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critical sound system
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by critical sound system » Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:24 pm

Hi guys
i just uploaded a tune i'm working on atm.
i've been messing around for some times to get the jungle touch.
the track is raw.
advices welcome

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Post by critical sound system » Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:28 pm

cynical wrote:
icebagg wrote:
Cryolitik wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:
cynical wrote:GET TO THA CHOPPA!
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A Reason rinse out I'm working on.

WHOOHOOHOHOHOHO this is well heavy, what a banger. Love the powerful bass. Nice work

DOPE track man! love this bassline you got goin! Very tight production, would love to hear more, i will find you on sound cloud
Cheers guys

Huge track!
any chance of a 320?

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Post by sarkz » Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:40 pm

heres a work in progress of mine. tell me what you think! www.myspace.com/vetsntitan its the track named f**ked off

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Post by DubNemesis » Thu Feb 18, 2010 8:25 pm

Another WIP ive got going at the moment, not done anything on it for a week or so. Any ideas?

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Post by icebagg » Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:15 pm

DubNemesis wrote:Another WIP ive got going at the moment, not done anything on it for a week or so. Any ideas?

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Thought it was pretty good. I would look into some EQ on the drums and synths. On the drums i would EQ to bring them more in your face (that snare has some unnecessary bass, a littttle compression doesnt hurt either) try a hi pass while leaving some mids (around 100hz), as well as adding an underlying kick so the snare can really HIT you know? As for the synths/bass, boost up the mids a smidgen to bring out its full potential. Hope this was some help, other than that dope tune man! cant wait to hear the final product!
ears ringin all night you know how that shit go

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Post by standard-proceduremusic » Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:37 pm

You can listen to our tracks @ http://www.myspace.com/standardproceduremusic1 + http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1
any feedback would be greatly appreciated
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Post by DubNemesis » Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:43 pm

icebagg wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:Another WIP ive got going at the moment, not done anything on it for a week or so. Any ideas?

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Thought it was pretty good. I would look into some EQ on the drums and synths. On the drums i would EQ to bring them more in your face (that snare has some unnecessary bass, a littttle compression doesnt hurt either) try a hi pass while leaving some mids (around 100hz), as well as adding an underlying kick so the snare can really HIT you know? As for the synths/bass, boost up the mids a smidgen to bring out its full potential. Hope this was some help, other than that dope tune man! cant wait to hear the final product!

Thanks mate. Yeah i think im a little over cautious with eq. Definately agree with what you say about the drums though, nowhere near in your face enough. Will boost the mids as well on the synths and see how it sounds. Thanks for your feedback mate, really appreciate it :D

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Post by icebagg » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:03 pm

DubNemesis wrote:
icebagg wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:Another WIP ive got going at the moment, not done anything on it for a week or so. Any ideas?

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Thought it was pretty good. I would look into some EQ on the drums and synths. On the drums i would EQ to bring them more in your face (that snare has some unnecessary bass, a littttle compression doesnt hurt either) try a hi pass while leaving some mids (around 100hz), as well as adding an underlying kick so the snare can really HIT you know? As for the synths/bass, boost up the mids a smidgen to bring out its full potential. Hope this was some help, other than that dope tune man! cant wait to hear the final product!

Thanks mate. Yeah i think im a little over cautious with eq. Definately agree with what you say about the drums though, nowhere near in your face enough. Will boost the mids as well on the synths and see how it sounds. Thanks for your feedback mate, really appreciate it :D
No problem man, dont be afraid to experiment you know? the EQ setup does look daunting but just start turnin knobs and seeing what each thing does, sooner or later you'll get the hang of it. also, theres tons of EQ help online (what frequencies to what instrument/sound, etc..) bigup, ill find you on soundcloud...
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new tunes feedback would be appreciated

Post by standard-proceduremusic » Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:40 pm

easy
You can listen to our tracks @ http://www.myspace.com/standardproceduremusic1 + http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1

any feedback would be well appreciated

cheers!

