WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
@shanekenton - i like the ambient bits. i'd switch the drum beat up every 4 to 8 bars tho... keep the track bouncin... and the crunchier synth could do with a bit less distortion imo. good start tho... keep puttin in that work!
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Been asked to do an official remix to Circuit - Lets Headbang which if they like will be released on beatport/I-tunes etc alongside the original which is pretty fucking cool. Spent a few hours piecing together an intro, would be great to get some feedback so far. The bassline isn't final, tempted to keep the pattern and 'bounce' but add more in terms of notation and melody as it's pretty much only one note so far.
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Shanekenton - like the drums a lot in the intro, i'd use more than one hi-hat though. Keep the pattern, just mix up the hats and it'll make a world of difference. Bassline is very typical, but expected seeing you just got massive. Research and read the manual and you'll get a lot deeper into it!
Olux - Really nice, i like the reversed drums that hit, sick!
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Shanekenton - like the drums a lot in the intro, i'd use more than one hi-hat though. Keep the pattern, just mix up the hats and it'll make a world of difference. Bassline is very typical, but expected seeing you just got massive. Research and read the manual and you'll get a lot deeper into it!
Olux - Really nice, i like the reversed drums that hit, sick!
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Marshy - everything is spot on so far this is a merkers!!!! if this gets released str8 up buying it!!!!
Jasper vc - Absolutly disgisting track i emphasise the snare a tiny bit more loving it though!!!!
Heres mine called your mums an alchi!!
havent done an intro as such yet will work on that another time but yh tell me what you thibk so far!!!
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Jasper vc - Absolutly disgisting track i emphasise the snare a tiny bit more loving it though!!!!
Heres mine called your mums an alchi!!

havent done an intro as such yet will work on that another time but yh tell me what you thibk so far!!!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
@marshy sounding nice man, really like the intro melodies but yea i agree with what you said need to add more to the bassline to mix it a bit, sounding gd so far though!
@geeza liking the shuffley rhythm of the drums in this one, sounds good, could probably do with a couple of little changes to keep it interesting at the track goes on.
heres mine, i been making more future garage vibes recently so wanted to get back to some dubstep and came up with this, some nice synthy melodic sounds, feedback appreciated!Soundcloud
@geeza liking the shuffley rhythm of the drums in this one, sounds good, could probably do with a couple of little changes to keep it interesting at the track goes on.
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truekimbo2 wrote:sometimes i like to take dxm and make music. here is what i made today. critism welcome.
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I liked it. Its really different and has a real chill vibe to it. not overly elaborate and not too simply simplistic. the vocals in the background were kinda trippin me out trying to figure out what it was saying. it wasnt too quite it just blended in the track well enough. keep going with it. honestly its not something id want to play out but the vibe is really chill

