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[juntistik]

people need to post feedback to recieve feedback, thats how this works

[zonetrooper5]

Hey,
I'm a relatively new producer been listening to alot of the music on this forum its all sounding really good
Here's what ive been working in the past day or two, any feed back would be appreciated,
cheers
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Can't feel the drums, need to layer that snare with another snare/white noise or a clap to give it the power to crack some jaws and EQ the kick so you can hear it as well as feel it. I also suggest layering your main bassline as well as putting a nice tight fat sub underneath it to make it more powerful. I do like the cheesy 80's type synth you got going on there but keep it up you can improve this song and make it alot better.

[Astral]

Been working on this a little more. failing as per the usual!

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[CollisionCourse]

people need to post feedback to recieve feedback, thats how this works

to reiterate

[JTL]

Been working on this a little more. failing as per the usual!

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That is pure fucking muck, always loved that horn riff. Great job man. Send me the finished product!

[JTL]

"Languages"

Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.

If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!

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Many many thanks in advance,

-jim

If I compare your second track with mine, then you are genius
Maybe it needs a little bit better kick drum, the current one is too soft I think.

Hey guys, this is my second go at production, and I feel it's better than my first by quite a way, but still of course pretty amateur.

If anyone could just have a QUICK look at it, I'd really appreciate ANY feedback at all. I will of course return the favour!

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Many many thanks in advance,

-jim

chill vibe, the horn track was some old school dub, good feel on this one.

Thanks for the kind words! Guys! Really appreciate it.

I've added some vocals onto this track changed the arrangement a bit and did some panning, vocals are a wiley stem I found, anyone able to let me know what they think? I actually think they go out of time slightly toward the midsection lyrics.

So boys, feedback for a complete newb? Thanks as always!

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[Arven]

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[Astral]

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Vocals sound clean, everything else just needs to be built on in my opinion (which is subjective)

For example, 0:39-0:41 id have some sort of sub pumping square LFO smacking you in the face as it builds to the next group of bars.

[DubNemesis]

Thanks for the kind words! Guys! Really appreciate it.

I've added some vocals onto this track changed the arrangement a bit and did some panning, vocals are a wiley stem I found, anyone able to let me know what they think? I actually think they go out of time slightly toward the midsection lyrics.

So boys, feedback for a complete newb? Thanks as always!

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Sorry about not getting back to you before mate. I meant the bass, I get the feeling you're going for something fairly heavy, so that bass needs fattening up a bit. Doesnt need to wobble maybe this track doesnt need that, but it needs some fuzz in my opinion. Keep going mate the songs well written and production will come in time

[DubNemesis]

Vocals sound clean, everything else just needs to be built on in my opinion (which is subjective)

For example, 0:39-0:41 id have some sort of sub pumping square LFO smacking you in the face as it builds to the next group of bars.

Definately agree with that

[JTL]

Awesome feedback , I don't really know how to do wobs yet or use LFO (same thing right?).. going to learn that now I've finished my exams!

Need to learn basslines full stop. Thanks for that boys!

[Muta]

Hey guys :]

im working on 2 new tracks.
These are going to be my 2nd and my 3rd track :] (yea, kind off working on 2 tracks at the same time, depending on what im geting inspiration for and what im in the mood for)

2nd:
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3rd:
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Leave some feedback if you like! I'd appreciate it. Giving feedback, back aswell.

[maelstrom99]

hey, just started on this tonight, any feedback would be appreciated. still need to add another synth part.

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I dig the intro, around 2 minutes it starts getting a little fuzzy im not sure if I like that synth so it drops off a little then picks it back up again



check this dnb/mixed tune i did yesterday, only a few hours into it but feedback apperciated. Planning on adding more high end sounds and flair.

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[The Phantom Banger]

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My newest work in progress would love some feedback from you lot

much love to the WIP crew

Louis

[Orrie]

Been working on this a little more. failing as per the usual!

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Definatley liking that bouncey groove, whack a bit of distortion over that bass to make it filllthhh. Also, I think the snare could do with another couple of layers maybe a big snap, a clap and an 808 snare compress it up and snip of the end an you'll have a nice PFFTTCCLACK.

[Orrie]

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My newest work in progress would love some feedback from you lot

much love to the WIP crew

Louis

Liking it, my favourite bit is from 1.37 drop it in earlier! Also as far as the beepy lead is concerned try using a bit of arpeggio to get more of a 8 bit blip sound I recon that'll go well.
Definatley liking that people aren't just doing reverb-snared generic wobble-step, keep it up!

[Orrie]

Ok here's mine it's almost finished I just need someone with a good ear for mixing and mastering to give me some advice on making it all shiny and polished.

It's more on the gitched out wonky side of things, bit like joker, taz buckfaster all them guys.

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[The Phantom Banger]

Ok here's mine it's almost finished I just need someone with a good ear for mixing and mastering to give me some advice on making it all shiny and polished.

It's more on the gitched out wonky side of things, bit like joker, taz buckfaster all them guys.

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This is fucking sick! Would love to see this hit wax at some point Dont have any critisism atall really

love it

[th@-pu$$y]

It's called Super satan......in my soundcloud and myspace player. I can't seem to figure out how to put it on the thread.

[th@-pu$$y]

Hey guys :]

im working on 2 new tracks.
These are going to be my 2nd and my 3rd track :] (yea, kind off working on 2 tracks at the same time, depending on what im geting inspiration for and what im in the mood for)

2nd:
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3rd:
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Leave some feedback if you like! I'd appreciate it. Giving feedback, back aswell.

Really feelin that first track, my only criticisim (bad spelling) would be that the hats/cymbals seem to dominate the track.