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Post by coyotepeyote » Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:27 pm

http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/moonface
a lil somethin somethin im workin on

its some chillstep
ffeedback appreciated.

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Post by LordBid » Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:50 pm

So this is my latest experiment its very dubby tell me what ya think so far!

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Post by The Phantom Banger » Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:00 am

coyotepeyote wrote:http://soundcloud.com/peyotecoyote/moonface
a lil somethin somethin im workin on

its some chillstep
ffeedback appreciated.
cheers for the feedback its nice so far hoping you gonna add more variations as you get further into the track, my only production critisism would be that the kick may be clashing with the sub slightly. Id recommend soloing just the kick and sub for a bit and going at them with some high pass and lowpass filters, or try sidchaing the kick and sub.

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Post by futurist » Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:43 am

@coyotepeyote: Sounding Pretty good!

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Also a remix:
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Current work in progress:
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Post by faisal » Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:47 pm

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hi, here's the main hook of a track i'm working on.
Only starting out with dubstep but i hope it's worth a listen..
any comments would be well appreciated :)

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Post by phrex » Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:30 pm

it's just the intro... and i wonder if this works out well....

tell me your opinion.

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Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
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Post by phrex » Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:07 pm

faisal wrote:Soundcloud

hi, here's the main hook of a track i'm working on.
Only starting out with dubstep but i hope it's worth a listen..
any comments would be well appreciated :)
not my type of dubstep. but to keep objective: i think you sidecahined too many alements. at least it sounds like that.
Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:
goldplate / war continues

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Post by phrex » Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:10 pm

futurist wrote:@coyotepeyote: Sounding Pretty good!

My Latest work in progress:
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like the vibe on that one... and when the bass drops it's quite heavy... but there is somehow something missing... maybe a bit more variation?

lovely rythm! nice drums! sounds like you have used the reverb of reason for the beat. though i'm probably talking bollocks :oops:
Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:
goldplate / war continues

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Post by Plasmic aka Hanlo » Wed Feb 03, 2010 5:43 pm

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Alright just looking for abit of feedback on my latest tune, its kind of on a garage tip, don't reaaally want to say Future Garage yet! Also I have noticed that the main synth may be abit too loud, cheeers!

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Post by rhek » Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:05 pm

Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Soundcloud

Alright just looking for abit of feedback on my latest tune, its kind of on a garage tip, don't reaaally want to say Future Garage yet! Also I have noticed that the main synth may be abit too loud, cheeers!
Really like the vibe of this one and lovin the 2-step feel. Only thing i'd say is take the delay off the low end when it kicks in cos it muddies the sound up a bit and maybe come in with a new melody on the later drop but wicked atmos and cool production man ;).

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Post by edgar_pr » Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:42 pm

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Would be syyyked to get this to a professional standard and worth releasing :lol:
But yeah this is my first ever Dubstep track. Been working on the basics for a few hours in total, have adjusted it like crazy a thousand times and this is a snippet of version 2. Went for a futuristic type sound to match the half life theme.

Would be great to hear some opinions and constructive criticism.
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Post by rhek » Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:25 pm

http://soundcloud.com/stlesber/deft-draft-4-full-mp3

Just finished a basic version of this tune. Any feedback much appreciated.

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:52 am

edgar_pr wrote:Soundcloud

Would be syyyked to get this to a professional standard and worth releasing :twisted:
But yeah this is my first ever Dubstep track. Been working on the basics for a few hours in total and this is a snippet of version 2.
Would be great to hear opinions. According to a friend of mine it sounds very basic?
if this is your first ever your doing alright mate
just keep putting the hours and youll be fine

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:55 am

Plasmic aka Hanlo wrote:Soundcloud

Alright just looking for abit of feedback on my latest tune, its kind of on a garage tip, don't reaaally want to say Future Garage yet! Also I have noticed that the main synth may be abit too loud, cheeers!
yeah mate, thats very nice, like the vibes
personly id chuck a bit of delay on the main synth and sit it back a bit in the mix

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:56 am

vulvavibration wrote:it's just the intro... and i wonder if this works out well....

tell me your opinion.

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very atmosperic, nice build up

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:00 am

futurist wrote:@coyotepeyote: Sounding Pretty good!

My Latest work in progress:
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Also a remix:
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with the remix id cut down the vocals from an accapella to a sample of the chorus, and maybe cut it up a bit
tight production on both tunes

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Post by deadnoisesystem » Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:22 am

this is the latest version of my newest tune
please feedback thank you
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Post by flownLess » Thu Feb 04, 2010 2:56 am

at deadnoisesystem,
i like the melody but the bass is too distorted and not enough variated.
what kind of filters do you use?

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Post by dddemain » Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:03 am

this is something i started this morning. idk i know the intro needs a deal of work. Any criticism/advice would be cool :)
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Post by darronatkinson » Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:05 pm

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This is my first attempt at dubstep.

It is a remix project for college

any suggestions for improvements would be great

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