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[thrush]

the chosen sounds are generic for that reason, its a tribute to the music of that rave era that ive been feeling lately - i never experienced it either, im 17 so it was before my time

[dedman]

eassy guys

tried varyin my style up a bit with this one!

lemme know what you think?
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[thierry_le_dj]

i just re uploaded this one i been working on and off this track like 1month now i've been to busy to do it in 1 go...
but i would like to know what you think of the main bass LFO speed/cut off and do you think that there is to much sub through out the track?
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Thierry

[thierry_le_dj]

i also just finish this new track
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[icebagg]

i just re uploaded this one i been working on and off this track like 1month now i've been to busy to do it in 1 go...
but i would like to know what you think of the main bass LFO speed/cut off and do you think that there is to much sub through out the track?
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Feed back please
Thanks
Thierry

All i see is SHOOT THIS TRACK IS UNAVAILABLE *hmph*

[icebagg]

i just re uploaded this one i been working on and off this track like 1month now i've been to busy to do it in 1 go...
but i would like to know what you think of the main bass LFO speed/cut off and do you think that there is to much sub through out the track?
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Feed back please
Thanks
Thierry

All i see is SHOOT THIS TRACK IS UNAVAILABLE *hmph*

WHOOP there it is (the track that is)... For starters, the intro kinda drags on maybe add some more sweeping effects or sounds. When the drop comes, the bass sounds out of tune from the synth, maybe its out of phase but i cant tell. The LFO doesn't quite hit on time either, its like a half step behind where it should (or where the listener would expect it to) be. I like the melody on the second drop a lot more, its what i was expecting to hear when the song started, so good job bringing it back. I could write an essay on things to work on but all criticism aside your off to a good start. I would sit down and take some time with this one, its got potential for sure, just needs to be cleaned up. hope i was of some help if you have any specific questions feel free to PM me. bigs!

[icebagg]

eassy guys

tried varyin my style up a bit with this one!

lemme know what you think?
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Yo i realllly liked this track! i would love a copy once its finished, or right now

Only thing i would say is maybe make the second drop a bit more percussive...im going to try to explain forgive my attempted wobble talk... so its like chika-chika-chika-chicka-SNARE-whompwhomp-and repeat hahah hope that made sense! loved the track man, that YA sounding synth (lead synth) is dopeeee bigups!!

[dedman]

cheers man! yeah i could do but i dunno, im kinda digging the real simple but stomping vibe it gets by dropping into that haha

[wirez]

eassy guys

tried varyin my style up a bit with this one!

lemme know what you think?
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This tune is SICK!

[dedman]

cheers man !!

[Max4Beats]

i also just finish this new track
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Hi Heres some feedback

Intro is ok, i'm not really feeling the piano synth though, It's different though
1.01 The wobble bass line is too Major its not dark enough, the melody to the song is too happy for my liking
2.17 the change here is unexpected

Overall i'm not really feeling this one, doesn't grab the listener if oyu know what i mean!
Good production just need to wotk on the hooks and Melodies

Wana give me feedback on my newest

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[Max4Beats]

eassy guys

tried varyin my style up a bit with this one!

lemme know what you think?
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Intro... Sounding Really cool
0.28 Really cool drop
0.30 Really cool bass line and beat, different
2.18 the last riff dragged on a bit, to keep the track alive i'd bring in this break much sooner
2.40 Another nice drop
2.50 really like the percusiion in the back, its almost timbaland like
3.14 Great change here

overall.... Really cool track I favourited it


What you think about my new one Soundcloud

Thanks

[Max4Beats]

Feedback please

sorry bout the big text I just really want feedback on this, I have a feeling people will like it

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Any criticism is welcome

[CollisionCourse]

thanks for the feedback people!
any1 else want a listen?
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and max that tunes sick, distortion on the vocals is a great idea but theres a bit too much imo. otherwise its big.

[dedman]

cheers max, will certainly return the favour!


I Love You

start - vocals are a bit raspy maybe need a change in the eq
0.33 - i like the drop but i feel like the bass could be a bit dirtier.. maybe try some chorus/bitcrushing combos and a saturator?


another tip, for this type of tune your going to want a lot of reverb so its worth setting up a snare reverb bus so you can get nice big snares to really make it bounce.

i like the second drop, really epic with the trance chords etc, but def needs the reverb on the snares! I think you could do with boosting the high end on your snares and hats too, but thats just personal preference!

but yeah i really like the build could see this going off!

[dedman]

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another one, thinking im taking a new direction here... can probably expect these to be on my next ep!

let me know what you think

[Max4Beats]

cheers max, will certainly return the favour!


I Love You

start - vocals are a bit raspy maybe need a change in the eq
0.33 - i like the drop but i feel like the bass could be a bit dirtier.. maybe try some chorus/bitcrushing combos and a saturator?


another tip, for this type of tune your going to want a lot of reverb so its worth setting up a snare reverb bus so you can get nice big snares to really make it bounce.

i like the second drop, really epic with the trance chords etc, but def needs the reverb on the snares! I think you could do with boosting the high end on your snares and hats too, but thats just personal preference!

but yeah i really like the build could see this going off!

Thanks man

Gonna go and do that Now

[Max4Beats]

@ dedman and any one else interested


Took your advice and re did the bass and snares.... What you think now?

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[dedman]

yeah defo getting there man, i suggest using a frequency analysier so you can really bring out the high end!

did a little bit of processing .. hope you dont mind! but something like this would sound pretty sweet

[Max4Beats]

yeah defo getting there man, i suggest using a frequency analysier so you can really bring out the high end!

did a little bit of processing .. hope you dont mind! but something like this would sound pretty sweet

http://www.zshare.net/audio/72803973880a8daf/

Cool i know what you mean... Will do..Take it off z.share there and I'll do that myself

Thanks for the advice