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Re: PUT YOUR FINISHED TRACKS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by CollisionCourse » Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:05 pm

jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
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probably sobbing, hell be back though, he loves us.
and oh my word what a an absolute banger :o
the spaces in between the drums make it BAAAAD
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Post by IanMassoth » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:13 am

jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
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go guys go!!
Well fuck me, get a sample in there and that shit will get you signed.

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Post by soundwize » Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:02 am

My first attemp at dubstep.A simple skanked out roller with just pure sub bass tone (since im not that good doing wobblez).What u guys think? dancefloor worthy? hehe

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Post by tripwire22 » Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:35 am

jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
Soundcloud
go guys go!!
knell is takin a break he said to me cuz of some Nasty PM's he got

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Post by calicolea » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:37 am

jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
Soundcloud
go guys go!!
This is solid! Great work as usual!
Keep 'em coming, man!

Here's the newest, I'd love some feedback, my monitors are... um... nonexistant... I'm sure this would need some masterings...
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Thanks all for all the support and inspiration you've all been giving since I got here!

Peace!
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Post by djaccel » Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:01 am

calicolea wrote:
Here's the newest, I'd love some feedback, my monitors are... um... nonexistant... I'm sure this would need some masterings...
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Thanks all for all the support and inspiration you've all been giving since I got here!

Peace!
I didn't have a chance to listen to it on the best of speakers, so I can't speak to the mastering, but it sounded good to me! Love the music conceptually, and the textures are fantastic! Really good work.

My latest is in my sig, check it out and leave me some feedback!

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Post by noizy parka » Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:18 am

jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
Soundcloud
go guys go!!
Siick bro, maybe take the drums to steppier places towards the middle.

But also fine the way it is

Nice one

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Post by noizy parka » Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:03 pm

djaccel wrote: I didn't have a chance to listen to it on the best of speakers, so I can't speak to the mastering, but it sounded good to me! Love the music conceptually, and the textures are fantastic! Really good work.

My latest is in my sig, check it out and leave me some feedback!

Thanks!
Sounds pretty good man, maybe bring up that air raid sample a touch at the beginging of the drop, bass sounds tight. standard Wbl bizness

Maybe the wobble needs a few more switch ups and automation... it goes on for some time...

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Post by sever » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:13 pm

Here's my first properly worked on and hopefully finished bit. let me know what you think.

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Thanks a lot.

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Post by last & least » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:28 pm

djaccel wrote: My latest is in my sig, check it out and leave me some feedback!

Thanks!
Thats a fucking mental bassline.... i was gonna say the beat is pretty sample, but i guess you can't have both a complicated bassline and drums.....

that first drop goes on for way too long though.... something that explosive can't just be wringed out, you got use it a bit and save up the amo for later... And then you just do the same drop repeated! Great beat but not enough time taken on the arrangement.
calicolea wrote:
Here's the newest, I'd love some feedback, my monitors are... um... nonexistant... I'm sure this would need some masterings...


Peace!
nice synth line, and intersting choice of hi hats, liking the syncopation... Really melodik man, you really should get monitors, proper potential yeah! Nice 8 bit feel, i can imgaine getting so high to this :)..... drums maybe could be a bit more prominent, i know your going for that chilled out feel, but thery practically none existent... Yeah big ups man!
soundwize wrote:My first attemp at dubstep.A simple skanked out roller with just pure sub bass tone (since im not that good doing wobblez).What u guys think? dancefloor worthy? hehe
nice first try man, i don't have sub on me at the moment so can't really comment too well on it.... But the drums could do with being a bit louder, and the kicks are a bit rigid, almost always on the beat, like what your doing with the drum roll samples though.... and theres nice space in the track..... YOu been producing other stuff to this before? Nice and dubby atleast :)
jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
who the jeff is knell.... :oops: will i regret saying that??

nice static fx going on, build tension nicely, and then that drop is huge.... and you manged to pull off the silence aswell, usually just sounds rubbish... oh shit aand then theres panning..... you are a very dirt fella..... all ican say is the beats are a bit sparse, but i guess thats what happens when you an ultra mental bassline....


anyways heres mine
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Post by eldon » Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:47 pm

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Alrite Guys
I could really do with some feedback on this one,
basically need to know if its good or not lol
is it too repetitive? Anything I should change?
All feedback very much appreciated :)
Thanks!