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Post by mmockett » Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:07 pm

A lot of good stuff up here at the moment. Rather intimidating.
Just started making this this evening and have struck a barrier. Should I bother trying to overcome it?
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Post by juntistik » Fri Feb 19, 2010 12:18 am

icebagg wrote:
juntistik wrote:
SamuelKing wrote:My First track made using Sony Acid Pro free samples and normal home stereo speakers, I going to buy some active monitors as soon as I can.
I’m still a noob so don’t be too harsh on me lol
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For a first track it sounds really good man. i would clean up the mastering on the vocals and drop the reverb a little bit but thats just me. Overall great work for a starting producer, sounds nice and pro ( i need to check out sony acid pro)

keep it up man!

Ok this is a track i started at like 2am last night, i know it needs a lot of work still, im gonna completely redo the percussion with a heavier snare and maybe take a little delay off some of the hats but any advice welcomed!

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Not bad for 2/3 hour tune? or however long you spent on it. Definitely needs some better percussion, with more "shuffle" to it. All to often (and im guilty of this as well) people have the tendency to make the percussion similar to a hip hop song, which isnt bad if the other elements keep the "shuffley" feel to it, but remember dubstep is very much sample based (samples from drum n bass most often) so the percussion must be very fast, especially on a track such as this. Definitely work on fattening up the bass, making it more liquid and some EQ work should have you sitting right. The structure is nice, and the overall flow is a good starting point, i cant wait to hear the end result! bigups.
Word man, yaeh i spent like 2 hours on it haha, needs alot of time and yeah you called me out perfectly on the hip hop percussion. Its so easy to throw that in real quick and end up messin with the wobble and then i never end up goin back

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Post by djaccel » Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:32 am

First one on the new machine since the HDD fuckup.

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Post by KidQw3rty » Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:51 am

Just started this track tonight, first thing i've done in logic in a while...sounds muddy as hell, but you get the idea. give me some feedback, plz!

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Post by Karanp » Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:29 am

http://www.zshare.net/audio/72715259d70e2bb8/

a newer version of my first track lol. still got no crits :(

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Post by cynical » Fri Feb 19, 2010 12:15 pm

critical sound system wrote:
cynical wrote:
icebagg wrote:
Cryolitik wrote:
cynical wrote:GET TO THA CHOPPA!
Soundcloud
A Reason rinse out I'm working on.

WHOOHOOHOHOHOHO this is well heavy, what a banger. Love the powerful bass. Nice work

DOPE track man! love this bassline you got goin! Very tight production, would love to hear more, i will find you on sound cloud
Cheers guys

Huge track!
any chance of a 320?
When I've finished the track i'll make it downloadable off soundcloud and let you know :)

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Post by soulshynchyld » Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:41 pm

a lil something ive come up with in the last cupla hours!!give me some direction!!!chea

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Post by angrystopsign » Fri Feb 19, 2010 7:24 pm

Hey,
Im Kinda New To Dubstep Production And I Thought I'd Put Up A Link To My First Dubstep Track....
Please Comment And Let Me Know What You Think...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sus3XRoIdwA

The Sound Quality Is Pretty Poor But A Higher Quality Link Will Be Put Up Soon :)

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Post by shanekenton » Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:12 pm

angrystopsign wrote:Hey,
Im Kinda New To Dubstep Production And I Thought I'd Put Up A Link To My First Dubstep Track....
Please Comment And Let Me Know What You Think...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sus3XRoIdwA

The Sound Quality Is Pretty Poor But A Higher Quality Link Will Be Put Up Soon :)

Cheers,
Ash

pretty good for your first remix/track. the kick isnt punchy enough for me and the snare could use something else too imo, perhaps another snare layered would do the trick. i dunno thought im new to producing too. here is a work in progress im working on.

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Post by icebagg » Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:44 pm

I know i already posted this, apparently was some trouble playing the first one, either way i have a specific question about this...You guys hear those 'clicks' at the beginning of my vocal loop points? THEYRE HORRIBLE, anyone know how to rid of these? thanks!Soundcloud
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Post by icebagg » Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:09 pm

angrystopsign wrote:

pretty good for your first remix/track. the kick isnt punchy enough for me and the snare could use something else too imo, perhaps another snare layered would do the trick. i dunno thought im new to producing too. here is a work in progress im working on.

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not bad, only thing, it sounds like a really long intro, maybe some builds? also would work on cleaning up the higher db's although the kick and bass do mesh pretty well.
ears ringin all night you know how that shit go

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http://www.myspace.com/djavalanchebumps


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