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Province
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by Province » Sun Nov 29, 2009 11:08 pm
just a new beat, pm for 320's if you want this version, looking for some constructive critisicm
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fuzz_2k
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by fuzz_2k » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:34 am
nice tune, very lively. although i feel the lead noise kills the drums a bit at the drop. When the lead chills out at around 2.55ish.
the track takes on a new groove. much more dynamic! more interesting to listen to. i think a move around would do the trick
just my opion thou, get some others!
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Crane_Must
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by Crane_Must » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:35 am
All solid material, but the sections are a bit long. Maybe cut each bit down, use it as part of a track?
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Province
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by Province » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:37 am
fuzz_2k wrote:nice tune, very lively. although i feel the lead noise kills the drums a bit at the drop. When the lead chills out at around 2.55ish.
the track takes on a new groove. much more dynamic! more interesting to listen to. i think a move around would do the trick
just my opion thou, get some others!
cheers man, will see what i can do about that noise, by a "move around" what do you mean?
cheers for checkin!
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fuzz_2k
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by fuzz_2k » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:45 am
Province wrote:by a "move around" what do you mean?
same as what crane said, shorten some of the sections, and switch them up a bit
drums sound tight btw!
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Province
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by Province » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:52 am
cheers guys! will get on the re edit flex.
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Province
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by Province » Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:27 pm
bump, any more comments?

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dub-ray
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by dub-ray » Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:56 am
id love to hear it once yourve re worked it
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d1vine
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by d1vine » Tue Dec 01, 2009 7:38 am
try taking a little top end out from the initial buzz sort of lead, imo though... and yes the drum groove is really nice..
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