mistayif - Fortress Riddim, orchestral grime

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mistayif
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mistayif - Fortress Riddim, orchestral grime

Post by mistayif » Tue May 04, 2010 4:56 pm

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my first grime tune, have a listen please, any feedback is very much appreciated

think i'm gonna concentrate on grime for a while now, really enjoyed making this beat and want mc's to vocal them

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Re: mistayif - Fortress Riddim, orchestral grime

Post by larspro » Wed May 05, 2010 2:16 am

really liked this beat.. could definitely hear an MC on top of it

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Re: mistayif - Fortress Riddim, orchestral grime

Post by komatoes » Wed May 05, 2010 3:58 am

like it a lot. i agree with larspro, i could see an MC on this track.

the intro reminds me of Wu-Tang (DZ Remix) from wu-tang meets the indie culture vol 2

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Re: mistayif - Fortress Riddim, orchestral grime

Post by b-rice » Wed May 05, 2010 4:32 am

i dont know. an mc? honestly, u should prolly re due the trak several times and then pick out the one u like best. an mc might be cool, but def sum vocals of some sort. if there is nothing to draw u in, i.e vocals or lotsa neet sounds or wobly basses. then thats wut u have. nothing. just some food for thought. im not saying u made nothing. im just saying its lacking substance. get intricate with that shit. edit the hell out of it.
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