17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

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17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

Post by JVMA » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:15 pm

Sup dubsteppaz!

Recently got Fl studio and made this track. Feedback, good or bad is appreciated.

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Re: 17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

Post by 1000bph » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:26 pm

good start :)))

but lots of work, listening, comparing etc. etc....

but you're on the right track :)))
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Re: 17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

Post by HangManDubstep » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:38 pm

sweet.

quickly change the thread name because ppl will flame u for including your age.

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Re: 17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

Post by aftee » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:46 pm

unless you're like ~10 years old, age really doesn't matter.
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Re: 17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

Post by blackbrandon » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:47 pm

it's alright, but the beginning shouldn't be so long, and you might want to try putting some kind of melodic sound in there. i'm down for straight wobs as much as the next guy, but having some sort of substance behind them will help dissociate yourself from other beginning dubsters. i like how good it is for you just starting out, though.
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Re: 17 years old... need feedback on my new tune please :D

Post by JVMA » Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:05 pm

thanks for comments guys. just what i wanted :)
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