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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by futurist » Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:01 am

This is a small project but I am working on re-creating Daft Punk's "High Life" and then doing a remix.

I chopped up the sample myself using the original song the samples came from that Daft Punk used.

Sample Started like this:
Soundcloud

Then I added some tempo change and phaser:
Soundcloud

Still didnt sound right so I changed the tempo once again, layer the sample twice and made one layer more bassy and i came out with this:
Soundcloud

Here is Daft Punk's Song to compare:
Current work in progress:
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Post by junior spesh » Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:08 am

futurist wrote:This is a small project but I am working on re-creating Daft Punk's "High Life" and then doing a remix.

I chopped up the sample myself using the original song the samples came from that Daft Punk used.

Sample Started like this:
Soundcloud

Then I added some tempo change and phaser:
Soundcloud

Still didnt sound right so I changed the tempo once again, layer the sample twice and made one layer more bassy and i came out with this:
Soundcloud

Here is Daft Punk's Song to compare:
sounds like it has potential, i personally luv making remixes, holla at me when u finish it still...
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Drake Remix>> Soundcloud

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Post by junior spesh » Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:09 am

ONCE AGAIN, NO FEEDBACK EVEN THO I GIVE BARE OUT!!!
>>>>>>>>>>> Soundcloud <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
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Listen here>>>
http://www.myspace.com/gullyfloss

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:29 pm

junior spesh wrote:ONCE AGAIN, NO FEEDBACK EVEN THO I GIVE BARE OUT!!!
>>>>>>>>>>> Soundcloud <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
that is sick mate, love the crazy latin married to that sick bass
productoon is bang on too

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Post by cynical » Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:33 pm

An updated version of the name less song I'm currently working on. Hope you enjoy

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:50 pm

cynical wrote:An updated version of the name less song I'm currently working on. Hope you enjoy

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nice upbeat tune, good production

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:51 pm

latest work in progress, what do you think?
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Post by reignstep » Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:20 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:latest work in progress, what do you think?
Soundcloud
Its a good start, you got alot of work tho

-lead melody , you know , a catchy tune :)
-song's too empty, looks like you only have drums and a bassline, where you should be having alot more effects and background atmosphere
-drums are way to monotone, try to add some variation and also add some percussion, kick snare and high hats aint the limit :)
-variation off bass, i like the melody but its just way to plain to let it play for 2 whole minutes
-solid subbass, it might be my headphone, but im not hearing any real subtones in your track

good luck with it, looks like a nice start :)


been mastering this one out, after that im gonna arrange a full length:

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Post by machination » Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:39 pm

futurist wrote:This is a small project but I am working on re-creating Daft Punk's "High Life" and then doing a remix.

I chopped up the sample myself using the original song the samples came from that Daft Punk used.

Sample Started like this:
Soundcloud

Then I added some tempo change and phaser:
Soundcloud

Still didnt sound right so I changed the tempo once again, layer the sample twice and made one layer more bassy and i came out with this:
Soundcloud

Here is Daft Punk's Song to compare:
I like the idea behind this, and can always appreciate a dubstep remix of some funky house. With tracks like this less is more usually wobblewise. Hit me up when you've got more, I definitely want to hear this!
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Post by machination » Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:44 pm

cynical wrote:An updated version of the name less song I'm currently working on. Hope you enjoy

Soundcloud
I'm digging the direction the song is going and especially feeling the synths. You may want to add a bit of variation to the drum loop, maybe even a couple more drum hits. Even something thats subtle and barely noticeable can make all the difference.
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Post by dddemain » Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:49 pm

deadnoisesystem wrote:latest work in progress, what do you think?
Soundcloud
This is sounding really good dude. Few kinks need to be ironed out like the drop, which doesn't feel quite right to me. The bass drums are sounding specially good and the amount of variation is just right.

Soundcloud

Something I've been working on. Pretty rough atm. Any comments/criticism appreciated

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Post by machination » Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:59 pm

jpoovey wrote:Soundcloud

another dubstep song.
Can't believe no one gave you positive feedback on this track. Fucking tight production, definitely want to hear this when its finished.
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Post by reignstep » Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:21 pm

Still looking for some feedback before it drowns again in all other posts...

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 7:29 pm

machination wrote:
jpoovey wrote:Soundcloud

another dubstep song.
Can't believe no one gave you positive feedback on this track. Fucking tight production, definitely want to hear this when its finished.
lovely bass and tight production

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 7:32 pm

reignz wrote:Still looking for some feedback before it drowns again in all other posts...

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very atmospheric and deep deep bass. fantastic
edit: thanks for the feedback, your points have been taken and im pressing on with the tune

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 7:39 pm

LTUK wrote:
deadnoisesystem wrote:latest work in progress, what do you think?
Soundcloud
This is sounding really good dude. Few kinks need to be ironed out like the drop, which doesn't feel quite right to me. The bass drums are sounding specially good and the amount of variation is just right.

Soundcloud

Something I've been working on. Pretty rough atm. Any comments/criticism appreciated
thanks for the feedback, it really helps.
your tune, the beats are great, synths are tight and the bass is good
just a bit of variation to keep it busy and youll be laughing

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Post by cynical » Mon Jan 25, 2010 8:41 pm

machination wrote:
cynical wrote:An updated version of the name less song I'm currently working on. Hope you enjoy

Soundcloud
I'm digging the direction the song is going and especially feeling the synths. You may want to add a bit of variation to the drum loop, maybe even a couple more drum hits. Even something thats subtle and barely noticeable can make all the difference.
Thanks man. I will defo shuffle up the drums a bit

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Post by mr_ooze » Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:53 am

been mastering this one out, after that im gonna arrange a full length:

Soundcloud[/quote]


^^ Snare is awesome in this track. I'm also liking the grudgy bass

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Post by miklos » Tue Jan 26, 2010 3:16 pm

miklos wrote:Soundcloud
Need some feedback on the sound!
Anyone? :cry:

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Post by k00sh » Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:07 pm

My latest WIP...
Taken a few hours to get drums right, played with some synths, i think its pretty good,
feedback will be returned :)

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edit: its still "creating waveform" ... damnit


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