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Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by Province » Sun Nov 29, 2009 11:08 pm

just a new beat, pm for 320's if you want this version, looking for some constructive critisicm :D

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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by fuzz_2k » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:34 am

nice tune, very lively. although i feel the lead noise kills the drums a bit at the drop. When the lead chills out at around 2.55ish.
the track takes on a new groove. much more dynamic! more interesting to listen to. i think a move around would do the trick :D
just my opion thou, get some others!
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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by Crane_Must » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:35 am

All solid material, but the sections are a bit long. Maybe cut each bit down, use it as part of a track?

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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by Province » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:37 am

fuzz_2k wrote:nice tune, very lively. although i feel the lead noise kills the drums a bit at the drop. When the lead chills out at around 2.55ish.
the track takes on a new groove. much more dynamic! more interesting to listen to. i think a move around would do the trick :D
just my opion thou, get some others!
cheers man, will see what i can do about that noise, by a "move around" what do you mean?
cheers for checkin!

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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by fuzz_2k » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:45 am

Province wrote:by a "move around" what do you mean?
same as what crane said, shorten some of the sections, and switch them up a bit :D
drums sound tight btw!
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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by Province » Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:52 am

cheers guys! will get on the re edit flex.

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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by Province » Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:27 pm

bump, any more comments? :D

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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by dub-ray » Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:56 am

id love to hear it once yourve re worked it

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Re: Artek - Leaniency [320 on request]

Post by d1vine » Tue Dec 01, 2009 7:38 am

try taking a little top end out from the initial buzz sort of lead, imo though... and yes the drum groove is really nice..

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