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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:09 pm

rossyb18 wrote:So this is a small intro i created this morning? I do not know what to make of it! Nothings really done properly i just wacked in a quick bass, just an idea!!
Any ideas whether i should pursue it? where should i go with it? Are the drums good?
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nice beats, could be fattened up by adding as 808 kick under the other kick,
nice breezy melody

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Post by rossyb18 » Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:12 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:
rossyb18 wrote:So this is a small intro i created this morning? I do not know what to make of it! Nothings really done properly i just wacked in a quick bass, just an idea!!
Any ideas whether i should pursue it? where should i go with it? Are the drums good?
Feed Back twould be sweeeeeet!
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nice beats, could be fattened up by adding as 808 kick under the other kick,
nice breezy melody
Coool... thanks for the reply,, an 808 kick u say, i shall give it ago!! thanks !

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:45 pm

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deadnoisesystem wrote:could i get a little more on these two,
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ill get on this livecut bizness. nice dark tune here. snare needs to be a bit more snappy though, sounds a bit too low at the minute. this tunes heavy on the weight.
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Post by tripwire22 » Thu Dec 24, 2009 5:40 pm

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would love some feedback on this 8bit ish remix i did on my own track ill offer feedback to anyone who has something to say
I love the drums and most of the synths, but the bass (I think it's the bass) I'm really not feeling. Maybe work on the timbre a little bit, get some more low end behind it. I'd just try and get it to sit better, it seems at odds with the mix. Once again, the drums are really good.
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i agree with the bass in my track ill sort it out, for your song i cant say anything bad about it it sounds great and i always love a metallic bassline

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Post by tomm » Thu Dec 24, 2009 6:33 pm

.... redundant post
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Post by djaccel » Thu Dec 24, 2009 10:03 pm

tripwire22 wrote:
djaccel wrote:
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would love some feedback on this 8bit ish remix i did on my own track ill offer feedback to anyone who has something to say
I love the drums and most of the synths, but the bass (I think it's the bass) I'm really not feeling. Maybe work on the timbre a little bit, get some more low end behind it. I'd just try and get it to sit better, it seems at odds with the mix. Once again, the drums are really good.
Just my 2c

Here's my latest tune, any feedback appreciated!

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i agree with the bass in my track ill sort it out, for your song i cant say anything bad about it it sounds great and i always love a metallic bassline
Cheers mate

Post it up again after some work and I'll check it out, I like the idea for sure
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Post by tomm » Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:54 pm

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any feedback welcome on this one. :)

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Post by christthetiger » Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:53 am

tomm wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback welcome on this one. :)
big tune tomm!!! only thing i would change is maybe have a longer intro and build up into the drums. maybe like rainforesty background or someting to dat effect with beginnning synth!

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Post by bmills » Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:33 am

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I would really love some feedback. I'm gonna start reviewing others asap
ha ha ha. you snapped with the sampling in the beginning.

should make the snare more prominent, and try distorting the bass so it sounds as dangerous as a fucking lion. :twisted:
haha

really cool idea though lol
Good ideas, and yeah i'm gonna shorten the beginning up by halfing the breakdown if that makes sense. Thanks a lot for the feedback!
wow so i listened to this earlier and then i just stumbled on this other song http://soundcloud.com/douster/douster-king-of-africa and im like have i heard this but it was urs i was thinking of. i thought the waveform looked kind of similar too
yeah i used that sample :D this song inspired me, I heard it at a club and I'm like HOLY SHIT I gotta remix/refix/re-whatever it!

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Post by clemsonheadies » Fri Dec 25, 2009 4:49 am

@bmillz - this song is DOPE!!!! Like you said, the intro is a bit long, maybe try introducing the breakdown after the first vocal sample @ 0:41? but other than that it sounds great. Maybe keep up with what you've got going for a couple more verses, then drop the vocal sample again, and then go back into the main verse in double time? Sorry if that doesn't make sense haha.. the trees have got my brain in overdrive.

@accell - very nice man, I really like the direction that bassline is going. The sample in the middle sounds a little f'ed up though.. not quite sure what happened there

Here's my latest foray into production.. havent made anything in quite a while, and I've only got laptop speakers to work with for the moment, but any feedback would be awesome!
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Post by Wabberjocky » Fri Dec 25, 2009 5:07 am

christthetiger wrote:
tomm wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback welcome on this one. :)
big tune tomm!!! only thing i would change is maybe have a longer intro and build up into the drums. maybe like rainforesty background or someting to dat effect with beginnning synth!

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aye very laid back track, I like it. I agree with the above at the idea of adding more elements, like rain sounds, to spice it up so it doesn't get boring.

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Post by ldfd » Fri Dec 25, 2009 5:35 am

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been working on this one for a bit, im not quite sure if its finished yet, let me know what you think

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Post by j.nitrous » Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:23 am

This still needs a bit of work but I'm overseas at the moment so I thought I'd get some feedback on it before I got home.
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Post by Owers » Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:33 am

j.nitrous wrote:This still needs a bit of work but I'm overseas at the moment so I thought I'd get some feedback on it before I got home.
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Any feedback would be great. :D
I'm really liking this. The intro is excellent. The sample in the middle was a bit too drawn out for my taste, but the drop that follows is solid. Overall this is quite the track you've got, can't wait to see it after the work is done!

Here's a new track I've got approaching the finished point. Nothing like some uplifting dub for the Holidays!

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Post by tomm » Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:02 pm

Wabberjocky wrote:
christthetiger wrote:
tomm wrote:Soundcloud

any feedback welcome on this one. :)
big tune tomm!!! only thing i would change is maybe have a longer intro and build up into the drums. maybe like rainforesty background or someting to dat effect with beginnning synth!

:t:
aye very laid back track, I like it. I agree with the above at the idea of adding more elements, like rain sounds, to spice it up so it doesn't get boring.
thanks guys! aye, there's a lot still to be done. i want to maybe slip in a couple of well picked and placed vocal samples, jazz up the percussion a bit and maybe elongate the intro like you said. how does it sound mix wise?

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Post by Max4Beats » Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:47 pm

NEW TUNE

Should i ad vocals?

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Post by jsaxton » Fri Dec 25, 2009 4:13 pm

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Post by z6z » Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:38 pm

nvm lol :|
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Post by jstick » Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:21 am

Hey guys Im new here, Only recently started producing dubstep and after reading a lot about getting some filthy bass sounds i decided to give it a go. I've made around 5 tests and I'd say this is the one closest to finished to me. Lemme know what you guys think, how to improve and all that good stuff. Cheers again!

I'll try my best to give my input, but since I'm only beginning I doubt I will be of any help.

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Post by cyberneticghost » Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:53 am

I've never posted my work in this thread, but there's a first time for everything, right? So here goes:

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