Feed back wanted!

[rossyb18]

Hi guys Im new to this forum but have heard a lot of good things! I have been working on a track over the weekend and wanted some feedback and would also love to hear anyone else creations!!
Any constructive criticism is welcome, (this is a rough mix)
Thanks

http://www.sendspace.com/file/b8a927

http://www.sendspace.com/file/b8a927

[Trizla]

Downloaded and listening will post feedback soonish

[groucho_marxx]

listened to it a few times over last night i think it has potential, a little light, could fatten up the drums.
Ive only listened to it throught my msp3's so cant say if it needs more bass tho.