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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:06 pm

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deadnoisesystem wrote:latest mixes of our stuff
what do ya reckon?
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Post by j_one » Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:45 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest mixes of our stuff
what do ya reckon?
thanks
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go on, give it a listen
anyone out there?
Sounds good mate, dark and ambient, wobbles weren't overpowering which i like... only thing I'd suggest is bring the drums up a bit in the mix.

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Post by j_one » Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:47 pm

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Anymore feedback/suggestions? Cheers.

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Post by christthetiger » Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:50 pm

sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:57 pm

j-one wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest mixes of our stuff
what do ya reckon?
thanks
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go on, give it a listen
anyone out there?
Sounds good mate, dark and ambient, wobbles weren't overpowering which i like... only thing I'd suggest is bring the drums up a bit in the mix.
thanks man, duly noted

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Post by christthetiger » Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:03 pm

^^ hey bruv im loving that lo-fi looped out jazz shit. im not feeling those few bass hits before the big bass comes in. overall the style is nasty and keep it up! what program are you using?>
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:17 pm

christthetiger wrote:^^ hey bruv im loving that lo-fi looped out jazz shit. im not feeling those few bass hits before the big bass comes in. overall the style is nasty and keep it up! what program are you using?>
thanks bruv, werent sure about those either
i use garageband and live 8

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Post by CollisionCourse » Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:17 pm

christthetiger wrote:sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!

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thats very, very sick...
only thing id change (besides the outtro lol) is change the melody of the synth on the bassline, it sounds sick as it is, but a little variation every few beats will keep it interesting, otherwise it will get a bit repetetive over the entire track. that my opinion though :wink:

heres something ive started, im on the second drop and im pretty sure the kick is too quiet, let me know what you think :t:
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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:36 pm

CollisionCourse wrote:
christthetiger wrote:sup dub bruddas. im working on this tracl now. its not even close to being done and everything is all over the place towsards the end, but i was just wondering if anyone was feeeeeeelin it. i think its nasty. and it has potential to rip it, just trying to figure out structure aznd trying to listen rather than look. BIG UP!

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thats very, very sick...
only thing id change (besides the outtro lol) is change the melody of the synth on the bassline, it sounds sick as it is, but a little variation every few beats will keep it interesting, otherwise it will get a bit repetetive over the entire track. that my opinion though :wink:

heres something ive started, im on the second drop and im pretty sure the kick is too quiet, let me know what you think :t:
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sounds nice and minimal, yeah man id ramp up an 808 kick in there to give it a bit more bounce

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Post by dignan » Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:31 pm

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could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:03 pm

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
nice mellow sounds and a laidback vibe, just missing a little bit of something to rip it up

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Post by the-devo » Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:10 pm

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the-devo wrote:Hi,
Could someone give their opinion on this new track I'm working on?
It's nothing like I've ever done before; I always make dark/violent
stuff but this time I put myself to the test and made a happy tune by force :lol:.
The tempo is at around 100bpm which I don't like but that's the only way I could make it work with the vocals. eh..
My bandmate (the guy I work with on Naamah) likes its slowness and I'm also getting used to it, but please please give me some feedback!

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man that is upfront. love the bass
Thanks, man! :D I'm glad it eventually turned out well.
j-one wrote: Nice work, I was skeptical a halfstep beat would work at 100bpm, but it sounds good... has more of a hip hop headnod kinda pace. Safe.
Thanks bro! Yeah I was skeptical about the halfstep and 100bpm too, and you're right its mood is more hip-hop "flavored", but I think it still might be playable at dubstep parties.. amirite?
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If Hip-Hop was a fully developed husky feared by millions, then Dubstep is the inbred chihuahua on steroids incapable of living but adored by billions.

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Post by dignan » Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:01 am

deadnoisesystem wrote:
dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
nice mellow sounds and a laidback vibe, just missing a little bit of something to rip it up
thanks for listening man. i'm not really going for a crazy/filthy vibe on this tune, is that what you meant by 'rip it up'?

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Post by christthetiger » Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:17 am

collision, that track is gangster, i kinda got lost at the second drop, and the kick is mad quiet. :z:
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Post by Kochari » Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:07 am

Okay, so here's a couple of WIP things I've been working on, try and get past the horrible mixing, until recently I was mixing in headphones... :a:

http://www.myspace.com/kochari

The only one thats really dubstep is "No Accident", let me know what you think!

EDIT: Argh, soundcloud won't let me play tunes (i have a REALLY bad PC atm) but i'm sure they're allbrilliant... :?
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My name is Dom and I like making ambientish music and drinking tea. Nice to meet you.

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:16 am

dignan wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:
dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
nice mellow sounds and a laidback vibe, just missing a little bit of something to rip it up
thanks for listening man. i'm not really going for a crazy/filthy vibe on this tune, is that what you meant by 'rip it up'?
kinda, i mean its real nice, and im feeling that vibe, just needs a little kick up to drive the track

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Post by j_one » Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:20 am

dignan wrote:Soundcloud

could I get some feedback on this tune please? I'll return the favor don't worry ya'll!
Gorgeous track man... really liked the second drop. Was going to suggest more sub to get the vibes really going, but it might just be these shitty headphones (on a laptop atm!).

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:28 am

how about this one?
the breakdown needs working out properly
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Post by Kochari » Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:36 am

Corkz wrote:Soundcloud
This is a short introduction to my next tune, let me know what you think so far.
This was inspired by Emalkay- When i look at you.

It's really quiet so make sure you turn your speakers up!
Nice, really liking the understated menace here 8)
My name is Dom and I like making ambientish music and drinking tea. Nice to meet you.

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