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Post by chicken » Tue Feb 23, 2010 2:56 pm

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Post by hexade » Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:08 pm

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hexade wrote:Hey everyone :) Im new here as you can see. Heres one of my songs.. probably one of my best. Please tell me what you think! Soundcloud
k...bro...study up on how to eq ya sound & thicken up ya wobble, there is some nice sounds, BUT not your wobble...
ya lost all respect with that!!! good luk!!
CHeers man, yeah it still needs work, ill try make the wobbles filthyer and generally improve the song. Thanks for the comments though :)

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Post by WeBang » Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:24 pm

KidQw3rty wrote:
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KidQw3rty wrote:made some additions and adjustments, still just a start, give me some suggestions!

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Ending part of the clip is cluster fucked, because the levels are out of wack. But I like the direction
hey man thanks for giving some feedback, i'll be sure to hit up your posts as well.
i was trying to get myself acclimated to producing with logic again with this track...the end is def fucked...i'm thinking i need to do without those new voices that come in and work on that original bass.
No Problem....I think what I wrote sounded a lil harsh but I had to take a shit so.... I def like the feel.
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Post by zonetrooper5 » Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:33 pm

Got a new wip track up, need some feedback to make it better and eventually finish it.

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Post by jaydot » Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:39 pm

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Needs work....improvement ideas taken onboard.
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Post by standard-proceduremusic » Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:50 pm

http://soundcloud.com/standard-procedure-1

some tunes are unfinished and previews but still let us know what ya syaing!
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Post by akanekal » Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:48 pm

i dunno what to do! i keep on starting off making tracks but never finish them. i guess i just run out of steam. i can never see anything i start ending up good!

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Post by DubNemesis » Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:31 pm

New one i started this evening.

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Post by Orrie » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:09 am

Here's one I started last night, haven't really mixed it or anything yet.
Any feedback appreciated.

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Post by bradicle » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:30 am

DubNemesis wrote:New one i started this evening.

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Liking it dude, starting to sound good, keep up that shit!! Liking the drums, n variation :D.

Any feedback from anyone thanks. More of a lax dub tune, random sample in it. Please and thankyou :)

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Post by sigbowls » Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:56 am

first track ive made dont know how to do anything but loops on reason

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Post by DubNemesis » Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:54 am

bradicle wrote:
DubNemesis wrote:New one i started this evening.

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Liking it dude, starting to sound good, keep up that shit!! Liking the drums, n variation :D.

Any feedback from anyone thanks. More of a lax dub tune, random sample in it. Please and thankyou :)

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Thanks mate :).

Liking your tune, got a good feel to it. I reckon it needs a short break between the intro and the bass dropping, only my opinion but i think it kinda rolls in. Use the same sample you got there and chop it up over the break. Up to you of course :D. The church bells give it a good atmosphere as well, nice and dark. Good job mate hope to hear more!

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Post by joekool » Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:59 am

VERY MUCH in progress...

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let me know what you think - - - - been rinsin this one at the crib since i got a plate cut, homeboy said the track was just too big so i looped a few bars and he took it down to dallas..

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Post by DubNemesis » Wed Feb 24, 2010 12:50 pm

Updated version, Wobble still needs a bit of tidying in some places and it needs filling out a bit, but you get the idea where its going now. The second drop is basically the same as the first at the mo, plan to change it. Let me know what you think..

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Post by jaydot » Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:01 pm

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Needs work. let me know your thoughts. Cheers :)
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Post by soulshynchyld » Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:58 pm

well this is the first movie ive chopped up into samples, went quite well i reckon!!

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if ya dont check tha track your a dick!!HAHHAHHAAH

have a look ya, nooo way ya will regret it!! NZ repn it hard!!CHE
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Post by Astral » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:10 pm

Worked on this a little bit more, alt tabbing from my uni work to the daw and failing at education.

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Verbs probably to strong in places, as is the volume of the wobbleh.
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Post by jaydot » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:22 pm

Astral wrote:Worked on this a little bit more, alt tabbing from my uni work to the daw and failing at education.

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Verbs probably to strong in places, as is the volume of the wobbleh.
The verb is v strong in places yeah, good start though.
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Post by continuumdnb » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:27 pm

soulshynchyld wrote:well this is the first movie ive chopped up into samples, went quite well i reckon!!

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if ya dont check tha track your a dick!!HAHHAHHAAH

have a look ya, nooo way ya will regret it!! NZ repn it hard!!CHE
This is a promising start. Do you have to write in rainbow colours and use that many exclamation marks though?
goodeh wrote: is that good? cause it was accidental, i just copied the drum midi clip and pasted it into the bass channel....
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