1st track,listen and give comments
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Dimenzion-x
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Re: 1st track,listen and give comments
Hmm....where to begin....
Ok, here goes...
The noises at the start do not sound at all in time, sync or key with each other. Just sounds like random noises.
There is no structure to the tracck, no build, break, drop etc, again, just randomness.
The Rhianna vocal???? all I can say is what the hell were you thinking? Seriously, it's sped up sooo much it sounds like the chipmunks singing it! And to top it off, you havnt even bothered to try and sync it up to the tempo of the beat or anything!!! Again, just thrown on there!
The bass comes in randomnly too, and again isnt in any kind of pattern with the beat, nor does it match any kind of melody from the synth attepts you made at the start.
In all honesty (and I know this post has been pretty harsh, for which I apologise), I'd suggest that if you want to continue producing music, seriously consider listening to other tracks, and how the melodies and basses work together, and how a track is structured! Dont just rush in, throwing anything in there, then call it music!
Ok, here goes...
The noises at the start do not sound at all in time, sync or key with each other. Just sounds like random noises.
There is no structure to the tracck, no build, break, drop etc, again, just randomness.
The Rhianna vocal???? all I can say is what the hell were you thinking? Seriously, it's sped up sooo much it sounds like the chipmunks singing it! And to top it off, you havnt even bothered to try and sync it up to the tempo of the beat or anything!!! Again, just thrown on there!
The bass comes in randomnly too, and again isnt in any kind of pattern with the beat, nor does it match any kind of melody from the synth attepts you made at the start.
In all honesty (and I know this post has been pretty harsh, for which I apologise), I'd suggest that if you want to continue producing music, seriously consider listening to other tracks, and how the melodies and basses work together, and how a track is structured! Dont just rush in, throwing anything in there, then call it music!
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ResetTheAtari
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Re: 1st track,listen and give comments
hahahahaha 
Seriously though, have a listen to some popular dubstep and try and copy it. You will get a feel for how a track builds and progresses.
Seriously though, have a listen to some popular dubstep and try and copy it. You will get a feel for how a track builds and progresses.
Old-school Piano Jungle inspired Dubstep - Soundcloud
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sleepyhead1
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Re: 1st track,listen and give comments
cheers guys 
ill get back to the lab thats what i wnated thanks for the honesty,and thats what i was expecting,and yes i realise the vocals are ridiculous lol
ill get back to the lab thats what i wnated thanks for the honesty,and thats what i was expecting,and yes i realise the vocals are ridiculous lolWho is online
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