Dj Deltoid-The Groundfloor-Constructive Criticism appreciate

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The 320 Ver mp3 17 MB
Dj Deltoid - The Groundfloor

Here is that 128 version Mp3 7.1 MB
Dj Deltoid - The Groundfloor


Hey this is a track I have been working on for a bit but still don't think got my ears totally around mixing down dubstep styles.
I think most of it is sitting kinda nice but haven't had a chance to hear it on many other systems either, and I know my room has a bit of a bump in the bass region.

Any technical, creative and constructive criticism would be appreciated,

thanks in advance,