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Re: Nation - People Don't Think (feedback please)

Post by Mike-Joyce » Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:16 pm

dj nation wrote:Ive just made this new track and id really appreciated some feedback to get me going on it again. cheers

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Nice Track, I like the feel to this. The subb/Bass is good, you can feel it nicely. Few things you could do is thicken up the beat. Maybe add some more percussion

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Mike-Joyce » Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:34 pm

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Nice Track. You've got a good solid sub bass line going on. Rubbles my feet well!. Liking the triangle percussion at the beggining, maybe add more of that in the main bit. Some ambiant vocals would do this track well too. Also try out making more drum fills, where you take out the bass, so its a semi Rise/Drop.

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145BPM Too much subb?? Or just not clean enough?

Post by Mike-Joyce » Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:41 pm

Hey, Let me know what you think?

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Is the subb to loud at the begining and the end? and what do you think of the structure?

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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by soulshynchyld » Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:03 pm

mike.... reckon ya sub is all good, but bring ya rhythm in abit more gradually like.. im not too much into dance, but its real catchy ah!!chea
tripwire, thats real nice ay. nice movement throughout, luv it wen the subs hit, duno where i would take it, but mean!!

& this is one im working on. just playing around with freqz abit, theres a tone in the blakground that i think of as green, its quite overpowering, but when it all comes together it doesnt sound too bad lyk, alot of work could be done to this, likn where its going anyways!! CHEA
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Re: PUT YOUR WORKS-IN-PROGRESS HERE FOR FEEDBACK.

Post by Mike-Joyce » Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:33 pm

soulshynchyld wrote:mike.... reckon ya sub is all good, but bring ya rhythm in abit more gradually like.. im not too much into dance, but its real catchy ah!!chea
tripwire, thats real nice ay. nice movement throughout, luv it wen the subs hit, duno where i would take it, but mean!!

& this is one im working on. just playing around with freqz abit, theres a tone in the blakground that i think of as green, its quite overpowering, but when it all comes together it doesnt sound too bad lyk, alot of work could be done to this, likn where its going anyways!! CHEA
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Nice Track. I like the crackhead vocals going on. Also the sounds at the beginning are cool. they could be well good for a Rise-up and then have a fat old drop. Not too sure about the distorted noises at the end, sounded abit random to me. for this track I would replace them with some high pitch soft/screechy notes (if that makes any sence). Like the idea of a green noise thoe. Keep it up.

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Re: nation - people don't think

Post by dj nation » Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:18 pm

cheers mike, muich appreciated, ill work on the drums alot more, and also need to work on the 2nd drop. cheers mate
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