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madwabiii
ay this 1 is alryt... the intro is fukt as...1.30 till it kicks to wat im loving. it gets pretty repetitive...but ay, i cant edit till ma mac is fixed!!
so as is.... REALLY SOME1 COMMENT!!chea
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so as is.... REALLY SOME1 COMMENT!!chea
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"The people, who were trying to make this world worse... are not taking a day off. How can I? Light up the darkness."
"The people, who were trying to make this world worse... are not taking a day off. How can I? Light up the darkness."
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mean bro...liking it hard...dark & heavy...just how i like it!!!chea
comment on soundcloud please

mean bro...liking it hard...dark & heavy...just how i like it!!!chea
Soundcloud new 01-04-11
"The people, who were trying to make this world worse... are not taking a day off. How can I? Light up the darkness."
"The people, who were trying to make this world worse... are not taking a day off. How can I? Light up the darkness."
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thanks bro! 
currently uploading another track i just made. i think it also turned out pretty good =)
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here: but i think i still needs some more synths/bass + more variation... after listening it to a few times i found some boring parts imo :/
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currently uploading another track i just made. i think it also turned out pretty good =)
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here: but i think i still needs some more synths/bass + more variation... after listening it to a few times i found some boring parts imo :/
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Re: madwabiii
you could really make this track into something great. You have a good vibe goin with that chime synth or whatever it is. Get different drum samples. The rhythm gets lost between the drums the delay on your synth and your wobble bass. you could fix this by turning your drums up. Keep working on this one i would love to see it progresssoulshynchyld wrote:ay this 1 is alryt... the intro is fukt as...1.30 till it kicks to wat im loving. it gets pretty repetitive...but ay, i cant edit till ma mac is fixed!!
so as is.... REALLY SOME1 COMMENT!!chea
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ph0nics wrote:Anyone care to comment on these beats? Not sure if they need more work done(+/- any element of the track). Opinions are greatly appreciated![]()
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Sounds dope. Make it longer then your done
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junior spesh wrote:ANUVA NEW 1... More like a grime instro/dubstep hybrid as u can tell from the drums but the bassline is defo sum dubstep shit...
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The grime of your bass fits really well into the relaxed feel of this track. good work
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This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.
It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!
This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.
It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!
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New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
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I liked this very much. I love it's chill mood and I like it especially because the drums (except for the hihats, which I think are too punchy) remind me of Fight Club's OSTs.
The wobbles are sweet too, I like them too very much.
I really like how basically almost nothing here truly "wears" dubstep's characteristics (i.e.: the melody, the rhythm of the wobbles) but at the same time it's an awesome dubstep song.
I think it even has some jazzy rhythm - no joke.
Very good! But I don't hear any subs. Is it because there are no subs, or is my stereo screwing with me again?
8/10!
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
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Hey, work on these! They're definitely worth the time! I think they're great. Honestly, if I would bump into one of these on youtube, I'd definitely fav them.ph0nics wrote:Anyone care to comment on these beats? Not sure if they need more work done(+/- any element of the track). Opinions are greatly appreciated![]()
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Keep up bro!
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
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Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force
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The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!
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ps: this is a remix
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force

The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!
Soundcloud
ps: this is a remix
Hip-Hop had the advantage of being born before the age of information (the internet).
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
It had time to develop naturally into the complex subculture it is today. Dubstep didn't have a chance.
If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.
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the-devo wrote:Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!
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ps: this is a remix
man that is upfront. love the bass
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nice smooth build up, put a bigger sub bass in after, not a reese, just pure subj-one wrote:Soundcloud
New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
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go on, give it a listen
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Nice work, I was skeptical a halfstep beat would work at 100bpm, but it sounds good... has more of a hip hop headnod kinda pace. Safe.the-devo wrote:Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!
Soundcloud
ps: this is a remix
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Cheers mate, does have a sub under it but yeah I think the reese removes its impact, will give it a go!deadnoisesystem wrote:nice smooth build up, put a bigger sub bass in after, not a reese, just pure subj-one wrote:Soundcloud
New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
EDIT: Will have a gander at your tunes in a sec!
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no worries mate, use a mad compresser setting and get it to bumpj-one wrote:Cheers mate, does have a sub under it but yeah I think the reese removes its impact, will give it a go!deadnoisesystem wrote:nice smooth build up, put a bigger sub bass in after, not a reese, just pure subj-one wrote:Soundcloud
New tune I'm working on, not convinced by the slight build up to the "drop" at all, plus want to make the bass more interesting... any thoughts?
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nice minimal styles, get a mad bassline on itCorkz wrote:Soundcloud
This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.
It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!
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