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Post by projekt » Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:27 pm

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Ideas are welcome. :D
Im liking this notch! Nice syncopated drums, and i like whats going on with the bass, spend time on finishing this number!




New tune me and riley are working on at the moment, any feedback wud b tasty!


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Post by djaccel » Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:11 am

projekt wrote:New tune me and riley are working on at the moment, any feedback wud b tasty!


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Not bad as far as quality goes, snare is a bit forward for me maybe. The only crits I can offer is that when you stack that many synths on the bass the bass loses energy so you may want to try to separate out the parts that are real synth heavy and the parts that are more bassline intensive.


Here's the latest version of my latest tune. Deeper and grittier, esp. after the intro bassline. Best ones are at 0:56, 1:50, and after the break.
Any feedback appreciated.

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Post by djaccel » Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:13 am

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Post by zachmiller » Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:23 pm

giant panda, half life, nightmare, here comes mary, or cuddlin' on my myspace, www.myspace.com/zachmiller

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ANy idea?? any good....

Post by Bedroom_Dub » Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:25 pm

Hey sup ppl,

made this jokes track with video to match, my video editing skills are pretty poor but you get the feel of it. Put some of my mates stupid dance moves in at the end as well. Not sure whats missing or even if i should have used the the sound bite i did...any ideas???


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Post by CollisionCourse » Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:27 pm

zachmiller wrote:giant panda, half life, nightmare, here comes mary, or cuddlin' on my myspace, http://www.myspace.com/zachmiller
half life and here comes mary are both sick
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Post by Province » Wed Dec 09, 2009 10:27 pm

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a melodic piece
obviously not finished but i just wanted some feedback on what heads think of it so far.

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Post by aL2thaB » Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:04 pm

Yo guys would love a bit of feedback on this work in progress. lately iv been experimentin with new approaches to the way i make dubstep . This one is a kinda mellow soulful track, and hopefully it evokes some emotion in you.

Happy for all positive and negative feedback, im really lookin to develop my production so would really appreciate your opinions.

u can check the tune at http://www.myspace.com/al2thab

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Post by blip » Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:11 pm

Province wrote:Soundcloud

a melodic piece
obviously not finished but i just wanted some feedback on what heads think of it so far.
Well, I guess you will be disappointed, but you know what I really love? The intro, before the melody comes. I don't dislike the melody and I think it has character, but not my cup of tea. I kept wishing the intro would come back.

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Post by Province » Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:37 pm

blip wrote:
Province wrote:Soundcloud

a melodic piece
obviously not finished but i just wanted some feedback on what heads think of it so far.
Well, I guess you will be disappointed, but you know what I really love? The intro, before the melody comes. I don't dislike the melody and I think it has character, but not my cup of tea. I kept wishing the intro would come back.
maybe the intro will come back just for you :wink:
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Post by jsaxton » Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:40 am

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what chu think?
bit o fun really :D
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Post by notch » Thu Dec 10, 2009 3:32 am

projekt wrote:
notch wrote:Soundcloud
I start out at the drop..
Ideas are welcome. :D
Im liking this notch! Nice syncopated drums, and i like whats going on with the bass, spend time on finishing this number!




New tune me and riley are working on at the moment, any feedback wud b tasty!


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Post by tek_selecta » Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:47 am

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Post by djaccel » Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:51 am

jsaxton wrote:Soundcloud

what chu think?
bit o fun really :D
Liking the vibe on this one, not usually one for that style of dub but I'm feeling that one.
tek_selecta wrote:Soundcloud
I like everything else about the tune but the bass, it reminds me of a lawnmower or some other small engine. It just needs more ooomf behind it really.
Not bad though.



Here's the latest cut of this one. Changed up some of the hi hats throughout and hi passed all the basses and re-layered the sub bass to clear up some ugly frequencies coming through on the sub. My fav basses in this tune are at 0:56, 1:50, and after the breakdown. Any feedback/comments/crits appreciated!

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Post by blip » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:02 am

Accel, did you think about dropping the percussion altogether for a few bars, or so?

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Post by djaccel » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:34 am

blip wrote:Accel, did you think about dropping the percussion altogether for a few bars, or so?
You mean kick/hat/snare percussion or the hand drums, etc?

I have a couple short sections where drums leave for a bar or two, but I can toy with dropping or minimizing it for a while. I'll give it a shot!
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Post by blip » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:41 am

No, hand drums etc. A drier beat for a while, could be cool.

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Post by antipode » Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:02 am

http://www.myspace.com/epochdub

I did a cheeky burial bootleg! It is kind of finished but not really.

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Post by BAD AUTOPSY » Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:22 pm

Hey

just starting out. Trying to find my sound. some ukg and R&B flavours for your attention on mysapce. Let me know what you think. And any advice on getting louder mixes within ABleton would be apreciated. Just using master limiters to boost signal, but no ideal.

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