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chazzleman
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First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by chazzleman » Wed May 12, 2010 12:08 pm

Heys guys! Basically just been working in some ideas into a track. Heres like 1:51 of it, would really appreciate it if you could give me feedback, what i could do to improve it and how i would do so. Im using fl 9 with the usual like massive, sumo vst etc etc.

Even if you say its really shit, I would appreicte it if you said how its shit and give me your opinion on how i could improve the shitness lol.

Thankyouuuuuuu!


p.s. first dubstep track so keep that in mind :o

http://soundcloud.com/understar/first-d ... ck-improvs

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by corpu5 » Wed May 12, 2010 12:09 pm

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by marshy » Wed May 12, 2010 12:13 pm

Alright mate, if you look at the top of this subforum there's a thread called 'works in progress'. Stick your track in there and you should hopefully get some feedback! Review some other users who've posted in there too whilst you're at it.

There's also a 'dubs' section of this website where you can put your finished tracks for people to listen to.
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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by chazzleman » Wed May 12, 2010 12:14 pm

ohh sorry man! thankyou ill put it in there now :)

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by chazzleman » Wed May 12, 2010 12:17 pm

p.s. fucking sick track maan! like it alot

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by serox » Wed May 12, 2010 12:22 pm

chazzleman wrote:Heys guys! Basically just been working in some ideas into a track. Heres like 1:51 of it, would really appreciate it if you could give me feedback, what i could do to improve it and how i would do so. Im using fl 9 with the usual like massive, sumo vst etc etc.

Even if you say its really shit, I would appreicte it if you said how its shit and give me your opinion on how i could improve the shitness lol.

Thankyouuuuuuu!


p.s. first dubstep track so keep that in mind :o

http://soundcloud.com/understar/first-d ... ck-improvs
The intro sounds like a preset synth and its boring. I would suggest you take the groove from the track and have it somewhere in the intro to help make it familiar for listeners and get the head nodding in time.

The bass sound is overused. There are a million other people doing the same thing!
Don’t worry about people stealing an idea. If it’s original, you will have to ram it down their throats.

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by chazzleman » Wed May 12, 2010 12:26 pm

serox wrote:
chazzleman wrote:Heys guys! Basically just been working in some ideas into a track. Heres like 1:51 of it, would really appreciate it if you could give me feedback, what i could do to improve it and how i would do so. Im using fl 9 with the usual like massive, sumo vst etc etc.

Even if you say its really shit, I would appreicte it if you said how its shit and give me your opinion on how i could improve the shitness lol.

Thankyouuuuuuu!


p.s. first dubstep track so keep that in mind :o

http://soundcloud.com/understar/first-d ... ck-improvs
The intro sounds like a preset synth and its boring. I would suggest you take the groove from the track and have it somewhere in the intro to help make it familiar for listeners and get the head nodding in time.

The bass sound is overused. There are a million other people doing the same thing!


Yeah, well i was gunna have some vocals in there aswell but im working on bring the groove in! okay thanks, what do you reccomend i do then? im looking to fill the overused bass sounds with more sort of bass sounds but not flipping wobbles. sort of like a nero sound? or in Kick snare by crissy criss.

Thanks btw! :)

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by serox » Wed May 12, 2010 12:32 pm

chazzleman wrote:

Yeah, well i was gunna have some vocals in there aswell but im working on bring the groove in! okay thanks, what do you reccomend i do then? im looking to fill the overused bass sounds with more sort of bass sounds but not flipping wobbles. sort of like a nero sound? or in Kick snare by crissy criss.

Thanks btw! :)
I would avoid the vocals, they are harder to do than you may think. It is too easy to add some random shit in and think it sounds good but when you look back later it sounds like cheese or out of place.

I would try and make things a lot more basic with the groove. A simple beat/loop with 1 kick, 1 snare and 2 hats and a couple of percs is all you need imo. Make that groove interesting and not straight generic shit!

Once you have that basic groove then use that for your intro but replace the sounds with something else, lighter and with some bits removed but try keep them on the same place so its like the main groove of the track.
Don’t worry about people stealing an idea. If it’s original, you will have to ram it down their throats.

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Post by tripwire22 » Wed May 12, 2010 12:38 pm

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Post by chazzleman » Wed May 12, 2010 12:49 pm

thanks for the help! will get on with it.

and the dog eating the cat? i dont understanddd..

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Post by tripwire22 » Wed May 12, 2010 12:54 pm

ur the cat and the mods are the dog and ur IN his mouth

yeah i tried to hard

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Re: First Dubstep Track, Could do with some feedback! :)

Post by chazzleman » Wed May 12, 2010 12:58 pm

tripwire22 wrote:ur the cat and the mods are the dog and ur IN his mouth

yeah i tried to hard
hahaha good one. have to start somewhere though, i dont mind getting mauled by dogs as long as im getting feedback to make it sound better then so be it :o

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Post by tripwire22 » Wed May 12, 2010 1:04 pm

ill feed back u later. plus if u have aim add me

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