PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

[zonetrooper5]

It's called Super satan......in my soundcloud and myspace player. I can't seem to figure out how to put it on the thread.

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Click on the soundcloud button when your posting a reply then add the link to your tune inbetween the tags and don't forget to get rid of the spaces between the link and the tag.

[honey-d]

I'm pretty nervous to actually unveil anything to the cruel internetz so don't be too brutal any and all other feedback will be appreciated

It's definitely a work in progress and I have a female singer + vocal melodies in mind for it, but I haven't recorded it yet and figured i'd see what anyone thought of it before I went that far.

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EDIT- I swear I'm retarded, I can't get the soundcloud link to work...

[Muta]

Hey guys :]

im working on 2 new tracks.
These are going to be my 2nd and my 3rd track :] (yea, kind off working on 2 tracks at the same time, depending on what im geting inspiration for and what im in the mood for)

2nd:
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3rd:
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Leave some feedback if you like! I'd appreciate it. Giving feedback, back aswell.

Really feelin that first track, my only criticisim (bad spelling) would be that the hats/cymbals seem to dominate the track.

haha, Alright! Thanks! glad you like it, and we dont want something too dominating in our tracks ofc. :] Thank you sir ^^

[MattS]

I'm really new to writing dubstep, I use Logic and would love some FEEDBACK!!

Would you be able to have a look at my track and tell me what you think.
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Thanks,

Matthew

[honey-d]

I'm really new to writing dubstep, I use Logic and would love some FEEDBACK!!

Would you be able to have a look at my track and tell me what you think.
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Thanks,

Matthew

I like the slower wobbles you threw in that didn't seem bpm synced. I think maybe the basshits were a little too loud but... get a second opinion as well lol

nice work though.

[Muta]

I'm really new to writing dubstep, I use Logic and would love some FEEDBACK!!

Would you be able to have a look at my track and tell me what you think.
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Thanks,

Matthew

Don't really like the Kick-hits, (matter of preference maybe?) and I think they're a little too loud as well, but I really like the sound of the wobbles, that kind of robotic/mechanical kind off sound
I was also noticing that the Sub-bass was taking over a bit much for my taste.

its pretty good start man :] keep it up

[Orrie]

Ok here's mine it's almost finished I just need someone with a good ear for mixing and mastering to give me some advice on making it all shiny and polished.

It's more on the gitched out wonky side of things, bit like joker, taz buckfaster all them guys.

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This is fucking sick! Would love to see this hit wax at some point Dont have any critisism atall really

love it

Thanks man! You don't think there's too much high end? I can't tell because one of my bloody tweeters is blown

[jaydot]

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The basis for my latest trance/dubstep crossover...needs work on getting the beat and strings matched I think but still workin on it,

[stappard]

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The basis for my latest trance/dubstep crossover...needs work on getting the beat and strings matched I think but still workin on it,

the part you've sampled will work really well but you've gotta get the whole thing in time or its just confusing man! theres lots of little pauses and volume changes in the sample too which don't exactly help its clarity...

also, the drum beat youve added feels like it needs less kicks and more swinging percussion to me, i dont know though

[stappard]

Ok here's mine it's almost finished I just need someone with a good ear for mixing and mastering to give me some advice on making it all shiny and polished.

It's more on the gitched out wonky side of things, bit like joker, taz buckfaster all them guys.

Soundcloud

This is fucking sick! Would love to see this hit wax at some point Dont have any critisism atall really

love it

Thanks man! You don't think there's too much high end? I can't tell because one of my bloody tweeters is blown

Cool track man - any advice on making a synth sound like that one that comes in at 2:02? Very Joker-y

[jaydot]

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The basis for my latest trance/dubstep crossover...needs work on getting the beat and strings matched I think but still workin on it,

the part you've sampled will work really well but you've gotta get the whole thing in time or its just confusing man! theres lots of little pauses and volume changes in the sample too which don't exactly help its clarity...

also, the drum beat youve added feels like it needs less kicks and more swinging percussion to me, i dont know though

Yeah it needs to be in time I'm confused though, the autowarp in Ableton makes it sound too fast so I timestretch iot and it sounds too slow! I need to consolidate it all and have one set BPM and volume I think.

[stegee]

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[Orrie]

Ok here's mine it's almost finished I just need someone with a good ear for mixing and mastering to give me some advice on making it all shiny and polished.

