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[dedman]

ahh i didnt request download code doh! just delete the posts

i edited my last tune so heres the finished verison
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[CollisionCourse]

thanks for the feedback people!
any1 else want a listen?
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and max that tunes sick, distortion on the vocals is a great idea but theres a bit too much imo. otherwise its big.

[wirez]

Feedback please

sorry bout the big text I just really want feedback on this, I have a feeling people will like it

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Any criticism is welcome

Dude, this has the potential to be an awesome track but at the moment it seems to be lacking energy... Something in your frequency range is really lacking, you could do with more treble like some harsh hi hats for a start (in my opinion, others may disagree)...

You could make the lead 'wobble' more prominent as well, it sounds a little muddy and really should be pulling through the mix to grab peoples attention and make them screwface...

But the track has real big potential to be immense...

[DubSac]

Hey guys, just finished a new track. Feedback would be awesome. cheers guy.!

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[wirez]

cheers max, will certainly return the favour!


I Love You

0.33 - i like the drop but i feel like the bass could be a bit dirtier.. maybe try some chorus/bitcrushing combos and a saturator?

Not disrespect dedman's advice but I believe doing this would be slightly counteractive. You should address the issues from the source, eg your synth and really think about how you would like the lead to sound, listen to some similar tracks and compare the lead sounds. Nero makes stuff with a slightly similar idea, stuff like 'Blinded By The Lights Remix' is worth a listen for comparison.

You need to make sure your lead sound is dominating the majority of the frequency range, without getting in the way of everything else. This is not at all easy but the lead in this track is a big part of it.

Here's my full advice of how to make this track better -

1. Reprogram the synth to something more dominating.

2. Change your Hat samples to something more intense with plenty of attack transients, standard 909 hats will do as an example.

3. MIx your track so that the dominant parts are further forward, then mix everything else to suit them. For example, mix your Kick and Snare to -8dB then from there on mix from the bottom of the frequency spectrum upwards. In this particular track I would recommend mixing Kick and snare first, the sub bass, then lead bass, then anything else, then hats. The entire mix should end up peaking between -6 and -3dB. This should help you get a perspective of how the dynamics of the track should sound and you can then fine tune anything with EQ or effects.

The most important thing to do in this track is address your sounds from the source and make sure they're fat and warm before even processing and mixing them!

[wirez]

Hey guys, just finished a new track. Feedback would be awesome. cheers guy.!

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From the drop you need less reverb and more sub bass man

[DubSac]

I blow at making sub bass...wut shud i use for that?

[dedman]

cheers max, will certainly return the favour!


I Love You

0.33 - i like the drop but i feel like the bass could be a bit dirtier.. maybe try some chorus/bitcrushing combos and a saturator?

Not disrespect dedman's advice but I believe doing this would be slightly counteractive. You should address the issues from the source, eg your synth and really think about how you would like the lead to sound, listen to some similar tracks and compare the lead sounds. Nero makes stuff with a slightly similar idea, stuff like 'Blinded By The Lights Remix' is worth a listen for comparison.

You need to make sure your lead sound is dominating the majority of the frequency range, without getting in the way of everything else. This is not at all easy but the lead in this track is a big part of it.

Here's my full advice of how to make this track better -

1. Reprogram the synth to something more dominating.

2. Change your Hat samples to something more intense with plenty of attack transients, standard 909 hats will do as an example.

3. MIx your track so that the dominant parts are further forward, then mix everything else to suit them. For example, mix your Kick and Snare to -8dB then from there on mix from the bottom of the frequency spectrum upwards. In this particular track I would recommend mixing Kick and snare first, the sub bass, then lead bass, then anything else, then hats. The entire mix should end up peaking between -6 and -3dB. This should help you get a perspective of how the dynamics of the track should sound and you can then fine tune anything with EQ or effects.

The most important thing to do in this track is address your sounds from the source and make sure they're fat and warm before even processing and mixing them!

yeah definatly need adjusting in massive which i assume it is, but yeah to be honest with you the best points of reference for this one would be maccs wise words in the mastering thread and also look for the thread about resampling

I think that should sor tyou out

[DubSac]

I fixed sum stuff on this track , here it is again. If anyone wants to review it that would be sick. thanks guys

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[wirez]

I fixed sum stuff on this track , here it is again. If anyone wants to review it that would be sick. thanks guys

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No sub bass again bro lol. If you're going to be producing Dubstep you need to get acquainted with using sub bass, it's THE most essential element...

