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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Abstrym » Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:29 am

juntistik wrote:
Really nice work there. I like the atmosphere the "guitary" synth, or whatever it is, creates. I do realize a Love Filter, don't I? :>
The High-Hats could pipe down a slight bit. The bass is alright, but I think it could be a bit softer/less raspy, hence supporting the smooth gloomy mood a bit more.
Damn you completely called that love philter, nice, haha, do you feel like it sounds cheesy or whatever? i was just trying to add some depth to the instrument, cant really tell how it turned out.

when i get back to the studio ill definitely mess with the oscs on my bass, i have alot of weird waveforms in there so maybe i should just throw on another sine or see if i can clean it up a bit. ill definitely post another copy later tonight

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I actually think it's alright, despite the fact it is easily recognizable. Maybe you should just mess with the settings/automations a little.
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made this with a mate over the past couple weeks on and off

2nd drop bline midrange needs work as does drum filtering.... a lot of channels but nearly there. Compression seems to have given the bounce a filthy ringing type sound :/

Let me know what yout think, bear in mind this is my first tune I think is worthy of listenin too
lp wrote:Nice one on the feedback guys, was just wondering if anyone thinks the percussion is too loud in the mix and weather the breakdown before the 2nd drop works well wth the rest of the tune.
Wow, really tight, moody stuff here. I love it! Also think it's quite there already, but concerning the breakdown I got this, bugging me: the synth starting at 2:58 is too choppy and should play more smoothly i think (especially with the sample at 3:00/3:01). Maybe add some attack or something. A slight change in it's melody might also help the whole thing. The High-Hats in the intro could be a little weaker, but except that, the mix is fine imo. Awesome one!
Elkie wrote:starting to wrap this one up now. first thing ive ever made that i think is almost worthy of gracing someone elses ears. let me know what you think, cheers!

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Solid bassline but I think it's a bit too constant. I like the subs in this one! You had me laughing at 0:55 though, when the Counter-Strike sounds kicked in. :>
I had a small detour.
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Post by p3rt2k8 » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:37 am

this is a track im workin on im pretty much lost with the tune n wouldnt mind some advice its not the first time ive tryed producing dubstep but ts my 1st track
ive actualy got somewere with if you know what i meen..

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Post by p3rt2k8 » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:38 am

please give constuctive critisism dnt need idiots givig me shit cos im new to this lol.

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Post by junior spesh » Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:34 pm

zonetrooper5 wrote:
junior spesh wrote:New wobbler! FEEDBACK PLEASE!

I give a fair amount of feedback so i fink its only fair i recieve sum

anyway, this is the foundation of tune im workin on>> Soundcloud
Really liking the piano sample and synths, obviously the song could be longer, I think the drums could be given some more punch and maybe add a saturator to your bass line to fatten it up, other then that I think your on to something pretty good.
SAFE, yh this is just half of the actual tune cuz i jus uploaded enuff 4 you 2 get an idea.. anything u want me to drop feedback on btw?
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Post by chemical dz » Thu Nov 26, 2009 5:49 pm

first tune, it sounds nasty but i don't no wer to go with the intro. Feedback would be nice , maybe some pointers on wer to take it. safe

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yCQZ0Zgh-Cs

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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:06 pm

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anything about this would be great no sub yet just melody

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Post by dj.c.jay » Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:30 pm

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This is a mix up of a few of my unfinished projects and ideas..... would love some feedback (please include time that you hear what you want to mention so I know wich project to work on)

thanks all :)

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Post by zonetrooper5 » Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:23 pm

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Post by marshy » Thu Nov 26, 2009 10:02 pm

Basis to a new track, any feedback would be appreciated! I'll return any favours.

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Post by aspect-dubz » Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:01 pm

marshy wrote:Basis to a new track, any feedback would be appreciated! I'll return any favours.

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wow! sound's sick mate...only thing i would really recommend is to chuck some atmospherics in the mix, maybe just one...apart from that im really feeling it, hit me up with a 320 if your handing them out when finished cause i'd love to rinse this :wink:

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Post by marshy » Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:16 pm

aspect-dubz wrote:
marshy wrote:Basis to a new track, any feedback would be appreciated! I'll return any favours.

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wow! sound's sick mate...only thing i would really recommend is to chuck some atmospherics in the mix, maybe just one...apart from that im really feeling it, hit me up with a 320 if your handing them out when finished cause i'd love to rinse this :wink:
Thanks mate! Yeah i'll be handing out 320's to anyone who asks.

Was actually adding a few atmospherics when i read this, but still stumped on an intro.

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Post by don88vito » Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:58 am

hey all, new here. id love some feedback on this work in progress track:

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Post by flownLess » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:32 am

anyone diggin' my latest tune "repped isle"
www.myspace.com/flownLess
(sorry, i don't have a downloadable version)

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Post by psyleon » Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:23 am

Yesterday got ableton. so that is what i made this night. never used ableton before, but now I think it's awesome))))

I think its very relaxing))))

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Post by mars » Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:24 am

Please let me know what u guys think!

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preview of a new track!

thanks in advance to those who listen

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Post by dj.c.jay » Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:58 pm

LOUD NOISES!!!! thats ace! like the bass

What you guys think to this one?

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Post by j_one » Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:58 pm

Not that good at this feedback lark but just had a quick little listen through some tracks.

@p3rt2k8
Pretty cool, bit of a head nod. Think it just needs some extra bits to add interest. Maybe put in some percussion along the way to give it pace or something.

@tripwire22
Synth sounds sick when it drops. Sub will definitely make this.

@dj.c.jay
Really nice intro. Drums are too quiet when they come in though, don't give enough impact. Nice atmosphere though, really like it. Tune at 2:30 is fucking sick!

@marshy
Really like that bass, very nice.

@don88vito
Piano is sick, was gonna recommend more bassy shit, but then the wobble came in. Would like to hear the drums come through more to really vibe to it.

Couple tracks of mine... this one I made earlier:
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and this one I did ages ago but could never figure how to finish it off...
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Post by dj.c.jay » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:07 pm

Cheers J-0ne

Lovin the atmospheres in let me know and 1:26 of heavy thats a sick little distorted bit there

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Post by dj.c.jay » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:21 pm

another one see what you all think
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would love some feedback

cheers, c.jay

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Post by j_one » Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:43 pm

Love your sound mate, that track's heavy.

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