It's more on the gitched out wonky side of things, bit like joker, taz buckfaster all them guys.

Soundcloud

This is fucking sick! Would love to see this hit wax at some point Dont have any critisism atall really

love it

Thanks man! You don't think there's too much high end? I can't tell because one of my bloody tweeters is blown

Cool track man - any advice on making a synth sound like that one that comes in at 2:02? Very Joker-y

Cheers! Yeah that's a Korg Polysix, put the cutoff up and play with the modulation wheel on any old synth and you should be able to get a wiggly sound like that.

[CollisionCourse]

I'm pretty nervous to actually unveil anything to the cruel internetz so don't be too brutal any and all other feedback will be appreciated

It's definitely a work in progress and I have a female singer + vocal melodies in mind for it, but I haven't recorded it yet and figured i'd see what anyone thought of it before I went that far.

Soundcloud


EDIT- I swear I'm retarded, I can't get the soundcloud link to work...

mate that is amazing! usually with tracks like this you find either the sounds dont go well together or the productin isnt very tight but youve you hit it spot on! well done

[stappard]

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The basis for my latest trance/dubstep crossover...needs work on getting the beat and strings matched I think but still workin on it,

the part you've sampled will work really well but you've gotta get the whole thing in time or its just confusing man! theres lots of little pauses and volume changes in the sample too which don't exactly help its clarity...

also, the drum beat youve added feels like it needs less kicks and more swinging percussion to me, i dont know though

Yeah it needs to be in time I'm confused though, the autowarp in Ableton makes it sound too fast so I timestretch iot and it sounds too slow! I need to consolidate it all and have one set BPM and volume I think.

Don't bother with the autowarp, just set the markets yourself. For trance it wont be too difficult to work out where they go (better yet find out the original bpm of the track and chances are you wont have to warp at all)


If you get a chance any feedback for the track in my sig would be appreciated..

[honey-d]

I'm pretty nervous to actually unveil anything to the cruel internetz so don't be too brutal any and all other feedback will be appreciated

It's definitely a work in progress and I have a female singer + vocal melodies in mind for it, but I haven't recorded it yet and figured i'd see what anyone thought of it before I went that far.

Soundcloud


EDIT- I swear I'm retarded, I can't get the soundcloud link to work...

mate that is amazing! usually with tracks like this you find either the sounds dont go well together or the productin isnt very tight but youve you hit it spot on! well done

thanks alot for taking the time to check it out! Anyone else got anything before the track is lost to the next page of this thread?

[JTL]

I'm pretty nervous to actually unveil anything to the cruel internetz so don't be too brutal any and all other feedback will be appreciated

It's definitely a work in progress and I have a female singer + vocal melodies in mind for it, but I haven't recorded it yet and figured i'd see what anyone thought of it before I went that far.

Soundcloud


EDIT- I swear I'm retarded, I can't get the soundcloud link to work...

mate that is amazing! usually with tracks like this you find either the sounds dont go well together or the productin isnt very tight but youve you hit it spot on! well done

thanks alot for taking the time to check it out! Anyone else got anything before the track is lost to the next page of this thread?

I rather like it, it reminds me of Burial a little. Definitely needs some female vocals, with some sort of effect on them? I'm completely new to production myself, been at it only a few days, so I couldn't tell you what. But it's pretty nice Well done!

[JTL]

I'm really new to writing dubstep, I use Logic and would love some FEEDBACK!!

Would you be able to have a look at my track and tell me what you think.
Soundcloud


Thanks,

Matthew

Don't really like the Kick-hits, (matter of preference maybe?) and I think they're a little too loud as well, but I really like the sound of the wobbles, that kind of robotic/mechanical kind off sound
I was also noticing that the Sub-bass was taking over a bit much for my taste.

its pretty good start man :] keep it up

I like this for the most part. I have to agree with Muta, I'm not really feeling the kicks. At least not as they are currently, try layering with an 808 or something maybe? Wobs are spot on, maybe try changing the frequency up a bit. And yeah the sub was a little too resonant at points, but other than that, good work mate!

[hexade]

A Dark new track i started work on yesterday. Im still experimenting. My mate thinks its sick, but what do you guys think?
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[JTL]

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My newest work in progress would love some feedback from you lot

much love to the WIP crew

Louis

Love your synth selections and your melodies, good work man! What do you use for your synth work?

This has got that UK Funky/Carnival vibe with the snare arrangement. DIGGING IT MAN! Great work !