MY FIRST DUBSTEP TRACK! "GIVE ME A WHAT?" FREE 320

[Clyde Hawkins]

Soundcloud

any feedback would be awesome!

[Clyde Hawkins]

sorry for bumping but im new to the forum, its my first dubstep track, and no feedback at all? come on guys, atleast one comment

[shredexx]

pretty cool tune man... I think you should chill out on the sample usage in the first 2 minutes... and then hold back on its use throughout the track. it gets a bit annoying after a few repetitions. But otherwise pretty cool... not really my thing atm but theres plenty of people who will lose their shit to stuff like this.

[Crux]

Nice work, the build up to the initial drop took wayyyyy to long for me. But once it dropped i got right back into it. Longer intros can definitely build up to a drop to where it sounds perfect, but can also just sound a little repetitive. Keep alot of change ups in the intro to let the listener know that its an intro, and hasnt dropped into the full track. Thats my opinion. But other than that, great vowel sound on the wobbles. Sub bass feels good. Nice sample too! Keep up the good work!

[Mold Inpsektor]

dope fucking love the drop, let me get a 320 if possible. The vocals are a bit annoying, but whatever, your first tuune its fuckinggg good. WHat you use to make the bass and what DAW?

[Corkz]

Soundcloud

any feedback would be awesome!

nice work! some new talent here man

yeah i pretty much agree with the other comments- it was awesome when it dropped ( especially for your first try) but the intro was kinda repetetive and it dragged on a bit

keep it up !

[Clyde Hawkins]

dope fucking love the drop, let me get a 320 if possible. The vocals are a bit annoying, but whatever, your first tuune its fuckinggg good. WHat you use to make the bass and what DAW?

thanks you guys! you can download a 320 from the soundcloud player. i use FL Studio 9 and i used native instruments massive for the bass. yeah im getting a few people saying the vocal gets a little annoying and that the intro is too long. also i understand what ur saying about people not knowing if its dropped yet. like you'll hear the bass sounds coming in and you cant be sure if thats what the rest of the song is gonna sound like, and its 6 minutes so some people might shut it off right away. i myself dont like long intros and if i think its dropped already and it sounds lame i usually say NEXT. so i'll be sure to keep the intros minimal from now on. thanks for all the input guys!

[Corkz]

yeah keep your intros between 16 and 32 bars

i prefer shorter intros

[rudebwoy]

i prefer shorter intros

yea same here, but after the drop its biiiig

[fassyman]

production wise this is very impressive for your first tune imo

but yeah what they said about intro too long, over use of sample etc

abit nasty for my taste but yeah sounds good man

[Corkz]

i prefer shorter intros

yea same here, but after the drop its biiiig

yeah it is - if you took out most of the intro to this tune and kept it as 16 bars... it could be amazing!

[subgoeswoof]

pretty cool tune man... I think you should chill out on the sample usage in the first 2 minutes... and then hold back on its use throughout the track. it gets a bit annoying after a few repetitions. But otherwise pretty cool... not really my thing atm but theres plenty of people who will lose their shit to stuff like this.

I agree completely lush drop though and liking the sounds

[Clyde Hawkins]

ok thanks guys! stay tuned for the next one then, shorter intro, and im thinkin of mixing in some rap lyrics from a good song. what do you guys think about dubstep with rap vocals placed strategically? datsik does this sometimes and some other people as well. i think its an awesome combination!