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Post by soulshynchyld » Wed Dec 16, 2009 10:43 pm

ay this 1 is alryt... the intro is fukt as...1.30 till it kicks to wat im loving. it gets pretty repetitive...but ay, i cant edit till ma mac is fixed!!
so as is.... REALLY SOME1 COMMENT!!chea
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Post by soulshynchyld » Wed Dec 16, 2009 10:46 pm

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comment on soundcloud please :D thank you[/quote]

mean bro...liking it hard...dark & heavy...just how i like it!!!chea
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Post by ven000m » Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:04 pm

thanks bro! :D
currently uploading another track i just made. i think it also turned out pretty good =)

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here: but i think i still needs some more synths/bass + more variation... after listening it to a few times i found some boring parts imo :/
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Post by miniweapon » Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:30 am

soulshynchyld wrote:ay this 1 is alryt... the intro is fukt as...1.30 till it kicks to wat im loving. it gets pretty repetitive...but ay, i cant edit till ma mac is fixed!!
so as is.... REALLY SOME1 COMMENT!!chea
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you could really make this track into something great. You have a good vibe goin with that chime synth or whatever it is. Get different drum samples. The rhythm gets lost between the drums the delay on your synth and your wobble bass. you could fix this by turning your drums up. Keep working on this one i would love to see it progress

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Post by miniweapon » Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:35 am

ph0nics wrote:Anyone care to comment on these beats? Not sure if they need more work done(+/- any element of the track). Opinions are greatly appreciated :roll:

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Sounds dope. Make it longer then your done

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Post by miniweapon » Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:43 am

junior spesh wrote:ANUVA NEW 1... More like a grime instro/dubstep hybrid as u can tell from the drums but the bassline is defo sum dubstep shit...

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The grime of your bass fits really well into the relaxed feel of this track. good work

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Post by moosed » Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:38 am

early stages but ya get the idea

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Post by Corkz » Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:48 pm

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This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.

It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:06 pm

latest mixes of our stuff
what do ya reckon?
thanks
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Post by j_one » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:07 pm

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New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?

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Post by the-devo » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:11 pm

soulshynchyld wrote: give me your opinion on this track!!chea

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I liked this very much. I love it's chill mood and I like it especially because the drums (except for the hihats, which I think are too punchy) remind me of Fight Club's OSTs.
The wobbles are sweet too, I like them too very much.
I really like how basically almost nothing here truly "wears" dubstep's characteristics (i.e.: the melody, the rhythm of the wobbles) but at the same time it's an awesome dubstep song.
I think it even has some jazzy rhythm - no joke.
Very good! But I don't hear any subs. Is it because there are no subs, or is my stereo screwing with me again?
8/10!
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Post by the-devo » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:15 pm

ph0nics wrote:Anyone care to comment on these beats? Not sure if they need more work done(+/- any element of the track). Opinions are greatly appreciated :roll:

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Hey, work on these! They're definitely worth the time! I think they're great. Honestly, if I would bump into one of these on youtube, I'd definitely fav them.
Keep up bro!
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.

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Post by the-devo » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:21 pm

Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force :lol:.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!

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ps: this is a remix
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:28 pm

the-devo wrote:Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force :lol:.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!

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ps: this is a remix

man that is upfront. love the bass

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:29 pm

j-one wrote:Soundcloud

New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
nice smooth build up, put a bigger sub bass in after, not a reese, just pure sub

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:32 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:latest mixes of our stuff
what do ya reckon?
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go on, give it a listen

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Post by j_one » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:32 pm

the-devo wrote:Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force :lol:.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!

Soundcloud
ps: this is a remix
Nice work, I was skeptical a halfstep beat would work at 100bpm, but it sounds good... has more of a hip hop headnod kinda pace. Safe.

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Post by j_one » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:33 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:
j-one wrote:Soundcloud

New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
nice smooth build up, put a bigger sub bass in after, not a reese, just pure sub
Cheers mate, does have a sub under it but yeah I think the reese removes its impact, will give it a go!

EDIT: Will have a gander at your tunes in a sec!
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:35 pm

j-one wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
j-one wrote:Soundcloud

New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
nice smooth build up, put a bigger sub bass in after, not a reese, just pure sub
Cheers mate, does have a sub under it but yeah I think the reese removes its impact, will give it a go!
no worries mate, use a mad compresser setting and get it to bump

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:39 pm

Corkz wrote:Soundcloud
This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.

It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!
nice minimal styles, get a mad bassline on it

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