Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

[Sharmaji]

Share and comment on completed tracks here-- please don't post until you've offered feedback on at least THREE tracks already. The DSF heads will keep it self-policed. now get to writin!

[Astral]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

[CollisionCourse]

was about to ask why is the thread closed lol

[dddemain]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Don't know why but this isn't working at the moment :s

[Astral]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Don't know why but this isn't working at the moment :s

Fixed, soundcloud is updating remarkably slow for me at the moment, so in a hazzy glance I mistook the wip xD

[continuumdnb]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

I like this: nice chilled vibe, deep subs, no massive wobbles, sample is well used and chosen too.

Things i could have liked a bit more:
-There's no ending, it just cuts out (should this have maybe gone in the WIP thread, or has soundcloud just screwed up?)
- The drum pattern is nice, but could do with a bit more variety. Switch it up a bit more (though keep subtle)
- ***Disclaimer, this is personal taste*** I want to hear this with a much deeper, more clicky snare, so it's in some ways closer to a second, different kick. It just felt like it'd fit.

edit: track in my sig as the quota of 3 hasn't been filled, will post two more feedbacks when they are.

[worldpremiere]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

Hello,

This tune has a really nice vibe. Sounds great and all, but as the guy above shared.. it just lacks variety.

And again.. following the previous post.. why have you cut it like this? Make it a bit more DJ friendly.. Or maybe it really isn't finished?

[dignan]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

I liked this tune... that vocal sample is really nice, so are the synths. one thing that struck me as off though was the snare drum, personally I feel it's too in your face for such a chilled track. i also feel that all your drums and percussion could come down a tad in volume, my 2 cents....

[wirez]

This sounds like such a good idea, hopefully it will increase the amount of feedback each of us will be getting from now on

[Astral]

Cheers for the feedback guys, I agree with a few things and I'll do a bit of editing and rearrangement. It was never intended to be perfect though , I had this Brian eno meets Pierre Shaeffer mentality going on, as I quote from my soundcloud

Phases, Distorts, dosnt fit right, bass clashes, and I wont fix it, I like the sound.

Let's hear your guys tracks then, I have a three feedback quota to fill

[collige]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

The basic idea behind this track is awesome. However:
-The breakdown and 2nd drop are basically repeats of the intro and first drop. Change it up.
-Personally, I would give the bass more "movement" as opposed to the droning sound you have now, but that's a fairly subjective statement.

That said, I think this track is pretty damn good.

Seeing as there hasn't been three tracks posted yet, I cant very well give feedback on three tracks. So, here's mine:
Soundcloud

There's a few things I have to clean up, but I think it fits better in this thread than the WIP.

I am fully aware that it partially reuses the melody from Mala - Left Leg Out. Should I call it a remix, or leave as an original composition (seeing as the rest of the track sounds nothing like the original Mala tune)?

[dignan]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

The basic idea behind this track is awesome. However:
-The breakdown and 2nd drop are basically repeats of the intro and first drop. Change it up.
-Personally, I would give the bass more "movement" as opposed to the droning sound you have now, but that's a fairly subjective statement.

That said, I think this track is pretty damn good.

Seeing as there hasn't been three tracks posted yet, I cant very well give feedback on three tracks. So, here's mine:
Soundcloud

There's a few things I have to clean up, but I think it fits better in this thread than the WIP.

I am fully aware that it partially reuses the melody from Mala - Left Leg Out. Should I call it a remix, or leave as an original composition (seeing as the rest of the track sounds nothing like the original Mala tune)?

really like the drum beat in your tune man, had some cool and interesting variations as well. i think that you should wait to bring back that main synth line during the first section of the tune - i think you should bring it in when the wobble stops - i felt there was a little too much going on when both the main synth and wobble were happening at the same time. i also wasn't a big fan of that vocal sample that came in, felt out of place...

nice one man!

[dignan]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

The basic idea behind this track is awesome. However:
-The breakdown and 2nd drop are basically repeats of the intro and first drop. Change it up.
-Personally, I would give the bass more "movement" as opposed to the droning sound you have now, but that's a fairly subjective statement.

That said, I think this track is pretty damn good.

Seeing as there hasn't been three tracks posted yet, I cant very well give feedback on three tracks. So, here's mine:
Soundcloud

There's a few things I have to clean up, but I think it fits better in this thread than the WIP.

I am fully aware that it partially reuses the melody from Mala - Left Leg Out. Should I call it a remix, or leave as an original composition (seeing as the rest of the track sounds nothing like the original Mala tune)?

really like the drum beat in your tune man, had some cool and interesting variations as well. i think that you should wait to bring back that main synth line during the first section of the tune - i think you should bring it in when the wobble stops - i felt there was a little too much going on when both the main synth and wobble were happening at the same time. i also wasn't a big fan of that vocal sample that came in, felt out of place...

nice one man!

[dignan]

sorry, double post

[BananaBomber]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

Really Feeling This Mate The Sub Is Beautiful Too Maybe A Few Switch Ups Here And There To Keep The Listener Entertained But Overall A Really Solid Tune

Well done!

[wirez]

sorry, double post

Dude, usually when somebody double posts they edit the doubled post to say double post rather than posting a new post... This helps maintain space on the page of the thread

[dignan]

sorry, double post

Dude, usually when somebody double posts they edit the doubled post to say double post rather than posting a new post... This helps maintain space on the page of the thread

it's my first double post ever on this board - cut me some slack lol

[Code Zero]

Hi made a chill track for a change.I kept it as minimal as i could to lay the main focus on the vocal. Honestly i was just in the mood for something like this, stumbled upon the vocal and started making beats underneath it . Vocals in the begin don't quite fit, but it didn't really bother me .

Listen & comment plz

btw i like this monthly thing way better!
Soundcloud

[dignan]

Hi made a chill track for a change.I kept it as minimal as i could to lay the main focus on the vocal. Honestly i was just in the mood for something like this, stumbled upon the vocal and started making beats underneath it . Vocals in the begin don't quite fit, but it didn't really bother me .

Listen & comment plz

btw i like this monthly thing way better!
Soundcloud

dude. read the first post.

[Code Zero]

Soundcloud

First, mind, I can't complete the requirements

Edit: Fixed

Nice vibe in it!

love the bassline, although as stated above the snare is too present in this track.