WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

[5-0-what]

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just made this will def leave feedback for who ever leaves some

this intro is nice im already thinking of like ten tracks to mix
the kick is it sounds like it needs a little more on its tail end the bell sequence need either turned down some or need to be a lil more varied
dope tune fersher
hope that make sense or helps

here is a tune i did for this dnb mc with like 3 days as a deadline
i played dnb for 10 Plus years but this was my first attempt at dnb its not where i want it at all the questions i have are on the mix down any help please i have to send a copy of this to a pretty big show tonightSoundcloud

[ResetTheAtari]

@fiveohh That's good for a first attempt at dnb, but the mix needs work. Bass overpowers the drum, and needs more top end on the drums to slice through. It's almost a bit squarepushery.

[offkey lickedbeatz]

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/bouncy-castle

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/alone- ... unfinished

[offkey lickedbeatz]

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/bouncy-castle

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/alone- ... unfinished

how do i get it so the player appears in the post instead of just a link?

[darigan]

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here is a tune i did for this dnb mc with like 3 days as a deadline
i played dnb for 10 Plus years but this was my first attempt at dnb its not where i want it at all the questions i have are on the mix down any help please i have to send a copy of this to a pretty big show tonightSoundcloud

Definitely like the idea behind it, but the mix is a bit raw good bit of work needed. The bass is quiet loud but it doesn't have much sub in it, ya want that low frequency energy. Drums are bit muffled could do with been brightened up or cut the mids a bit.

Some criticism on this track would be much appreciated
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Sounding really good

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a track i've been working on today, its pretty dark but i'm really feeling it. feedback would be appreciated thanks.

p.s. i've had a name change to ex-President (from the film point break). Feedback on that would be cool too.

Thanks, Ricky

Crazy vocal pitchin I like it, some of that vocal sounds fine, but some words sound off rhythmical & pitch wise and doesn't feel connected to the track, I'd probably just go back and rework that loop until it sits a bit better in the track.

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just made this will def leave feedback for who ever leaves some

Really cool melody, good vibes

Heres a track I'm working on at the moment. Thinking about scrapping it altogether and then rebuilding it but a good differently. I had a musical structure which I took apart half when through building it because I wanted to switch to a blues pentatonic scale so suite the FM Trumpet synth I made, At first I liked the way it is very off sounding (trumpet), but I dunno now it just kinda blobs along ever since I lost my original progression, I've reworked it a few times and it just keeps pissin me off. Took the hihats out recently as well cause I wasn't happy with them & haven't replaced them yet.
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Any thoughts welcome

[5-0-what]

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/bouncy-castle

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/alone- ... unfinished

if you look at the links at the top of the post window there is a sound cloud botten click it the copy and paste or drage the url from the tune in between the 2 sound clouds in post

how do i get it so the player appears in the post instead of just a link?

thanks for the input on the tune every body will give it a go

[tripwire22]

@fiveohh That's good for a first attempt at dnb, but the mix needs work. Bass overpowers the drum, and needs more top end on the drums to slice through. It's almost a bit squarepushery.

i actually agree this is very square push. and yeah once bass hits the kick is gone

[offkey lickedbeatz]

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/bouncy-castle

http://soundcloud.com/djoffkey-1/alone- ... unfinished

if you look at the links at the top of the post window there is a sound cloud botten click it the copy and paste or drage the url from the tune in between the 2 sound clouds in post

how do i get it so the player appears in the post instead of just a link?

thanks for the input on the tune every body will give it a go

cheers boss

[offkey lickedbeatz]

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Right there we go, i'm new to production so the mix downs etc arn't the best but any feedback or critisism is welcome no matter how negative. thanks

[germskiller]

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Track I've been working on for a few days

pretty minimal but the bass makes up for that!

Let me know what you think

[cigaro5676]

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this is my first dustep tune, been producing/djing/anything edm releated for around 5 months or so, i know it needs some work so its not a "finished track"

had a few others i have been working on, but that was before i knew anything about eq'ing and mixing/mastering

threw a little tempo change in at the end, trancy kinda feel to it, i think it added some flavor

anyways lemme know what you think, i'm here help and to get better

[cigaro5676]

@lickedbeatz

for the top tune
i'm loving the real big snare/clap, and the melody goofy and catchy, in a very good way

[offkey lickedbeatz]

@lickedbeatz

for the top tune
i'm loving the real big snare/clap, and the melody goofy and catchy, in a very good way

Thanks mate glad you enjoyed it

[tripwire22]

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i want to be on deep medi so bad

[ResetTheAtari]

@offkey Bouncy Castle is BIG mate! Well done

[Disco Nutter]

Pосted a couple of comments, so I think I can post one of mine now?

Here:

Disco Nutter - Warfare (WIP/snippet) [unsigned]
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I need to work a lot more on the mix though!

Jason

[ResetTheAtari]

That's a big tune mate, sounds very professional indeed.

[offkey lickedbeatz]

@offkey Bouncy Castle is BIG mate! Well done

Cheers mate, really enjoying your track too, drums are wicked

[Holda]

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a nice bit of constructive critisism, yes please

[marsstu]

recently been experiment with some differnt things this is something im playin about with atm

tried to make some dark electro vibe cross with a bit of filth

this is what its shapin up to be ...
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@ ISTURITE

like the progression of the song , and the idea , not to keen on the bell/beep , good idea but the sequence isnt that catchy
the bass is nice on it too , if not a bit loud

@ HOLDA

like the percussion , got a nice rhythm , dont like the vocal , like the synth though keeps the track runnin along nicely

@ DUBAHOLIX

the percussion is nice and so is the piano , but the drums are to much in the background and the piano is a bit to in your face ( but the keys are nice , ignore my shite technical terms lol) , the atmosphere with the little staticbeep is sick :

@ TRIPWIRE22

intro is sick , choir chord goin round n round is a real minfuk , drop's insane proper electro feel to it , just made me look at my track n feel embarrassed, really good work , any chance of a 320 ? or u lookin to release it ??