FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

[tripwire22]

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me and afghan but he did most of the work to be fair

[Mashinist]

YO PEEPS, CHECK OUT MY TRACKS @ HTTP://WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/MASHINIST ANY FEEDBACK WUD B GREAT. MUCH LOVE

[pain]

@ Venture: cool track like the rising sound in the beginning. For an intro maybe you could have the drums play for few bars and then have the rising sound start from the beginning. Also, I would have made the drop linked to the end of the rise instead of the hesitant fade out it does at .27. I would put a break at 1:37 too between the wobbles and the 2nd rise. Cool track and awesome sample.

Ight so I got rid of the compression on my mix and raised the gain like Basic said I should. Hopefully things sound better now.

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[djwc101]

MY FIRST DUBSTEP TUNE!! Takes a bit for it to build up to the drop...

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[ilv1]

@pain - the track sounds good... I love the ideas but personally i see the vocal sample a bit annoying... It's too high and too repetitive for my taste. Love the synth/bells/pad whatever it is that gives the track the melody.

@djwc101 - The track sounds ok... Idk but the sounds in the build up sound a bit too different from each other. Not similar enough (but it might be just me). The bass when the drop begins has a bit too much reverb in it... It's too spacey. And then at 3:05... Sounds like a totally different tune. And then another different tune... In my opinion there are too many sounds that are so different from each other. On the plus side, I like the vocals and the pads just before the drop and also the parts are good... They just don't fit well enough in the track as a whole.

[Mashinist]

HEY EVERYBODY, I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT IF U CUD CHECK OUT MY TRACKS AND LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PLZ, I DUNNO HOW 2 WACK THE TRACKS INTO THIS MSSGE TBH SO IF U WUDNT MIND CLICKING ON THE LINK AND HAVIN A BUTCHERS I'D B MOST GRATEFUL. SAAAAFE! HTTP://WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/MASHINIST

[hakka]

Near enough finished this monster!

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[wirez]

YO PEEPS, CHECK OUT MY TRACKS

No.

[wirez]

I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT IF U CUD CHECK OUT MY TRACKS AND LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PLZ,

Stop spamming, leave some feedback for other people and you'll get it back.

[tripwire22]

HEY EVERYBODY, I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT IF U CUD CHECK OUT MY TRACKS AND LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PLZ, I DUNNO HOW 2 WACK THE TRACKS INTO THIS MSSGE TBH SO IF U WUDNT MIND CLICKING ON THE LINK AND HAVIN A BUTCHERS I'D B MOST GRATEFUL. SAAAAFE! HTTP://WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/MASHINIST

ima fuckin cut you dog

[wirez]

ima fuckin cut you dog

[Joma]

pain - i like the intro, although it could with sohrtening a bit, gets a bit repetetive imo. didnt really feel drop but its not my kinda thing so dw. the variation is good and the mixdown is tidy.

hakka - im liking this, i think theres a bit too much reverb on the bassline when it drops, it sounds too metallic. also a little variation maybe on the second drop, otherwise good track

heres mine, been producin for about a year and finally plucked up the courage to show people. its not really dubstep but let me know what you think!
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peace

[hakka]

@ Joma - Cheers mate, will have a look at the reverb. Your track, not my thing but love the bleeps and the drums, nice solid track, reminds me of oldschool hip hop

[Mashinist]

I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT IF U CUD CHECK OUT MY TRACKS AND LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PLZ,

Stop spamming, leave some feedback for other people and you'll get it back.

i thought this thread was for feedback didnt realise i was spamming

[hakka]

I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT IF U CUD CHECK OUT MY TRACKS AND LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PLZ,

Stop spamming, leave some feedback for other people and you'll get it back.

i thought this thread was for feedback didnt realise i was spamming

It is for feedback, if you leave some for others first you will get instant feedback on your tracks.

[wirez]

I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT IF U CUD CHECK OUT MY TRACKS AND LEAVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PLZ,

Stop spamming, leave some feedback for other people and you'll get it back.

i thought this thread was for feedback didnt realise i was spamming

Lol, coming onto a thread saying the same thing twice without taking any notice of the rest of the thread and leaving YOUR MESSAGE IN CAPITALS, looks like spam to me

[ObsidiaMusic]

@djwc101 - It sounds great, although, for some reason, it doesn't seem to have much impact like I feel it should do. I think some of the bass sounds need to be tighter, and less 'spacey' or 'airy' ... I ain't sure how to describe it. Basically, it needs to be more 'in your face' I think. Keep it up!

I completed a new track called 'Blackout' today. Any feedback would be appreciated, as I didn't get any last time !

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[RAVE]

@ObsidiaMusic really fat basses. feelin the first drop a lot

my first piece of production in my sig, would like some feedback so I can go away and try improve things for my next project

[pain]

@Joma: definitely has that hiphop feel to it. Dig the video game sounding synths. Should look to get someone on that.

[eratik]

My very first production track. i dont know a hell of alot bout mixing and all that but gave it my best shot

any feedback is wanted.

cheers

http://soundcloud.com/eratik/lacerate-o ... unmastered