My 1st attemp to techno or house!

[thierry_le_dj]

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hey all this is my 1st attemp to making techno but am not sure if its sound's any good..
well am still not sure if i have the bass correctly pattern's?

anyway if anyone has the time can some one give me some feedback and point to what's what and what's not.

anyway thanks

[thierry_le_dj]

feed back please?

[Littlefoot]

honest feedback would not be to put up your first attempts on a forum of this nature, it leaves a potentially sour taste unless it's really amazing, try the production forum to be honest

[thierry_le_dj]

honest feedback would not be to put up your first attempts on a forum of this nature, it leaves a potentially sour taste unless it's really amazing, try the production forum to be honest

fair enough but i though the production section is mainly for dubstep not other genre's..

[thierry_le_dj]

anyway this is a new version
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