WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

[Warrenwheedle]

Hey guys check this son of a bitch out!!

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[idlemode]

tune in sig. any thoughts?

[Mortal]

@idlemoode
verry chilled vibes going on there, like it,
and im digging that smooth intro.
sadly souncloud decided to stop working halfway through...
will try and listen again tomorrow

[Bassmagnet]

@Warrenwheedle Change up that bass man. Eq the kick from the bass aswell..
@Idlemode Good atmosphere here man. I'm not sure if you haven't put in some bass yet, but I would... Maybe some small sub and/or light midrange bass? The kick is taking over the whole track aswell, maybe turn down the level a bit?

Working on this as a tribute to that bitch in every guys life who is a bitch in every sense of the word
I'm not sure how about the feel though... I'm having trouble leveling this with such shitty speakers.
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PS Thank you Lauryn Hill for your beautiful vox

[Mortal]

@bassmagnet

really loving those vocals, they tie together the whole track
to stop it from sounding too harsh and chaotic.
this could just be my wank headphones,
but a little more bass in some places would be good.

[idlemode]

@Bassmagnet
thanks for the feedback mate. there is bass but needs to go up it seems.


your track i can't help you with the levels as am on some headphones where i am today. sounding good here though. the track i like. like the idea. much variation to it also.

[deadly_habit]

https://www.yousendit.com/download/OHo0 ... NjgwTVE9PQ
bout 3 hrs into this one
back on that shuffly dance tip again

[Mortal]

@deadly habit
glad youve got that noisy hihat in there...adds a nice shuffle to the beat,
but when the bass kicks in theres plenty of sub bass, i think a little more
emphasis on the midrange would do it justice. only a tad though.


thats my comment spree over for tonight...need sleep

[beatdemo]

hmm sorry to be so picky, i only liked about 2-3 tracks...yall gotta hit me with that gangster shit at the beginning of the tracks man, or atleast make your sounds work together...then go off on the winding road after that....get the peoples attention at the beginning...compress those drums, side chain that shit, and make it bang..even if its a slow track, make that shit hit harder than a donkeys kick ya dig?

here's my track for review: POSSESSION OF GANJA....big bass, big drums, big shit poppin:
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feedback please...

reviews of others:
@mplisskin ...kinda repetitions...the background is cool...not so hot on the bassline...to sharp.

@tripwire22...not really my thing...doesnt sound organized or something

@a.paul...intro too long...where's the bass?

@weedcali....yeah i like this man..something to smoke too...chill vibez...all the sounds worked together..

@reverend......not really feeling the intro....too many strings! whats goin on...

@HAACK....nice man...feelin the heavy bass...flow...

@goldorak...big sounds, but i think u gotta arrange them better

@JBE...nice outerspace things...

@nruen too slow for me...too fast at the end...pick a direction?

@redjuan track starts too late...hit me with the gangsta shit at the beginning

@goldorak.....intro is too long...not really my thing

@tagme track too all over the place...make it tighter...and pick a direction

@Layzie18 dope shit man...ill tracks!

@Warrenwheedle hmmmm...wasnt feelin this one too much...too light..drums to crazy...

@idlemode cool idea

@Mortal nice drums man...wheres the BASS tho?!!?

@Bassmagnet hmmmm i dunno if that thing sample works...kinda grating on my ears...track sounds kinda noisy...make it tighter..

[Psythe]

Ok so im aiming for the dark/robostep esk this track is not mastered just work in progress feedback good or bad most appreicative thanks. Soundcloud

[deadly_habit]

@deadly habit
glad youve got that noisy hihat in there...adds a nice shuffle to the beat,
but when the bass kicks in theres plenty of sub bass, i think a little more
emphasis on the midrange would do it justice. only a tad though.


thats my comment spree over for tonight...need sleep

heh its how i work excess sub work on rest

[soulshynchyld]

this is what i have bin workin on sporadically over the last few day. im loving where this is going & im sure you all will too!!!
advice? i just realized ma stereo isn't very linear at the mo so i might have to amp the sub abit!! chea
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haack -- its real nice but i feel it needs a constant darker atmosphere something that is barely noticeable, but adds depth! it just seems abit bright when ya can tell it wants to be deeper!

n-ruen -- that bassline that comes in at 44 needs to add to that melody.. its fighting it at the mo. &makes it sound off ay. @ 149 that bassline is real nice but the violin isnt quite the sound i can feel it wanting & i can still hear tha off notes. @346 ya should get ya sounds playn the same melody. violin is real nice here... but could do with a lil presence taken off & turn it up a lil to make up for it!

redjuan -- i can't feel this ay it feels like its just bin chucked together without thinking of the flow. sustain those 808 kicks abit maybe. i get its just a drum track.. but why haven't ya added abit more substace?

ya may not agree with ma feedback... my comments are just what i would do personally like! chea

[jayfmusik]

Hello people, this is my second song post requesting feedback, comments, etc. This song kinda emphasizes the sound I'm developing for myself. The layout of the song is done so its only 90% finished. Check it and tell me what you guys think...

[soulshynchyld]

Hello people, this is my second song post requesting feedback, comments, etc. This song kinda emphasizes the sound I'm developing for myself. The layout of the song is done so its only 90% finished. Check it and tell me what you guys think...

YA AINT GETN SHIT, TILL YA GIVE NIA!!HAHAHAHAH

[redjuan]

@ beatdemo-heavy track,really good work,sounds well get it finished,not exactly stuff id like but i can appreciate that tune,big ups...mytune-i literally put that bit in before the drop just to add an intro before i put it up,cheers for the feedback

@ soulsynchild yeah feelin that tune alot,maybe a bit of variety with a breakdown or something would maybe keep it more flowing IMO,good tune tho,really like the subs aswell,get that finished..cheers for your comments,as i said we hit a brickwall with that tune and it was a first attempt at a collab,but i like it and will finish it,thanks for your feedback

@ Jayfmusik liked the tune intro worked really nicely as did the drop,big up,good work

Bit ive been working on,feedback please on this,quite a deep track

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[tripwire22]

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[redjuan]

@tripwire,really feelin that,deep yet moody,love the autonomic sound too,get it finished

[tripwire22]

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this is good mate cant really tell u to fix anything love the part after 135

reminds me slightly of some acroplane material

[redjuan]

Thanks man i must now check acroplane,to my own ignorance i dnt know who they are

[tripwire22]

Thanks man i must now check acroplane,to my own ignorance i dnt know who they are

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