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[knell]

Got a new track up on my soundcloud and myspace page, check the links in my sig; track is called Green Feet.

pluses:
+nice panning! always a good idea
+epic vocal sample
+nice split second silence in between the buildup and drop
+super sweet progression of the wub in the drop

minuses:
-the twitch 'zing!' synth near the beginning and through the drop gets a little grating and seems to interrupt the flow of the song a bit
-the drop progression might want to go a little faster... the fast wubs go on just past the 'woah' point as far as duration... maybe a quicker change or another synth interspersed in there might be a good idea
-synth starts to sound a bit paniced and dry near the end.. maybe more sub bass or a deeper wub for a richer timbre? (closer to that in 'heavy rain', perhaps)

much love, keep it up

[knell]

Got a new tune on the soundcloud have a listen and feedback.

Quite interested about what you think cos its quite different...

(written in reference to the track 'to war')

plus:
+wow. unique comes to mind first.. with the bongos and the off-rhythm orchestra at the beginning, i definitely did not see that drop synth coming. intense!
+bongos for the win
+nice progressive feel
+scared the shit out of me
+left me scratching my head

advice:
-i disliked the off-rhythmness of the orchestral parts at first, but i grew to enjoy them towards the end. still not sure what to think about them
-that drop synth might just be (sounds weird coming from me) a wee bit too harsh... its good! dont get me wrong, but over and over it starts to hit your head like a brick
-maybe occasionally delay-oscillate (thor style) that drop synth a bit? if thats possible? not sure how you made it

much love

[knell]

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just finished. Need to change some things but yeah, any feedback ?

Happy new year !

plus:
+tribal feel of the beat
+super crisp, made me jump out my seat a bit when it came on
+ethereal feel, almost trance like
+random robot noise synths are win!
+all the highs make the lows knock your guts, beautiful
+gauntlet legends sample? whaaat? very nice haha
+some noises felt like they were wiping down my brain they were so crisp
+8-bit mario bit at the end gave me a good chuckle

advice:
-almost so trance-y, it would be hard to dance to (for me at least, but i am a dancer.. if you're not looking to jump the crowd then disregard this)
-cricket triplet thing? sounding noise is piercing to me, its good just maybe EQ out the high end white noise down so it doesnt screech?
-super slow build can get rough (goes back to the trance comment)

other than that, i think you have a super unique track on your hands! thanks for that refreshing taste of music

much love

[tripwire22]

i'll confess i put my track up in the DUBs section, but i kinda want feedback and not just 320 pleas so ...

if you're not too busy, head over to

http://www.myspace.com/baronrogue

and listen to the first track on the player, "Thirsty Android"

and let me know what you think! comments/criticism/advice is more more MORE than welcome, as this is my first published dubstep track

... and yes, you can get a threetwenty if you enjoy it and ask nicely haha

idk what it is but that track is kinda trippy i like it alot reminds me of like fighting the final boss in a hard video game and your not winning at all lol. good work and thanks for the comments i kinda am going for a trancey dubstep mixture

[knell]

idk what it is but that track is kinda trippy i like it alot reminds me of like fighting the final boss in a hard video game and your not winning at all lol. good work and thanks for the comments i kinda am going for a trancey dubstep mixture

glad you enjoyed it, your description of it definitely cracked me up thanks for the feedback,

and i'm a fan of trance and dubstep, so your efforts to blend the two are much appreciated, in my book

[jaydot]

Ignore this. Cheers.

[jaydot]

http://www.myspace.com/jaydotuk <<<< track "Ghosts".....no clear sound on the drop on soundcloud for some reason. This sounds better.

[junior spesh]

HAVING DROPPED FEEDBACK PRIOR TO POSTING MY OWN TUNE(S), I WOULD APPRECIATE SUM FEEDBACK ON THIS 1>>>

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Will return feedback upon receiving!

now this one i like! the oldschool soul feeling in the beginning and throughout is a nice and original touch. the drop is nice and massive, the swell is well constructed and its a good idea overall.

the only thing i would recommend is more synth variety within the drop, it seems like the second synth that comes in is the same as the first but with a different freq... this is my personal preference, of course... if you like the consistency then by all means keep it the way it is, it's definitely groovin'

much love

Yh safe... it was originally a grime instrumental...

