Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

[Mike-Joyce]

Anyone think the subb is too much or distorted at the begining of the track?

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[deadnoisesystem]

Anyone think the subb is too much or distorted at the begining of the track?

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Mike

sub sounds fine mate, track is sounding good, little more variation and it ll smash it

[deadnoisesystem]

Nice tune slyman, im not too sure what to say about it lol, but i like the vibes. And nice track in your sig gnome

Now my turn
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Lighter than my other tracks. Just started working on it. Not sure where to take it though. Help and feedback would be greatly appreciated

loving it man! got some proper flow on it sounds mint as.
definitely your own style as far as im concerned.
big ups from New Zealand bro!

Thanks so much for the feedback! Really does give me motivation to carry on. I thought i'd share another track, quite opposite to 'Dreams', this one is a lot darker and filthyer, at the moment im just finding my feet, i barely know my way around FL studio.
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Enjoy it, feedback will be much appreciated, and thanks again for the people that did take the time to listen & Comment!

naughty sounding track mate

[streetxlite]

I know how adverse you guys are with youtubes, but its all thats working atm.
Soundcloud is being a bitch on my end...

Been working on this one this weekend in my spare time, really like the feel of it, but would like some dub-educated feedback
Uses samples from The Evil Dead, so its got the creepy vibe going.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1_xB3ahbzkk

[dreadheaded]

hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet

i really like this i think it works really well, the only thing im not 100% sure of is the actual notes the wobbel is pllaying

[dreadheaded]

an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part
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soiunds cool... just for my taste a little bit too saucy if you know what i mean... but i might be wrong, tho i'm listening over my monitors...
drum pattern is indeed interesting . love this 8bit feeling of it.

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woul,d love to hear some quick opinion/advice.. want to finish that today

this sounds pretty finished to me, you got some really nice sounds in there

i think that delayed vocal sample that cones in a few times is to loud i think

thats all i can think of, sounds great

[dreadheaded]

an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part
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i really like some of the sounds, and yea it does sound nice and warm, but i think its lacking high end in general

i dont really like the hats sound themselves, and i think you could bring out the highs a bit on the really warm paddy thing

[dreadheaded]

I know i already posted this in the old WIP thread but it got changed so i thought i would put it back up because im quite stuck, im just not sure where to go with it


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[ironik]

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[redjuan]

I know i already posted this in the old WIP thread but it got changed so i thought i would put it back up because im quite stuck, im just not sure where to go with it


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think this was the one i commented on before,i think you could build it with sum nice atmospherics,i do quite like the sound of it to be honest,just needs more added,even add a bit more to the drums even,id comment more bt my knowledge of production is only begining to grow

[redjuan]

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listened to ur first track,thought the intro could do with beefin up more to be honest,after the first drop i thought sum elements of the track sounded a tad out of time,in terms of vocal to kick,but overall quite liked it,give off a kind of prodigy/big beat element prob caused by the synths,but i quite liked it

[tripwire22]

hey guys! this is a track iam currently working on! would love to hear from u guys what u think of it and the most important What i could change to make it better
the track is unmastered and unfinished yet

i really like this i think it works really well, the only thing im not 100% sure of is the actual notes the wobbel is pllaying

agreed i think the wobble was the only part that didnt fit right to my ears

[tripwire22]

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listened to ur first track,thought the intro could do with beefin up more to be honest,after the first drop i thought sum elements of the track sounded a tad out of time,in terms of vocal to kick,but overall quite liked it,give off a kind of prodigy/big beat element prob caused by the synths,but i quite liked it

agreed intro was a bit bare and the 2nd sound kinda was too loud for me. also idk if its a rmx or what but do u have to have the vocals through the whole song? maybe beef ur kick a bit more mate.

[tripwire22]

Anyone think the subb is too much or distorted at the begining of the track?

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Mike

sub sounds fine mate, track is sounding good, little more variation and it ll smash it

this song is big and kinda catchy idk why. i agree though throw somthing new in there to throw them off then come back to what u have to finish it

[tripwire22]

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this was in the old topic but is my latest song in prog so ill repost for more ideas

[jaydot]

@GodfatherKura- The first track is getting there just needs a little syncing

@Mike Joyce- Yeah that track is fire. A little more variation and it will set off. I really like it.

@dreadhead-Liking the vibes in this track and in the one in your sig too, nice melodic dubstep.

Needs the 2nd drop to be different, but here's my latest WIP:




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Thoughts appreciated.

[redjuan]

nice one folks,heres two bits im currently working on ,any feedback appreciated.thanks J

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[trox]

an experimental track im working on. im not sure what to do for an intro or after this part
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hello all! I'm new to the forums!

Anyway..... feedback on foggy morning. i really like the mellow vibe on this one. But the drums don't hit as loud as I think they should, and the hi hat is a bit repetitive, maybe put a phaser on them to give it a more live feel, like the beat you made has. There are all kinds of things you can do to your loop ATM to make it switch up quite a bit with the melody/vibe to complete the track.

[trox]

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this was in the old topic but is my latest song in prog so ill repost for more ideas

this one is wicked! Loving the atmospheric vibes people are producing nowadays. I think all you need for this one is to lay out your formula for intro, chorus, verse, etc. and it should be good to go!

[streetxlite]

heres what i have for now, although i may have to post another without images if youtube takes it down again, grr.
Any EVIL DEAD fans?