WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

[5-0-what]

got a new piece in my sig... not dubstep, but would appreciate the feedback anyway.

safe

you that is beautiful if you want i could lace a couple verses for this but yeah that hiss in the vocal is no bueno

yo i just did some work on that tune i posted earlier late me know what you think now i like it a whole lot more thanks all for the input Soundcloud

[samkablaam]

got a new piece in my sig... not dubstep, but would appreciate the feedback anyway.

safe

you that is beautiful if you want i could lace a couple verses for this but yeah that hiss in the vocal is no bueno

yo i just did some work on that tune i posted earlier late me know what you think now i like it a whole lot more thanks all for the input Soundcloud

yeh man, thats sounding good. its still quite unrelentin, like no part where the drums drop out or anything. but tbh, ive got bare songs that are just made for dancin and dont stop for 6 mins. oh also, theres no like proper kick (or at least what sounds like a kick). dunno if you want it that way... in which case fine, but it might help keep it moving, if you know what i mean.... try it, i might be wrong. soundin good though.

nice verses? dont mind givin it a try...

[CollisionCourse]

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[5-0-what]

Soundcloud

ok first thing is with an intro that long you need to add stuff in make it grow into the drums once it gets to it all its starts moving around nicely but the snare is flat take the shaker you used before all the vocals and add something a lil funky to the intro this is gonna be a dope tune when its finished

[Subside]

edit; going to re up newer version later

[Nacklewicket]

Soundcloud

any thoughts? is unfinished obviously
and u can prob tell from this, i love the trumpets
thx in advance

[a.paul]

Soundcloud

not usually my style, but sort of like this. just a short idea. let me know what you think? any ideas?
also sub seems to be louder on the right channel any ideas?
thanks.
austin

[Nacklewicket]

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not usually my style, but sort of like this. just a short idea. let me know what you think? any ideas?
also sub seems to be louder on the right channel any ideas?
thanks.
austin

chill and deep, try to get more things going on gradualy to make it more interesting also i think the intro needs more work/variation.
sub seems fine to me, try listening to it with headphones but maybe you already did that... if you still think the sub is louder on the right just pan it abit more to the left
but i think it can turn out really good if you put more work and effort to it

[a.paul]

@Nacklewicket

cheers for the feedback!
really liking your tune, reminds me of Anti Social!

[Psythe]

This is a snip of a track im workin on feedback most appreciative. I will return feedback aswell thanksSoundcloud

[a.paul]

This is a snip of a track im workin on feedback most appreciative. I will return feedback aswell thanksSoundcloud

really liking the percussion and sample! bass line is sweet too. can't wait to hear more.

[a.paul]

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added some more to this!
feedback is appreciated!

[Disco Nutter]

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added some more to this!
feedback is appreciated!

Just a little more work on the hats/shakers and you can make them sound like a rattle snake! Do that!

Jason

[JBE]

@Tripwire: Really liking that. The melody is really sounding good. The kick doesn't really work for me, but that might just be a preference for me. I just like a bit snappier kick. Everything else sounded really good though, especially when you bring in the bass.

@Deadly Habit: Sandworm is off the hook dude. I love the dark sound and atmosphere. Yea, you definitely need to finish it.

@Streetxlite: Not my thing personally. I would lessen some of the panning on the guitar and bring it a bit closer to the middle of the mix. It lacks fullness with it panned all the way to the right like that. Might help to use a stereo enhancer/expander rather than just panning the instrument itself. It's got good things going on, it's just hard to really comment on it cause it's not something I find myself listening to enough of.

@Joemakin: I would completely ditch the dirty wobble. I think it ruined what you already had going. Stick to using a heavy sub bass. Maybe throw in some little mid range wobs just to spice up the bassline a bit but don't go all nuts with it. Just a nice mid range sounding wobble would probably do the trick.

I've been on a trance kick the passed couple days. I decided to do something trancey. This is something I started working on yesterday and I really like how it's coming out. The last part I think feels a little too busy though, so I might try to do something there to try and make that not so confusing on the ears. I think I captured the trance sound rather well. The melodies and the pad were just kind of inspirations of some of the songs I've been listening to lately.

[edit]: Thanks Disco. Updated the track. Increased the snare volume and made a quick change to the backing melody that you hear throughout the track. opened up a little room for the end.

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[Disco Nutter]

@JBE

I think that the snare should be a bit higher in volume, I kind of feel like it's getting lost in the mix a bit?

Jason

[WeBang]

Soundcloud really changed it up in this one. sounding alot smoother though the subbass needs to be droppped down quite a bit

[WeBang]

got a new piece in my sig... not dubstep, but would appreciate the feedback anyway.

safe

you that is beautiful if you want i could lace a couple verses for this but yeah that hiss in the vocal is no bueno

yo i just did some work on that tune i posted earlier late me know what you think now i like it a whole lot more thanks all for the input Soundcloud

hm....don/t no what to say abut this one.....vocal is so cheesy because I hate that song....but you used it in a way that its not god aweful. Not really feeling the bass on this one though I think it just needs to be beefed up a little . Drums are pretty good just get some variation

[WeBang]

This is a snip of a track im workin on feedback most appreciative. I will return feedback aswell thanksSoundcloud

Drums are to low......cool vocal sample but it sounds a bit repetitive. I would say maybe take a last bar out of everything but the jungle vocal and time stretch it!!! might sound cool

[WeBang]

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any thoughts? is unfinished obviously
and u can prob tell from this, i love the trumpets
thx in advance

sounds pretty good. beef up that kick just a tad maybe a real subtle rasta one hit vocal in a like 2 spots with col effects and you got your self a down right good track

[a.paul]

@We Bang
Really liking the vibes from this one. Bass sort of reminds me of the talk box at the start of Livin' on a Prayer by Bon Jovi! haha.
Would be sweet to play this out! Keep it up