first dubstep attempt in reason - pointers/opinions please

[lyons238]

ok so iv had reason 4 and an axiom 25 for about a month now. i havent got much time to really get going with it because of work and school but i will this summer. anyway heres an intro and a loop of my first ever song on reason. and its dubstep ofc. anyways give me your opinions, any pointers, and where i should go with the rest of the song. thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tohiahzOgDI

[silentk]

Please post this in the feedback thread stickied at the top, but only after giving some feedback to others, dont get anything for nutin in this world dude

[lyons238]

why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

[kaiori breathe]

why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

[lyons238]

why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

seems like the right place to me. how bout dont post if u dont have anything useful to say. yes he informed me where to post for feedback but give me a break and post some feedback u fuckin n a z i s

[silentk]

wow, thats a nice attitude you got there mate

[lyons238]

wow, thats a nice attitude you got there mate

my attitude is fine thank you

[contakt321]

why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

Yes, this is the case. He isn't a douche, he is pointing you to the right place.

As you can imagine there are many folks like you just getting going, as such, this forum has created a dedicated section for folks in your position to get the feedback and help they need, and as such, minimize having an unending amount of threads like this one.

As a result, I think as you continue working, you will find this forum to be a wealth of knowledge and help with tons of amazing informative threads, filled w/ members with different advice, opinions and skills.

Welcome to the DSF!

[mks]

EZ nuh,
I think if you treat people with respect you will find most on here are generally pretty nice. There reason there is a separate thread for this is if everyone posted their new tunes (or works in progress) in the main production forum, it would get really cluttered really fast. Simple as that.

[kaiori breathe]

why is it that most of the people i have encountered on this forum are douche bags. just say what u think when u hear it. if u want to give pointers then u can. not very hard..

He's not trying to be a douche bag, he's trying to help you by directing you to the right place.

seems like the right place to me. how bout dont post if u dont have anything useful to say. yes he informed me where to post for feedback but give me a break and post some feedback u fuckin n a z i s

I'd post feedback if this was in the right section you communist.

[lyons238]

ok well its already in the wrong place and now u guys are making this thread long for no reason and no help whatsoever. honestly i dont really care if its in the wrong place. i dont live on forums. im just looking for a little help. hopefully a non forum n a z i will stumble upon this thread and say something i find helpful haha

[jolly wailer]

here's a tip


jerky boyz samples and a bait triplet wobble = instant fail

[tripwire22]

love new guys

[contakt321]

honestly i dont really care if its in the wrong place

[palmer]

[lyons238]

here's a tip


jerky boyz samples and a bait triplet wobble = instant fail

ya im a noob...looking for constructive criticism...

[tripwire22]

Soundcloud

what u guys think of my 1st Dnb try

[kaiori breathe]

Soundcloud

what u guys think of my 1st Dnb try

I really like it man, nice use of pads, good breaks, sounds good so far, keep working on it.

[j_one]

^ DSF when a new member steps out of line.

[yoseph]

bad form coming in with an attitude like that. here's my advice anyway: this song is sort of awful. make a song with the lfo off, with the filter just half open. write a bassline worth listening to, then go back and automate only where it will -add- something rhythmically. your wobbles in this are fighting what there is of a groove. and do not sample the jerky boys. ever.
clean it up, simplify it and try again. and dont be a cock. =)