Omg that sound is awesome. No constructive feedback here I'm sorry, just needed to say it's awesomecleanexecution wrote:this is a grime track ive been workin for the past few days. i feel like ive reached some pinacle point with the track.. although i feel like its not totally finished yet all of its elements are in place. and kind of feedback would be nice!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
@ gravity, yeah agree on most parts, might tighten it up a bit....it was 4 hours work so needs a revisit. I am a distortion fan, not too bothered about the squashing. will check your track and feedback!
			
			
									
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Really enjoyed this, an awesome selection of sounds used to build up a wicked track.mistayif wrote:could i get some more feedback on this tune please?
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i was thinking about sending it out but after giving it another listen just now, i think it needs a little bit of tidying up as some parts are a bit messy
what do you guys think?
Criticisms...
Sub bass seems very flappy and exceptionally unidirectional, I have a feeling this might be an issue between the bottom end of your kick drum and your sub bass. Might be an idea to high pass your kick a little higher and to compress your sub bass to make it feel a little 'tighter'.
I think the vocal could have been a little louder.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
I really liked the breaks on the track it gives it some personality to it intead of the normal Dubstep beat. cheers for that!
but the overall drumset sound at the begining sound a bit weak and no punchiness. besides that pretty good work!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
No other comments i can make about the production of this track other than i really like it bro!kontigobeats wrote:gravity: this one is nice! some real good sounds used in it, keep it up!
heres my new one, some nice synths and tried to get a nice bass drop, quite new to production but quite pleased with this one so any feedback appreciated!
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good work
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right got my widget sorted now so here goes, any feedbacks good feedback.
			
			
									
									
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I like it mate, cool vocal sample, and ya keep the bass interesting.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
penndragon wrote:No other comments i can make about the production of this track other than i really like it bro!kontigobeats wrote:gravity: this one is nice! some real good sounds used in it, keep it up!
heres my new one, some nice synths and tried to get a nice bass drop, quite new to production but quite pleased with this one so any feedback appreciated!
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good work
cool beat, nice kick, nice synth work going on in the intro.think the bass line needs work, really loving that intro
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
i like the delay on the snare, nice minimal feel going on. top tune bro not much else to say, maybe turn the hi hats down just a touch
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
@darkdubz your widgets seems to be broken or someting :/ Thanks for the feedback btw! I'm afraid i can't help the hihat thing cause' my mac just crashed a few weeks ago and i've lost all my projects samples and whatnot 
 I'm seeing this as a "Fresh new beggining" haha just triyng to have a positive attitude against this haha 
			
			
									
									
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sorry to hear about your computer man, that sux, has happened to me before, was a good excuse to upgrade ma mac
			
			
									
									
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That's exactly what i did haha.darkdubz wrote:sorry to hear about your computer man, that sux, has happened to me before, was a good excuse to upgrade ma mac
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Hey guys, tracks seem to be a lot better from the last time I was in here. Really jealous of some of your tunes!
Looking to make some finalizing changes on this one, let me know what you think.
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						Looking to make some finalizing changes on this one, let me know what you think.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
like the atmosphere at the beginning, nice beat. would work on making that bass lower, but thats just personal preference. nice track mate keep it upIanMassoth wrote:Hey guys, tracks seem to be a lot better from the last time I was in here. Really jealous of some of your tunes!
Looking to make some finalizing changes on this one, let me know what you think.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Really mellow track, I was really excited from the intro.
The wind up in the beginning is to cranking and electro-ish, got me too excited for the flow of the track. It was also too loud. I felt the tape delaying percussion felt robotic and cheap. I think a thicker reverb could help it out. The mouthy break verse was a real treat. Over all a pretty cool track.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
I personally think that people shouldn't follow rules or things like that at the time at making music. Like combining sounds with others that they don't really match but somehow feels right.IanMassoth wrote:Really mellow track, I was really excited from the intro.
The wind up in the beginning is to cranking and electro-ish, got me too excited for the flow of the track. It was also too loud. I felt the tape delaying percussion felt robotic and cheap. I think a thicker reverb could help it out. The mouthy break verse was a real treat. Over all a pretty cool track.
As one of my fellas producer Pacheko would said. "Say no to formula"
thank you for your feedback man i really apreciate it. Your track it's really really good you shouldn't be jealous haha
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