WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by streetxlite » Mon Jun 28, 2010 3:09 am

@tek_selekta

please, if you can, layer the organ sounds in this tune, i want them to pop. i love what i hear, but the drums just take over.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by mattlock » Mon Jun 28, 2010 6:12 am

streetxlite wrote:@redjuan

here's a wip i threw together today. thinking i'm gonna do a few more hours work on automation and tweaks tomorrow, but here's what i got for now.
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Liking the sound of this one!
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Here's something I have been playing around with:
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by JBE » Mon Jun 28, 2010 7:22 am

@Streetx: Really liking that G20 song. Got some great sounds there and everything fits pretty well. I think the wobble could use a little bit more punch though.

@Marshy: Sounds good so far. Definitely needs some extra notes in the bassline for sure cause that could get a bit boring to the ear after awhile.

@Kontigobeats: Excellent as always. Really liking that wobbling sub with that crazy strong melody. That mid reesy bass works well with the melodies as well. Good stuff.

@Loud Flavor: Sounding pretty good. It's got some nice dirty sounds. I think you should just dump that talking wobble completely. I don't think it really works with what you already have going. Sounds a bit forced when it's used.

@Jayzest: The melody just sounds weird in this. It doesn't really seem to make any sense to me. The drums are great though, and the percussive additions are really nice.

This is something I just started working on the other day. Still needs quite a bit of work. It's really just kind of a skeleton layout. I haven't done anything with sound fx or automation really.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by rekstep » Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:30 am

@ JBE
loving it man , very good work .. tho i was fiending for some kinda.. maybe a another higher lead layered over the top maybe some more fx just some more content yea


heres one ive been on for a day or so ..

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by jaydot » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:28 am

@Marshy: Nice so far, really uplifting, when the bassline gets more work and the whole thing is done it'll be a stormer.

@ascenzion: Catchy, but I'd have a break somewhere and have the hats and synth melody with maybe a different sound and then a second drop, promising start though

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:42 am

Thanks for the feedback so far on mine!
@JBE liking the intro pads they have a good sound to them and good use of fx on the drums there, feeling the track overall, i like how it builds up so the after the break the piano comes it, keeps the listener interested.
@rekstep not what id usually listen to but it had me moving and i can appreciate the production skills, good use of automation on the bass and i like the shuffle percussion shaker sounds! think you would need to add something later or some fx to keep it interesting as the track progress though, good stuff!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by ResetTheAtari » Mon Jun 28, 2010 12:25 pm

jaydot wrote:@Marshy: Nice so far, really uplifting, when the bassline gets more work and the whole thing is done it'll be a stormer.

@ascenzion: Catchy, but I'd have a break somewhere and have the hats and synth melody with maybe a different sound and then a second drop, promising start though

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by redjuan » Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:30 pm

@ JBE,that g20 tune is streetxlite's,you must have got mistakened lol

@streetx-cheers man glad you liked it,kind of out of my comfort zone as i like my tunes deep,but gona give it more work,shall check ur track as soon as man,im in the middle of movin house but will definetly do it before the end of the week,thanks for listening and commenting

anyone else who fancies a listen..feedback shall be returned to anyone who comments,thanks J

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by EraREdux » Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:49 pm

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by oscarhenson » Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:05 pm

@kontigobeats, really feeling the synths and everything. a really nice track. i feel the beat could maybe ping out a bit more, either just a levelling job or maybe EQ it a bit more but loving the flavour of it
@JBE, really just encouragement for you - that tune did it for me, such a nice vibe and really progressive, keep it up!


here's a couple of things i've been doing.. not by any means nearly finished, the mixdowns are all sloppy, they're not finished tunes yet and i havent got round to properly sorting the beats on any of them really.. they all need a lot more variation. but yeah, comments appreciated:
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by oscarhenson » Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:35 pm

@redjuan - fucking love the bass you've made there man, right up my street.. i especially loved the really quiet swells at the beginning and i was wishing you'd expand on those a bit further before you dropped the main section, maybe bring in a really delicate beat or something and expand on that section, cus that part is especially nice

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:14 pm

@facta thanks for the feedback man, yea i think the drums need to come out a bit more too, its not had a mixdown yet, gd to know people are liking it though!
liking your tracks, 4-21 - got a nice quite laid back vibe, but as you said yea needs a few little variations in there to keep it interesting, the sounds mesh well together though.
mothy-glow - again i like the sounds used in this one, really feeling the bleep effects actually! i like how they give it a kinda off beat rhythm, nice use of drums too, that clap fits it well. big up!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by a.paul » Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:14 pm

haven't been on here in a while, not sure why really.
been out of the loop in terms of production, no inspiration really.
but i quickly bounced this, have had it open since this the morning.
will give feedback soon to everyone else.
let me know what you think!
thanks alot
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by a.paul » Mon Jun 28, 2010 10:19 pm

@Mattlock really loving this tune, great vibes and stellar synth work!

@JBE liking the atmosphere a lot. the break sorta gives me chills. the keyboard drop is amazing cant wait to hear more man!

@Kontigobeats love the melody. cant wait to hear more, deff a big tune.

@Redjuan loving the percussion man, has a quest feel to it.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by thepolymerdrone » Tue Jun 29, 2010 12:55 am

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by jaydot » Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:15 am

@kontigo beats: Great melodies, big tune all round excpet fro the "busyness" of it, as someone says soime EQing to bring the beat out and that's a great tune in the making

@JBE: Again that will sound good once it's layered with something else....liking the Synkro/Burial feel to it and the ambient melodies... really nice. I'm going to favourite both tracks and follow as they're both sick. :)

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by spaceghost » Tue Jun 29, 2010 5:22 pm

Got two very different sounding ones from me.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by dddemain » Tue Jun 29, 2010 5:41 pm

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by redjuan » Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:00 pm

@ O.Henson,cheers man really glad you like it,twas a very rough copy of it i have to admit so hopefully the finished product will be a great deal better

@ LTUK-sounds good man except for that synth that comes in before the first breakdown wasnt feeling that,maybe add some delay onto that piano sample aswell,drums sound nice,maybe a touch more of percussion,sounds good though,just watch the timing of ur drops wasnt sure if you got the most out of the intro cos of ur timing perhaps..for lazy days

@ Jdot,not feeling that sample,try do something to it,makes the intro monatinus if im honest,could do with better kick and snare aswell,nice idea with the wobbles but your arrangement needs work,hope thats helpful,im just being honest :wink:

Another minimal dnb bit im workin on,very deep vibes,would love your thoughts on this

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by Bellend Sebastian » Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:06 pm

Seeking feedback, i'm migrating from mashup / breakcore and way too much set on making ridiculous or funny shit, all criticism would be nice. One thing though, i realised after uploading it that the volume on this track is way too low and, to be honest, i've been lazy about reuploading it, that's a bit of an easy non-issue though.

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