sounds and the rhythm! Kick and bass sounds are spot on, my personal preference would be for a bit more crack in the snare to really get it bouncing but its sweet as it is. Cool sound design - love the little sub break bit at 1:45.
cool, yeah that snare needs a bit of eq. but aye cheers, the bass sounds are bits of gameboy sounds and samples from mario that i just fucked about with, and whacked a fat sub on, how's the sub sounding to you? i've not got proper monitors or anything
I'm listening through studio headphones, no monitors here either, and its sounding pretty banging, everything pulses along really well. Awesome track

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Post by amisane » Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:27 pm

vulvavibration wrote:got a new track.. still work in progress.. don't judge the changes from one part to the next. no effects, and the arrangement is half baked :!:

i just came back from partying, so i will feedback later some tracks. right now i would talk just crap :lol:


my track:
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sub bass in the intro seems to fluctuate a bit in volume.

when the main drums first come in that sounds nice.

vocal sample has a good feel to it but i can't tell what it's saying - maybe this is the idea though?

squelchy 303 style bass/lead thing is ok, but is quite fast for my idea of dubstep. that's not to say it ain't right, but it's just my opinion... actually i think this is my least favourite part of the track.

drums get a bit wonky, maybe that's what you're after but for me it seems hard to groove to... i love grooving ;)

at about 3:00 after the little breakdown when the drums are more pounding it sounds cool.

do you come from a house/acid/bassline background? tune seems to have that kind of vibe.

to be honest, i was getting a little bored towards the end... there's lots of changes, but... i dunno....

i think it's that 303ish lead sound, just doesn't sit right for me, and the tune feels like it's rushing a bit...

^^ this is just my opinion, everyone likes different music, and nothing I have just said is true. it's just feedback - take it with a fistful of salt!

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Post by amisane » Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:31 pm

alexwright wrote:Hey everyone, I've just been tinkering around in FL this morning and come up with a little funky/liquid kinda influenced loop here. Feedback more than welcome :)

http://rapidshare.com/files/301363493/A ... s.mp3.html

Sorry I couldn't Soundcloud it, there was a problem with the link.

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This sounds pro, really like the solid subs especially

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