Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by tripaddict » Sat Mar 13, 2010 5:49 am

props for the feedback will let u know if i take it bk to the drawing board ;)

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by lowpass » Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:01 am

Bad Lux wrote:Heres another. Comments welcome :)

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Mate I like it, I know what you're trying to do with the disjointed break thing and it sounds cool but

I think some other rhythmic pattern (hihats, percussion or another break) to make the rhythm more constant would help a lot, finding it hard to keep nodding my head.

@Astral - Nice song man really aggy, I'd recommended backing off a little on the reverb on that snare, but yeah mint track big up!

@ Trip - Thought for a second there you'd be the first producer I've heard to do an 8 bar Intro :D , great track, love the use of 'verb in it, automated bitcrushin on the snare?

Here is my track, again mainly lookin for crit on structure, music etc but yeah feel free to crit the mix if you want:-

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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3187516/Lowpass ... Master.mp3

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by FSTZ » Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:39 pm

official remix for Defunct! General Levy and Dandy Kid Records

Still have a little tightening up on the levels but I thought I'd share

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feedback always welcome

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by faultier » Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:40 pm

Bad Lux wrote:Heres another. Comments welcome :)

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i agree with the poster above, the track would be improved by adding a hi hat pattern to complement the amen choppage
Here is my track, again mainly lookin for crit on structure, music etc but yeah feel free to crit the mix if you want:-

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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3187516/Lowpass ... Master.mp3

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the track is well produced i think, everything sounds clean, maybe a bit too clinical (but i guess thats just subjective opinion) also i would have added some more variations in the wobble

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by FSTZ » Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:06 pm

thanks for the feedback guys!

I looked for regular members tracks in here but didn't find much, I'd love to reciprocate the feedback

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by HeretiK » Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:03 pm

Hey guys, just finished this track up, any comments (positive or negative if constructive) would be greatly appreciated and will be replied too :)



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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by bifta » Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:23 am

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Feedback would be great thanks :)

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:42 am

lowpass wrote:
Bad Lux wrote:Heres another. Comments welcome :)

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Mate I like it, I know what you're trying to do with the disjointed break thing and it sounds cool but

I think some other rhythmic pattern (hihats, percussion or another break) to make the rhythm more constant would help a lot, finding it hard to keep nodding my head.

@Astral - Nice song man really aggy, I'd recommended backing off a little on the reverb on that snare, but yeah mint track big up!

@ Trip - Thought for a second there you'd be the first producer I've heard to do an 8 bar Intro :D , great track, love the use of 'verb in it, automated bitcrushin on the snare?

Here is my track, again mainly lookin for crit on structure, music etc but yeah feel free to crit the mix if you want:-

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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3187516/Lowpass ... Master.mp3

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Thanx 4 the feedback. Well the reason I used this drum pattern is cus this is a remix of a tune called Stalk her by Prodigal Son. Actually the drums are sampled from that tune. Guess its one of those hate or love it ting. Also was my first full dubstep track. Did u check my other one??? 8)

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:42 am

oooops

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:50 am

dfaultuzr wrote:
Bad Lux wrote:Heres another. Comments welcome :)

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i agree with the poster above, the track would be improved by adding a hi hat pattern to complement the amen choppage
Here is my track, again mainly lookin for crit on structure, music etc but yeah feel free to crit the mix if you want:-

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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3187516/Lowpass ... Master.mp3

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the track is well produced i think, everything sounds clean, maybe a bit too clinical (but i guess thats just subjective opinion) also i would have added some more variations in the wobble
Thanx 4 feedback. This was my first full dubstep production. I guess i overlooked the hi hats. I hadnt even realized this until u brought it up. As basic as a hi hat is I must have been caught up with everyting else goin on. Scope my other tune i posted. Peace

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:58 am

HeretiK wrote:Hey guys, just finished this track up, any comments (positive or negative if constructive) would be greatly appreciated and will be replied too :)



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http://www.myspace.com/heretiknb
Nice tune. I like the jungle style drum pattern at the end. I tink u should add some distorted stabs here and there. Maybe a couple a bass drops. Check my tunes. Peace :P

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:05 am

bifta wrote:Soundcloud

Feedback would be great thanks :)
U got a good concept bifta. Very original. But u should check ur volume level on ur lead. And do some eqing on your drums. You want ur drums to sound loud and crisp, as this is a big part of your track. Practice makes perfect. Scope my tunes and comment please :) Peace

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:54 am

TheSnifit wrote:This is my first attempt at a dubstep track any sort of feedback would be awesome!!

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Nice. Its a good tune. All u need is to master it. U know make drums hit harder. Thicken the synth. Make it growl :twisted: but other than that its dope. Scope my tunes out. Feedback welcome

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by bifta » Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:19 am

Bad Lux wrote:
bifta wrote:Soundcloud

Feedback would be great thanks :)
U got a good concept bifta. Very original. But u should check ur volume level on ur lead. And do some eqing on your drums. You want ur drums to sound loud and crisp, as this is a big part of your track. Practice makes perfect. Scope my tunes and comment please :) Peace
Thanks for the feedback, will go back an sort it out

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by DEMZ » Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:00 am

Would love some feedback on this new one, nice and heavy for a change 8)

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by HeretiK » Sun Mar 14, 2010 4:28 pm

Bad Lux wrote:
bifta wrote:Soundcloud

Feedback would be great thanks :)
I think this has got a really cool idea behind it, but it seems that theres quite a few unwanted bass frequencies flying about :/ theres are drowning out your kick a bit. try turning down that lead line and layering your kick and snare, that should help the drums push through. its a sick idea behind the track tho :)

any comments on my tracks would be greatly appreciated :

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by arktrix45hz » Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:37 pm

HeretiK wrote:Hey guys, just finished this track up, any comments (positive or negative if constructive) would be greatly appreciated and will be replied too :)



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Feeling this a hell of a lot, nice and moody! :e:

Heres my latest finished article. Let me know if the drum compression sounds alright.

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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010

Post by HeretiK » Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:40 pm

arktrix wrote:
HeretiK wrote:Hey guys, just finished this track up, any comments (positive or negative if constructive) would be greatly appreciated and will be replied too :)



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http://www.myspace.com/heretiknb
Feeling this a hell of a lot, nice and moody! :e:

Heres my latest finished article. Let me know if the drum compression sounds alright.

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yeah man, i think the snare cuts through nicely, and they got a nice rhythm too them :) sounds good


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