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Post by IanMassoth » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:27 pm

last & least wrote:
who the jeff is knell.... :oops: will i regret saying that??

nice static fx going on, build tension nicely, and then that drop is huge.... and you manged to pull off the silence aswell, usually just sounds rubbish... oh shit aand then theres panning..... you are a very dirt fella..... all ican say is the beats are a bit sparse, but i guess thats what happens when you an ultra mental bassline....


anyways heres mine and i'm gonna writ the last word in capital letters so it grabs attention like the n00bs do cos i am a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b
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Haha stop calling yourself a noob dude, your sound is fine and your just making people ignore you with such a label. I dig the twinkles in the first track. Reminds me of almamagation by bar 9. Guitar may be giving the wrong vibe though?

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Post by noizy parka » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:31 pm

last & least wrote:

anyways heres mine and i'm gonna writ the last word in capital letters so it grabs attention like the n00bs do cos i am a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b
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Some nice ideas in there man.. wicked sound for a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b

Keep it up man

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Post by last & least » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:38 pm

IanMassoth wrote:
last & least wrote:
who the jeff is knell.... :oops: will i regret saying that??

nice static fx going on, build tension nicely, and then that drop is huge.... and you manged to pull off the silence aswell, usually just sounds rubbish... oh shit aand then theres panning..... you are a very dirt fella..... all ican say is the beats are a bit sparse, but i guess thats what happens when you an ultra mental bassline....


anyways heres mine and i'm gonna writ the last word in capital letters so it grabs attention like the n00bs do cos i am a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b
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Haha stop calling yourself a noob dude, your sound is fine and your just making people ignore you with such a label. I dig the twinkles in the first track. Reminds me of almamagation by bar 9. Guitar may be giving the wrong vibe though?
haha, cheers mate, just edited my post accordingly :wink:

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Post by eldon » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:46 pm

noizy parka wrote:
last & least wrote:

anyways heres mine and i'm gonna writ the last word in capital letters so it grabs attention like the n00bs do cos i am a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b
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Some nice ideas in there man.. wicked sound for a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b

Keep it up man
Noob? Fuck Right Off lol...that tune is sick! All i can say advice-wise is that i think you should put a low pass filter on that high pitch melody cos its good but its not easy on the ears, maybe even turn it down a little bit, but ye ratin the tune hard!

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Post by Wabberjocky » Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:54 pm

jsaxton wrote:yalreet guys :D
wouldnt mind if i could have some feedback on this
and where in the world is knell?
Soundcloud
go guys go!!
ok very sick, I really like the spacing and your electrified goodness killing it throughout the track. I don't think though that you can go through the entire song using the same spacey rhythm pattern since it gets old near the end, that some points you should change up the drums so the wide space sounds fresh everytime. Also maybe more atmospheric textures? Sick tune though.

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Post by dark elixir » Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:59 pm

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Post by last & least » Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:23 pm

eldon wrote:
noizy parka wrote:
last & least wrote:

anyways heres mine and i'm gonna writ the last word in capital letters so it grabs attention like the n00bs do cos i am a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b
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Some nice ideas in there man.. wicked sound for a n00b, trapped in n00b, which was eaten by a n000b.... yes triple 0 n00b

Keep it up man
Noob? Fuck Right Off lol...that tune is sick! All i can say advice-wise is that i think you should put a low pass filter on that high pitch melody cos its good but its not easy on the ears, maybe even turn it down a little bit, but ye ratin the tune hard!
nah, i'm still n00b man! Only been going a few months.... Yeah the trebles can tend to fuck you up a bit... ill look into it, cheers mate

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Post by Max4Beats » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:21 pm

Do ye Like?

Any feedback?



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Post by Tragic_Gash » Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:37 pm

calicolea wrote:
Here's the newest, I'd love some feedback, my monitors are... um... nonexistant... I'm sure this would need some masterings...
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Thanks all for all the support and inspiration you've all been giving since I got here!

Peace!
really like this man, and u've done well in the mix without monitors, i rckon the little bits of white noise (like in the middle break) could be a little bit cleaner maybe? very nice tho

peace

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