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junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:36 pm

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DIY: Suttin im workin on, as usual, i get fuck all feedback on the first asking so...

DROP FEEDBACK!

Nad yes it is me beatboxing at the beginning, hence the title: DIY

critical sound system · Post by **critical sound system** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:37 pm

Hi dsf fam'
a tune im working on atm
feedback appriciated.

its on the soundcloud
http://soundcloud.com/critical-dubz

Pitchdownplease · Post by **Pitchdownplease** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:46 pm

Got a couple things on the go atm, kinda hit writers block on the bassline side of things, so im looking for some feedback on this beat I've got going on, and If anyone gets any "feel" to what kind of bassline would bit, because im completely blank atm, everything sounds shit, soundcloud bellow, cheers.

Soundcloud

louissmusic · Post by **louissmusic** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:51 pm

Pitchdownplease wrote:Got a couple things on the go atm, kinda hit writers block on the bassline side of things, so im looking for some feedback on this beat I've got going on, and If anyone gets any "feel" to what kind of bassline would bit, because im completely blank atm, everything sounds shit, soundcloud bellow, cheers.

Soundcloud

liking the feel too this beat nice groove, dont think this needs like a constant bassline not really sure how to put it, but like if it had a nice sub with quite a bit of release then some midrange bass stabs coming in now and then.

Very nice beat though

Geeza · Post by **Geeza** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:13 pm

Alright all whats appening!!!!

heres something ive been working on today on a 64bar preview snippet sorta thing and it needs a lot of work still but yeah tell me what you thnk and feedback will be given back in kind

Soundcloud

Pitchdownplease · Post by **Pitchdownplease** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:36 pm

Geeza wrote:Alright all whats appening!!!!

heres something ive been working on today on a 64bar preview snippet sorta thing and it needs a lot of work still but yeah tell me what you thnk and feedback will be given back in kind

Soundcloud

Careful on that buildup, you have alot of things in the same frequency range fighting for space, perhaps sidechain that lead pad thing when you go into the kicks, and EQ them properlly. or sidechain the kicks and the sub stabs

Geeza · Post by **Geeza** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:26 pm

Pitchdownplease wrote:
Geeza wrote:Alright all whats appening!!!!

heres something ive been working on today on a 64bar preview snippet sorta thing and it needs a lot of work still but yeah tell me what you thnk and feedback will be given back in kind

Soundcloud

Careful on that buildup, you have alot of things in the same frequency range fighting for space, perhaps sidechain that lead pad thing when you go into the kicks, and EQ them properlly. or sidechain the kicks and the sub stabs

Ah cheers man Sidechaining is new to me (only been producing for a month) so still learning, I sidechained the kicks its sounds better in the mix thanks for the advice

I'll do some reviews later on some other tunes some atre sounding banging !!!

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:35 pm

Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:38 pm

junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!

idk if i like the intro all that much it needs more . but the bass is sounding great maybe a bit more variation and youll be set

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:47 pm

tripwire22 wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!
idk if i like the intro all that much it needs more . but the bass is sounding great maybe a bit more variation and youll be set

yh i need 2 fix it up alot...

anything u wantv feedback on while im ere?

tripwire22 · Post by **tripwire22** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:54 pm

junior spesh wrote:
tripwire22 wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!
idk if i like the intro all that much it needs more . but the bass is sounding great maybe a bit more variation and youll be set
yh i need 2 fix it up alot...

anything u wantv feedback on while im ere?

check out Holland and Denmark in my soundcloud

Geeza · Post by **Geeza** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:56 pm

junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!

Really likr this 1.

I think the beat boxing is a nice touch imaginative. Loving the bass aswell and the pattern of it just my kind of dubstep.

Maybe the drums kicks are coming through a bit too much though??

All in all i love this

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:20 pm

Geeza wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!
Really likr this 1.

I think the beat boxing is a nice touch imaginative. Loving the bass aswell and the pattern of it just my kind of dubstep.

Maybe the drums kicks are coming through a bit too much though??

All in all i love this

Safe.. thanx 4 feedback, yh i thought the same thing about the kicks aswell...

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:28 pm

tripwire22 wrote:
junior spesh wrote:
tripwire22 wrote:
junior spesh wrote:Soundcloud

since i got fuckall feedback last time...

here i am again

DROP FEEDBACK & I WILL RETURN IT LIKE I ALWAYS DO!
idk if i like the intro all that much it needs more . but the bass is sounding great maybe a bit more variation and youll be set
yh i need 2 fix it up alot...

anything u wantv feedback on while im ere?
check out Holland and Denmark in my soundcloud

Oh My Diddy Dayz! Holland is fuckin greeeeeeze! badman tune snm...

bengreen · Post by **bengreen** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:38 pm

Just hoping for some feed back on my new WIP!

Soundcloud

If you can let me know what i can do to improve it! Cheers lads

Geeza · Post by **Geeza** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:44 pm

bengreen wrote:Just hoping for some feed back on my new WIP!

Soundcloud

If you can let me know what i can do to improve it! Cheers lads

ARGGGHHHH when this kicks in propa i swear it makes you

HYPE tune

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:46 pm

Geeza wrote:
bengreen wrote:Just hoping for some feed back on my new WIP!

Soundcloud

If you can let me know what i can do to improve it! Cheers lads
ARGGGHHHH when this kicks in propa i swear it makes you HYPE tune

Truesay...well done, this is a gooden...

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:48 pm

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Dont watch the vocal! I cundt b asked 2 find the instrumental... but LISTEN TO THE VIOLINZ ON THIS 1!

I will return it, as you can seeeee

bengreen · Post by **bengreen** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:53 pm

Geeza wrote:
bengreen wrote:Just hoping for some feed back on my new WIP!

Soundcloud

If you can let me know what i can do to improve it! Cheers lads
ARGGGHHHH when this kicks in propa i swear it makes you HYPE tune

Mate thanks alot haha

means alot to me!

junior spesh wrote:
Geeza wrote:
bengreen wrote:Just hoping for some feed back on my new WIP!

Soundcloud

If you can let me know what i can do to improve it! Cheers lads
ARGGGHHHH when this kicks in propa i swear it makes you HYPE tune
Truesay...well done, this is a gooden...

Cheers mate

junior spesh · Post by **junior spesh** » Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:58 pm

Soundcloud

Dont watch the vocal, just my instrumental, PURE VIOLIN MADNESS TBH

drop feedback..

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