All you need is any synth that supplies a sine wave and play it in the keyboard region which supplies frequencies of around 90Hz and under... See the main forum for plenty of info on how to make sub basses!

[DubSac]

I fixed sum stuff on this track , here it is again. If anyone wants to review it that would be sick. thanks guys

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No sub bass again bro lol. If you're going to be producing Dubstep you need to get acquainted with using sub bass, it's THE most essential element...

All you need is any synth that supplies a sine wave and play it in the keyboard region which supplies frequencies of around 90Hz and under... See the main forum for plenty of info on how to make sub basses!

Yea i just realized i forgot to add that in. sorry, haha

[wirez]

I fixed sum stuff on this track , here it is again. If anyone wants to review it that would be sick. thanks guys

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No sub bass again bro lol. If you're going to be producing Dubstep you need to get acquainted with using sub bass, it's THE most essential element...

All you need is any synth that supplies a sine wave and play it in the keyboard region which supplies frequencies of around 90Hz and under... See the main forum for plenty of info on how to make sub basses!

Yea i just realized i forgot to add that in. sorry, haha

Don't apologise my man haha

[thierry_le_dj]

i just re uploaded this one i been working on and off this track like 1month now i've been to busy to do it in 1 go...
but i would like to know what you think of the main bass LFO speed/cut off and do you think that there is to much sub through out the track?
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Feed back please
Thanks
Thierry

All i see is SHOOT THIS TRACK IS UNAVAILABLE *hmph*

WHOOP there it is (the track that is)... For starters, the intro kinda drags on maybe add some more sweeping effects or sounds. When the drop comes, the bass sounds out of tune from the synth, maybe its out of phase but i cant tell. The LFO doesn't quite hit on time either, its like a half step behind where it should (or where the listener would expect it to) be. I like the melody on the second drop a lot more, its what i was expecting to hear when the song started, so good job bringing it back. I could write an essay on things to work on but all criticism aside your off to a good start. I would sit down and take some time with this one, its got potential for sure, just needs to be cleaned up. hope i was of some help if you have any specific questions feel free to PM me. bigs!

Thanks for the feed back mate!
am still learning how to use LFO/speed/cut off etc..
i will keep working on this one i've change the main square bass a few times now
just having some probs to make it sound right
hopefully i can finish this one soon its also one of my favourite track's
thanks again for the feedback.
Thierry

[CollisionCourse]

@ thierry
yeah pretty much everything he said ^. plus the drums could be a bit more tasty, more instruments rather than just average the kick snare hat, or maybe thats your thing lol no problem. i love the bassline change at 1.43, i would have that completely replace the first bassline when it hits, just my opinion though otherwise i like it, good progression throughtout.

[thierry_le_dj]

Hey everyone thanks heaps for the feed back but yes this track i've just had so much head ache with the main bass the 1st bass i love but the synth LFO/speed was stuff so i had to change synth but this one is ok but preffered the original but with out the LFO/speed the bass sounded shit but i've been messing about with the bass for the last 2days am also getting over it but i just uploaded a new version am also going to take a little break from this one i've heard the bass loops on repeat to many times at the moment
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here's a new version
thanks.

[gforce]

below are 6 tracks of mine


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[soundavtar]

Listen to this


http://soundcloud.com/piyush-bhatnagar/ ... agar-remix

[Temo]

Listen to this


http://soundcloud.com/piyush-bhatnagar/ ... agar-remix

drop surprised me, wasnt feeling it much until the crazy bassline. good tune

[Temo]

I fixed sum stuff on this track , here it is again. If anyone wants to review it that would be sick. thanks guys

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yeah sine wave + better, more energetic hi hats are both musts, good start

[Worker Ant]

Here's a remix/reproduction of dancehall deejay Turbulence's "Nah Sell Out." It's an anti-bling message. Please let me know what you think of it as a remix.

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I think this has potential for a remix, but I was waiting for the tune to start the whole time.
Maybe it's my headphones, but the entire tune sounded like an intro to me.

Needs some mid-range or hi melodies in there? Right now, it's not much more than riddim, bass and some dark ambient sounds in the background.