[tripwire22]

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something i was workin on last night its got a somewhat old school dubstep style i wanna say like DMZ but i rather not embarrass myself saying that

[CollisionCourse]

Looking for some feedback on my first dubstep track. I was in a weird mood during the holidays and decided to make a christmas themed wobbler, would have had it up in time for the 25th but Soundcloud and this forum hate me. Would love to hear what you guys think, especially with regards to the mixing/mastering cos that is still a total black art to me.

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i agree with knell, most holiday themed dubstep tunes are cringeworthy and generally shit, but youve pulled it off very well. the grinch sample does sound a bit obvious but i dont think it really matters as its only heard once. im probably nit picking here but the synth that comes in with the bassline on the drop sounds too loud. still very good

[jaydot]

Looking for some feedback on my first dubstep track. I was in a weird mood during the holidays and decided to make a christmas themed wobbler, would have had it up in time for the 25th but Soundcloud and this forum hate me. Would love to hear what you guys think, especially with regards to the mixing/mastering cos that is still a total black art to me.

Not a bad effort at all, like the vocal sample.

[CollisionCourse]

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being grafting since my last post. let me know what you think of it!

[tripwire22]

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being grafting since my last post. let me know what you think of it!

i really like the intro and the bit after 3 mins but its a bit of the same over and over needs like one more sound idk. i could be wrong cuz it does sound pretty good though, plz say something about the song in my post above you somewhere

[CollisionCourse]

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being grafting since my last post. let me know what you think of it!

i really like the intro and the bit after 3 mins but its a bit of the same over and over needs like one more sound idk. i could be wrong cuz it does sound pretty good though, plz say something about the song in my post above you somewhere

yeah i think your right, it does need a bit more variation, i was gonna have a 2 step beat on that drop on 3 mins you were on about and then go back to the other drums othe last drop but it doesnt really fit the style of the tune i dont think.
your tune is really good, its definately got the old dubstep sound with the reggae tune on top of it. the snare sound a bit loud to my ears, in your face and kind of distorts the rest of the tune when it hits. might just be my homophobe. ears though.

[z6z]

//DELETE ME

[hectic]

A couple of tunes I just finished:

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[HangManDubstep]

two new tracks for u guys

Dr.Pepper=mad sort of lets go mental tune
Hoppipolla rmx=chilled

enjoy them and leave a comment..

thnx

[Supra23]

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A null in the wind .....BranNew!

I like the wobbles mate...

My proper headphones are broken doe so i cnt hear alot of the detail in the tune.... but frm what im hearing, sounds guuuud...

Word! I Appreciate it brov! Lemme know any other feedback....

[z6z]

plus:
+tribal feel of the beat
+super crisp, made me jump out my seat a bit when it came on
+ethereal feel, almost trance like
+random robot noise synths are win!
+all the highs make the lows knock your guts, beautiful
+gauntlet legends sample? whaaat? very nice haha
+some noises felt like they were wiping down my brain they were so crisp
+8-bit mario bit at the end gave me a good chuckle

advice:
-almost so trance-y, it would be hard to dance to (for me at least, but i am a dancer.. if you're not looking to jump the crowd then disregard this)
-cricket triplet thing? sounding noise is piercing to me, its good just maybe EQ out the high end white noise down so it doesnt screech?
-super slow build can get rough (goes back to the trance comment)

other than that, i think you have a super unique track on your hands! thanks for that refreshing taste of music

much love

wow, thank you for the feedback ! That's all i can say because your exhaustive feedback kinda KO-d me lol and i just woke.
much love back 2 u bro

[thomas edison]

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new track i made, would love some opinions

thanks

oke this is not working, anyone know why?

http://soundcloud.com/thomasderijk/leek-1