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
How's everyone doing? Was pretty bored today and started this small project a couple of hours ago 
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@truekimbo2 - really chill man good work
Here is something i've been working on for a couple of hours!
any feedback welcome!
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Here is something i've been working on for a couple of hours!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
Thanks to everyone who liked the track! I'll message anyone who asks a link to the finished version, hopefull it gets a release alongside the original!
Jayzest- I'm pretty drunk right now but i'm loving it mate! Really enjoy the drums, the hi-hat pattern works great along with the kick and snare, it's like really slow garage? Like i've said before, i'd just make the hi-hat pattern involve a few different hits, keep the pattern though. They all sound open, get a few closed and replace a few and it'll work great.
Jayzest- I'm pretty drunk right now but i'm loving it mate! Really enjoy the drums, the hi-hat pattern works great along with the kick and snare, it's like really slow garage? Like i've said before, i'd just make the hi-hat pattern involve a few different hits, keep the pattern though. They all sound open, get a few closed and replace a few and it'll work great.
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I need some feedback on how this track flows up to this point?
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Geeza - It sounds a bit dull on my monitors. Layer and fill it out a little more.
kontigobeats - Nice sounds from the get go! Yea, this is nice! Maybe kickdrum could be brought out a bit more, but that's really a maybe.
Loud Flavor - Pretty crazy!
JayZest - Roll some highs off from those hihats. Your melodys are all really distant sounding, keep some sounds distand and some more upfront imo.
kontigobeats - Nice sounds from the get go! Yea, this is nice! Maybe kickdrum could be brought out a bit more, but that's really a maybe.
Loud Flavor - Pretty crazy!
JayZest - Roll some highs off from those hihats. Your melodys are all really distant sounding, keep some sounds distand and some more upfront imo.
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Real close to finishing this one ! but it needs something else, that's were you guys come in ! all feedback is appreciated a lot ! thanks 
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
i really like this track so far but that siren sound just takes over the whole tune in my opinion. good work otherwise though, nice bassline goin on too.
here's an update of a track i'm working on, spent all week tweaking and making sounds.
it's only the main 32 bars at the moment but i would really appreciate any feedback on the structure etc.
thanks a mill guys
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Craggle wrote:Real close to finishing this one ! but it needs something else, that's were you guys come in ! all feedback is appreciated a lot ! thanks
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here's an update of a track i'm working on, spent all week tweaking and making sounds.
it's only the main 32 bars at the moment but i would really appreciate any feedback on the structure etc.
thanks a mill guys
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@ marshy-sounds excellent,drums are really nice and it flows and sounds well,maybe a bit too long on the intro though,excellent work tho fella,be nice to hear it finished,btw the drop is sexual too,warrr..
@geeze- drums sound nice but could do with some variation,all the ideas are rite in this track,really feeling it,get it done
@filtroniks-sounds really good,not sure about the whole vocal but maybe just some parts,maybe do with abigger sub on it,sounds really good tho,fair play
My track,something a bit darker than usual,and literally knocked together today,shall return feedback to anyone who listens and comments.safe J
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@geeze- drums sound nice but could do with some variation,all the ideas are rite in this track,really feeling it,get it done
@filtroniks-sounds really good,not sure about the whole vocal but maybe just some parts,maybe do with abigger sub on it,sounds really good tho,fair play
My track,something a bit darker than usual,and literally knocked together today,shall return feedback to anyone who listens and comments.safe J
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Ok started this tune, happy with it so far, played it out and it went down really well, but i feel it needs something else just not quite sure what it is and i dont want to over do it, simples it what i really want...
So........... leave it or keep working on it?
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So........... leave it or keep working on it?
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@Marshy: Love the intro and it really builds nicely into the drop. Would grab this if it was forthcoming on wax.

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Cheers mate, all these kind words are appreciated! If it gets released alongside the original i think it'll be digital only. I'll let you know though!frank grimes jr. wrote:@Marshy: Love the intro and it really builds nicely into the drop. Would grab this if it was forthcoming on wax.
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leviticus wrote:Ok started this tune, happy with it so far, played it out and it went down really well, but i feel it needs something else just not quite sure what it is and i dont want to over do it, simples it what i really want...
So........... leave it or keep working on it?
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kinda reminds me of some benga styles i'd do some subtractive editing of the drums give it more breaks / drops / space liking the main synth tho seems like the velocity changes a bit when it goes higher dunno if thats from your eqing or what perhaps crompress it a bit to level it out
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010
@redjuan
i think the long intro suits it well, maybe boost some of the levels and add some ear catching incidentals,
the second half sounds almost finished to me, i love this simple bass+drums style (as long as all the samples are prime, which they are in this case)
@leviticus
the beats in this track are really well produced and catchy, but they get relentless after a while, i was really relieved when the slow bit started later on
sounds finished to me, or damn near. i feel odd giving feedback on this type of track, as i really don't know much about dancehall beats or this style.
definitely sat well with me by the end though.
here's a wip i threw together today. thinking i'm gonna do a few more hours work on automation and tweaks tomorrow, but here's what i got for now.
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i think the long intro suits it well, maybe boost some of the levels and add some ear catching incidentals,
the second half sounds almost finished to me, i love this simple bass+drums style (as long as all the samples are prime, which they are in this case)
@leviticus
the beats in this track are really well produced and catchy, but they get relentless after a while, i was really relieved when the slow bit started later on
sounds finished to me, or damn near. i feel odd giving feedback on this type of track, as i really don't know much about dancehall beats or this style.
definitely sat well with me by the end though.
here's a wip i threw together today. thinking i'm gonna do a few more hours work on automation and tweaks tomorrow, but here's what i got for now.
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